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Wonderful and great detailed story. This story brought me back to a special time in my life as well. One that ended too suddenly. This story did bring tears to my eyes once again. The special one who had become a part of me and had so much charm and energy was taken so quickly from me by someone who was not sober enough to know what he had done. Thank you for the energy you put into writing such a great and revealing story. There are many stories that reflect of so many others lifes and loves. But some just reach inside of you and give you that moment of peace and love. Thank you for me and for so many others who can relate.
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It is so wonderful to see everyone pulling together for Randy and his mother. It is always nice when a plan comes together for everyone. I hopw Tim and Stephen stay there if they can to continue their college degrees. I am sure Randy would be thirlled to have two big brothers around.
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Great chapter! Noah was in a very bad place when Mr.Landry became armed. Noah I am sure was drawn towards Mr. Lanry lookin at his as a fatherly figure and had been doing him a service that was going to help Landry and the business, or so Noah was thinking. I know when a weapon is pointed at you. Many things go through you mind. But fortunately Noah and the need for self preservation to run, but nearly failed to to even that. The "fight or flight mechanisem has saved counless individuals from those who want to do harm. Also in Noahs favor was Mr. Landry is not nearly as fast and mobile at was Noah. I think Seth also had a moment in which he was torn about helping Noah or just letting Noah come back. When there is an incident as this happening, it is not uncommon for those who are close to the problem, quite often are not able to give much information to 911. Being on the receiving end of many of those calls can get your own heart beating somewhat faster as well. The 911 operators are the ones who are at the scene of every call before help arrives. Those operators hear and can see through the receiver what is happening. Keeping these types of callers able to give you even the smallest of information can be diffuclt. Seth should I believe will finally realize thaat he did to the correct thing and he did save Noah. As Seth is beginning to feel the need to comfort his boyfriend and help him though his own trauma will also help Seth deal with his own problem. Both Seth and Noah seem to be dealing with nearly the same type to trauma. Maybe Seth will be able to find his way through the darkness that he has had and be able to help Noah. I am hoping the next chapter will give us that perspective. Difficult to write about things as this unless you have seen or been a part of something like this. Wonderful writing, getting the feeling of what happened to the readers. Lets hope Noah begins to recover as does Seth after such trauma for them both . Waiting for the next chapter .
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I am thinking that Nathan's problem is more with daddy than the drug issue. I have a feeling the picture that Jason found in the magazine of Nathan posing may have something to do with the drug issue. Daddy does not like having public attention drawn to him that involves his name and company. Nathan will be back I am also hopeing if not for the sake of Jason but for himself as well. Jason is going to discover the story behind the photo he has of Nathan, maybe from Nathan himself will tell Jason. Jason also need to grow a pair and deal with what he is going through hiding from his own family. I think parents are more in tune with their children than the young ones realize. Jason must be able to deal with himself and his parents sooner or later. He seems to be a nice young man, but is still not sure where he wants to land. I think he will find out more about himself with the help of Nathan, when he returns. I enjoy this story very much. Aiden is also not complelely out of picture yet as well. Interesting to see what the coming chapters will bring us. Thank you for your hard work. Tough story to keep thinking about.
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With Matt and the sad saga he has lived. His family sounds to be even worse that what Matt has gone through. Parents throwing their chiidren away because they are not "normal", has always gotten the hair on the back of my neck in a tangle. Makes you want to just walk up to some of them and tell them to are not fit to have children when they treat them as trash. I hope Matt inheritance from Uncle Teddy will be put to good use. I look for him and Trent to be married. The article about Matts seems to be getting a lot of attention as well. Suppose there is a book deal or several that may pop up and add to his funding. It would be great if he used some of his newly aquired funds to help the shelter and for the other kids there Maybe he will get a degree in education and/or do public speaking in schools across the country. Now that would be a wonderful way for Matt to get his story out to those that may need it by doing so in person. That would be a powerful way to spred the word and the horror these children of all ages experience without need. I do look for some good things to show up with Matt and Trent. Two peas of a similar pod so to speak. Wonderful and powerfull story. Me thinks!!
