weinerdog
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It won't be long?Grounded for four weeks for a teenager that's forever. Matt's comment about Mrs. Chase not saying anything makes me wonder if there is another shoe to drop(Yeesh wrong expression)This is just conjecture but which sibling is older?Is one of them an accident?
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Interesting world Charlie went to.If I didn't know better I would think you took a mind altering drug and started writing.Can't wait for the conversation in the kitchen
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Real smooth explanation Donnie LOL. I didn't know You Tube had those kind of videos.I knew they had videos of Breast cancer and circumcisions but I would think video's of what Matt watched would not meet their guidelines.
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No THEY would reading your story and our comments so lets not give them any clues
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Actually now that I think about it ,It sounds like a Scooby-Doo episode "Damn Kids"
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If the thought was Lou might be gay because he's sitting alone that would be quite a reach .But it was still a cool thing to do and the fact that he was cute didn't hurt.
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I'll add another one that is probably not the case .The device and the piano note was caused by somebody who wants people to think the place is haunted. They want to buy the house for even a cheaper price. Maybe Mrs.Viggerol is in on it.OK I put it out there go ahead and call me a nut
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What a trip less then a month ago I read an article about a book called"Edison vs. Telsa: The Battle Over Their Last Invention".Edison had been a skeptic about communicating with spirits but near the end of his life changed his thinking he talked about inventing a spirit phone. Hey if the whole house is an antenna using old fashioned TV signals I bet if the local NFL game was blacked out they could pick up an signal from way out of town.Forgive me I'm babbling.
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In a small town like that you can still see that.Still it was a great gesture
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Well it looks like Matt's dad is cool with things That's huge(forgive the expression)Are they going to try to be discreet at school?Matt's Dad and Angie have said they are obvious so they might not be able to pull if off if that's what they try
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Ghost hunter classic stuff.I saw that this chapter had only 2,877 words to it so I figured this is the calm before the storm. So the ghost hunter drives a woody.That term is in the song "Surf City" by Jan and Dean.I'm surprised I haven't heard that pun you used more often.My guess is somebody named Horace L. Wingspanner wasn't a surfer
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Hope, Expectations, and the Football Star
weinerdog commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Hope, Expectations, and the Football Star
Glad things are better for you and you're working.BTW awesome thing you're doing being in that testing group for Co-vid. I got to thinking about Jaime's situation .He had one brother die in the military an another become mentally disabled.I'm thinking of the saving Private Ryan rule I know one brother is still alive but I have to think given these circumstances the military should only have him as a support troop and not see any combat.I don't know if they have a policy about that but they should. Now on the the fun stuff -
That's what I'm thinking if the house loves them back then there's no conflict and thus no story. That White Owl mac n chess sounded great. Small dogs are said to be good with litter boxes but not big dogs so much. But Moped a Lab and they are suppose be smart
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Wow Angie has a big mouth dosen't she.I guess by the way Dave reacted to their hug he's has no idea about either Matt or Donnie
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I don't quite know what to make of this chapter yet is the flashback Rick had with his Mother suppose to tell us why Rick stayed in town ?That line about taking care of his Father and him needing supervision seems to say that. Did Rick make this canoe route to see the Pianist? If he did what's going to happen if he's seen ?
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Well so far so good but I have a nagging feeling what's the catch?If this place was in California Annie would be wiped out by the property tax.I hope she has some good investments.Sorry to bore you all with that stuff.Now to wait for the good scary stuff I guess.
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I wish I had a friend like Donnie to teach me like that.Your Prologue mentioned how will everyone react.So far everyone we met seems cool maybe Dave could be a little self centered. We'll see how things develop
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A lot more tragic events in this story then what we are used to from you.Still very well done.You said this was a halloween story I thought your story "The Ghost" would qualify for that.Some authors on this site do a halloween story this time of year well nothing cheap about you we get two halloween stories.
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"And now you want to go and house sit for Ricky's cousin? Where's the adventure in that?" As soon as Kippy said that I knew something is going to happen there.Otherwise this would just a be a boring chapter in a boring story and you don't do those.It's sort of like when I watch a TV series and the main character is in a life and death situation,I know he or she isn't going to die there would be no show next week.As far as this story being Co-vid free all these aliens in Charlie Boone's universe have it all figured out already
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The light attendance at the service told me that maybe the dad's bigotry made itself apparent to his associates.He doesn't seem smart enough to realize that his approach may mean Emily and Gene won't be in his life plus possible future grand kids how pathetic.It was cool that Mr.Cummings could tell Adrian a little about his grandfather.
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5 years ago for me.I think of her everyday and I know you do of yours also.
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At lot of people could not do what Adrian did with his Mom.I think @chris191070 is right that Adrian and his father won't reconcile.But one hope is his dad will realize how much more character his son has then he.
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Had it been me I would have taken the dog home but that's me.Remember last chapter when their Dad told Emily it wasn't her business?Well it wasn't his business either because the grand father funded Adrian's trust fund not him what a hypocrite.I wonder if Gene threaten him with going to the police.I hope we meet the grandfather.Lets all of us go get some of that chicken
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That detail about Adrian having to go to his room when company was visiting is unbelievable.They didn't know he was gay at the time so there were other nonsense issues.Three cheers for the siblings.Sounds like they weren't aware of the dynamics between the parents and Adrian the parents must have really been tight lipped.It's sort of a small cliffhanger here will "Dad" do what Emily asks.Don't worry Emily and Gene Paul's grandparents will be family to you.Adrian's and Paul Parents can have each other.
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Oh I think I have a good idea.But you might have been referring to something else.
