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Owen and Alex are starting to be a good looking couple.And Wayne is a damn good big brother.I don't believe in supernatural but maybe for this story that is the case.I had been thinking all these events were manipulated by a human .But how does one get a Puma with red guys yet to climb into their tree and how does Owen's window open from the outside?I don't have a theory for that so maybe something unnatural could be happening.
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I never heard the word auditing being used in this context.So accounting and law courses?Maybe Toby and Ron will be a gay version of Jeff and Clair.Now on to Italy needless to say Toby and Ron will hit up the pizza
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I live in San Diego I could call Rick pay for his travel from Wisconsin and I would still come out ahead.
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I know Jerry is a good friend and means well but he may be a little thick here.All these constant comments about Rick being alone I mean doesn't he know that can be a sensitive subject not just with Rick but with anybody.Has it occurred to Jerry that Rick might bat for the other team? Does Rick have a piano by any chance?That's one why he can meet a certain somebody .I had a piano teacher who also teached guitar maybe he could go that route just some thoughts. Are we going to see Marta again?I'm thinking apprentice and then Rick can leave the business to her. I know I'm a bit of an optimist.I'm not sure which lady is more odd Rita or Magda
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Great Chapter now Ron is calling him Uncle Jeff cool.I liked the line 'Don't think of the cost, your dad will be paying."
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I'm not sure what you thought I was thinking.He did mention his kids so I did think of that
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Good for Toby for the decision he made about not selling himself.While we all know the obvious reasons not to do that if some kid who's put in the same position Toby was does do that I don't judge them harshly there for the grace of God.I'm assuming there's a reason you have Jeff meeting Richard Ellsworth that should be interesting.BTW useless fact here there was former MLB pitcher with that name
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It must be a somewhat small school the office staff knew who Toby was if it was a regular size school that may not be the case.Of course when I was in HS the office staff knew me very well for reasons I won't get into here lol
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Couldn't find one will this do?
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🎊🎉🥇🎆🎵🎶. Did I miss any?
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Randy deserves to be dead for being felony stupid.After two bullets u-turn and hit him what did he think?That the third time a charm?DUH!!!!! Whatever you do don't tick off Tristan eh? So how many more enemies are left?
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WHAT!!!!!!!😱.Just kidding lol.
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As far as you know is the $750 mentioned would that be an accurate number?I guess it would depend on what state you're in.I can see a lot of people not being able to pay that what do they do then?Don't get me wrong the parents deserve it.Jeff had a really awesome dad so all his actions in this story are totally consistent. I just thought of this could Toby's parents show up at the hearing to try to undo the situation?Unrelated thought all your characters know their way around a kitchen how about about getting them all together for a huge pot luck lol.
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Needless to say Toby's parents must have violated some law when they kicked him out so I guess James would have them sign some documents clearing the way for Uncle Jeff to be named guardian in exchange for not being reported to the police. If I have something wrong I'm sure somebody here will tell me.I hope the poor excuse for parents don't raise a stink when they go get Toby's stuff.BTW Uncle Jeff already I love that.
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Great chapter.Only one small gripe. I know it's fiction but you should have made the year 2022 or 2024.I bet Margarat is a Cheeto supporter.You say the next chapter is going to be intense.Judging by you're standards of intense I'm scared.I don't take anti-anxiety meds but maybe I need to before reading the next chapter.Sorry @Wesley8890 I have to go somewhere I didn't have time to wait for you.
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A good friend of mine and I would have this recurring discussion.He had a very negative view of people who commit suicide and often used harsh language to describe them he said they were taking the "Easy way out".Now if he was talking about an evil person who did a lot of bad things and it was catching up to him and he didn't want to face the consequences of his action I would agree in that case.But there are so many other cases where that's just not true.My friend says "Easy way out" well whatever happen to a person that brings he or she to that point it could not have have been easy they had to be in lot of pain.This situation is a perfect example.BTW we don't know Clair's husband name yet do we?Looking forward to see how this develops
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There are something about these kind of stories that get to me whether it real life or a fiction story. I'm looking forward to this
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Then you're gonna love me.
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Andy and Rich showing up just in time for dessert classic.Thank you for another awesome story.Whatever you do next I'm sure will be great but a possible future story could be a story centered around Andy and Rich when they get older and pay it forward as the saying goes.They can still be in touch with James and Nels who would only be too glad to help out whatever they do to try to help people..Just a rambling thought.Thanks again
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Just found this and binged read all this today not as easy as it sounds Looooong chapters.But I like what I'm reading I'm hanging around.
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Excellent idea opening a gym.Having all the right equipment is over half the battle it should do well.Andy and Rich working there and getting free use of the place is awesome.
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Sounds like a great trip.When Alan mentioned people taking pictures of the house from the road I hope he meant these people were taking pictures of the scenery and not of the boys in the hot tub Alan wasn't clear about that
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The Blood / Just This Once
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in The Blood / Just This Once
Wow this dead crow and red eyes etc.that is freaky.I'm loving Alex a lot and I respect that he doesn't want to replace Owen in the band. Now I want to see how Owen will react if Alex and Ryan show up at the same time -
Another chapter and we still don't know much more but that's what a good mystery is.I'm going to guess that Zeke isn't law enforcement I've been wrong more then I'm right when I guess but I think if Zeke was law enforcement it would be revealed by now. Maybe he's been hired by a wealthy person who's relative was killed by this killer.We'll see If I look stupid later. Very disturbing that Tyler is holding on to that shard of glass. Very funny line"See not poisoned" "that's what you think"😄
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What a great trip. Three months on the road Alan and Cody must be at least 10-15 pounds heavier with all that road food. The kids not so much