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It is very refreshing to see Tim and Stephen step up to help a mother and her son. I have seen too many of these type things and it truely breaks your heart to have to leave hoping that family services will do their part. Randy seems to be doing much better in school with the help of Stephen and TIm. But also a thanks to Stephen's grandfather as well for a lot of what is happening for Randy and his mother. I can only hope that she is able to recover to see Randy graduate from school and possibly go on to college. Tim and Stephen have become quite a couple themselves. Tim seems to enjoy Stephen staying with him and "filling him up " when he stays. Since Tim studying to be an attorney, he should be able to have paperwork either finished or nearly finished to take care of Randy in the event of someting not so pleasant happening to his Mother. We can all hope she recovers. I still wonder about Johnny as well. Just to drop out of the picture totally seems odd to me. Maybe he will show up again at some point and reunite with Tim and Stephen. The winner in my book is Randy. WIth Tim and Stephen a very close second. Great book. Thanks
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We can all hope that Brad does have a major anger fit when Gary and his goons show themselves inside Keller Hall. With Brad and his feelings and developing closeness to the other residents in Keller Hall , Brad could very well be the hero here. There are too many residents within Keller Hall that Gary and his goons would not be very kind to. The fact Beau did not get any answers to any of his fellow residents, it looks like Gary may already be putting his mislaid plan into action. Beau should have enough though about not running right into the Hall and into Gary's arms. I forsee some very nasty results between Gay and Brad. Who knows, maybe Sammy will rally some unseen friends to assist. It is always nice to see friends helping friends in their time of need. I am wishing everyone will be safe and be witness to the hopeful actions of Brad defending his new friends at the Hall. Would be nice to hear that Gary and his goons got their heads aquainted to their asses through the actions of Brad. Go Brad. Bring on the nex chapters. I will need more popcorn as well.
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So, we have what looks to be another attempt at gaining access to Keller Hall. My thought is when Morris asked if there were a key so he could enter Keller Hall late at night to stay. And Beau felt something was odd. Why did Beau and Brad consider just having Morris call them when he was outside the entrance to the Hall. Everyone was aware of Gary's plot to take over the Hall. Seems as thought Gary may have gotten or forced Morris to be a part of his plan. Morris "lost" his cell phone the night before at a party. Was Gary at this same party? Gary I am thinking is also behind this thought of Morris having gotten Robin pregnant. I think something is really fishy here and not the Thanksgiving dinner. Gary pretty much has free run of the campus. He seems to be able to rape anyone he wants, and Gary wants Beau badly. I wonder if Robin is really pregnant? Maybe she is but from Gary? She may be working with Gary to prevent getting raped. What better plan by Gary than to use others that Beau knows, using them to gain access to Keller hall. I think Gary has Morris's phone and used it to contact Beau. Gary can get access to Keller Hall by a key left for him outside the door. It is going to be very interesting to see what transpires when Beau. Will Sammy go with Beau to Keller Hall? Will Sammy go with Beau the Keller Hall? The next couple of chapters are going to be very revealing to part of Gay's master plan. I hope everyone at Keller Hall is going to be safe? Depending on how many of his 'goon" squad is with him. Brad can be an unknown here. If Brad is having one of his spells, I hope that Gary experiences just what is coming to him.
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Great chapter. Yes there are individuals in this world that do throw away those who do not fit into a certain mindset they have. When a mother who is so sick and with a young man who is also struggling to help his mother. There are others who have compassion and feel the need to lend assistance as much as they can. Stephen appears to be one on these people who has a heart and emotions, as well as a family member who also seems to as well. Tim is also seeing this before his own eyes and now has Stephen as his live in lover. Tim and Stephen now living together will they also have Randy as a little brother or will Randy become a part of what Tim and Randy are to each other. Interesting chapter. I like the compassion of Stephen, and as well as his grandfather. Sounds like a good family with tight bonds. So will Tim and Stephen be as close. Will Randy become a part of this little group of young lovers? I guess we will need to ready and hope. Thank you for showing there is good in the world when it is needed.
