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Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Doha commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
I think Natasha is going to have two heart attacks. Firstly that she has missed a title and a pot of money; and secondly, that Benjamin is gay. Martin is going to have his hands full. -
Turmoil Chapter 4 – decisions and revelations
Doha commented on Paladin's story chapter in Turmoil Chapter 4 – decisions and revelations
The story is moving at a swift pace and Martin seems to have come to terms with the changes in his life. Of course this changes the future for his children too as business, estate and title will ultimately move to his eldest son. -
Simon and Rick became a swiftly assembled item and Martin is still enjoying amazing orgasms. So there is a title involved. Hmmm. 🤔 how senior will it be I wonder.
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Turmoil Chapter 2 – London and a helping hand
Doha commented on Paladin's story chapter in Turmoil Chapter 2 – London and a helping hand
Right so the mystery is resolved and now Martin has a win-win decision to make. The handjobs were a great relaxer although Martin is showing himself to be a bit wimpy. I hope he toughens up a bit. -
Really enjoyed the mystery of this opening chapter and the hilarious responses. Let’s see what the posh lawyers want with Martin.
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A fantastic chapter. As @Charles26 has said, Cian is commanding and caring at the same time, and Evan is finding this a secure space to be. I wonder what decision Aoife will make.
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Cyan is not a conversationalist but he has Evan eating out the palm of his hand. And strange as it may seem, Evan is respected and held and he likes that.
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An intense and intriguing first chapter! Steering wheels and brakes make for an interesting way to describe what might become a relationship.
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Agreed @Bft the men in this family are overpowered by a manipulative mother and wife.
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A very intriguing start. Looking forward to reading more.
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Now I do love a good conspiracy theory and if it includes the Knights Templar I’m even more fascinated. Lawrence may have stepped into something bigger than the death / murder of a Veridien pupil. Let’s see how this pans out.
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The ease that now exist between Neil and Alex is marvellous and that same ease is extending to Margaret and Charlie as well. This is becoming a very well functioning chosen family.
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A wonderful evening where everybody is satisfied and content. 😌
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And now that I’ve caught up I have to wait. 🤣 loving this story!
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It’s bound to happen and I’m probably going to cry 🫣
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The face of that young man killed in combat will stay with Kent forever.
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Randy is becoming to Kent what Ken was. Always there, always ready. And the reverse is also true.
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The next few weeks will change these men in ways that can neither be measured nor fully explained.
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And it begins. The live or die moments.
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I get that totally. Feels exactly the same for me despite it being nearly 40 years ago!
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Between Kent and Randy they seem to have a sense of what needs doing, now they will learn to present it so that others realise it too.
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Being assigned to the same battalion is brilliant news. I’m guessing that their instinctive team work has been noted and as a result, they are being kept as a unit.
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That first visit home after 3 months of intense training is totally discombobulating! Let’s see how Kent does.
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My stars said I would win the lottery two weeks ago so I bought $50 worth of tickets and won $4.70. 🙌🏼🎖️
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