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What a quickly changing of personality for Mr. Landry. Surely he had to had known about all of the funds from the business being short all of the time. I am suspecting he knew all along what was happening. He just used Noah I think. We really do not know how badly injured Noah is actually. Bullets has a strange knack of finding the way inside the human body,that most do even consider. What about the super, super angry man in the truck. What of Seth. I am sure he heard the gunshots. Did Seth call for help? Where is Seth now? Noah did not see him before being taken to the ambulance. Sure is a kicker of a chapter. Such a subtle way of ruining a good evening. I have concerns are for Seth during this attempted murder of Noah. Seth is the unknown as to is childhood and abuse he received. How is he going to deal with this sudden act of rage from Noah's former employer. Did he make a move to stop Mr. Landry? We will need to read the next chaper to discover what may be a shock to us all with the outcome of this execution attempt on Noah.
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So now Randy comes into the mix here. Johnny is off doing pro football, but I am thinking he will be back into the picture again. Tim seems to be happy as the group go for sex. Everyone enjoys his pleasures the have with him. But with the addition of Randy, suddenly showing up along the path that Tim and Stephen take on their runs. Why now? There must be a connection with Randy possible? Stephen want to be seen as someone that other homeless individuals are wearing. Onward into the adventures of Tim, and his merry men. Let us hope Stephen will be able to explain about Randy a little better.
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OK, now Tim has been by most definitions raped, by Jonny, without so much as a get the hell out. To where now Tim is involved in a threesome with Jonny and Stephen . Not just once, but 3-4 times during the night as all three were "sleeping" in Tim's bed. So now we have Johnny who is on the football team, and Stephen who is a computer "tech". Tim now has a reputaion as an "easy" lay. I am thinking Tim should begin to charge a fee for his services to help pay for his college. I think Johnny is going to be providing Tim, with more often threesomes with other members of the football team. They could have a Tim be the team mascot. Wow, what a deal. What will Stephen bring to the Tim bedroom next? Not to mention Albert as well. Plus the unknown renter in the other apartment. How this unknown renter has yet to be infolved with the Mrs, Kenner's house of sex. I will be waiting to see what Mrs. Kenner has to offer Tim. Maybe a grandson that suddenly appears as well? Bring on the next chapters, Do we need a calculator to keep track of the guys "come" to visti Time? I enjoyed this chapter so I am thinking the next chapters will be intoducing many more to Tims bed. TIme will tell what happens next.
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Sounds as though Jonny is ripe for serial rapist of the week. Tim begin to get his mind off of Donnie and pay attention to who and what is going on around him. You would think that Tim doing all of the labor around the outside of the house he would be seeing the other boys at some point. Either this or Tim is just enjoying the sex he is having and does not even want to lock his door. No wonder things like this did not happen to me when I was younger and living on my own. But then I locked my door at night. I guess your never too old to learn something new. Interesting to see what is going to happen to Tim in the next few chapters.
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Tim is sure preoccupied with Donnie and for Mrs. Kenner to pick up on his friendship and loss of him was extremely helpful for Tim. Will Mrs. Kenner become a grandmother type for Tim? It looks as though she may. Now with Johnny with such wonderful hands and fingers. Maybe the goat milking experience Tim has will be expanding new feelings for him. Maybe Johnny will introduce Tim to other members of the football team for a little other experience. Only time will tell.
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Well, lets see what Mrs. Kenner's hospitality will bring to the new kid in the house. Will Timothy be in for a good experience, maybe a possible twist that Mrs. Kenner has in mind. Interesting to find out.
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Good old dependable serial rapists. That is what Gary is and he is using the families money and infulence to get his victims who are trapped on campus. If the administration of the college is in on this horrible "upstanding piece of crap named Gary Gaston". It is looking more as though Gary is the monster here at this University. Brad I am sure is also near where Beau is and can see and hear everything that Gary is talking about. I can only hope that Gary and his thugs end up getting their fair share of paybacks in the form that they themselve have given out. I think that would be very interesting to read all about. Brad is watching Beau and has said he will protect him. I have a feeling that Brad is in the process of planning his own protection plan for Beau. Wonderful chapter has brought more intense actions to the story. I hope the next chapter(s) are just as intense. Thank you for a wonderful and suspensful story.
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Jason's life has suddenly changed once again. Was Nathan sent to prison for drugs? Is Nathan's father telling Jason the real story? Sometimes powerful people or those who want to think they are powerful do things the normal and honest person would not think of doing. Jason knows that Nathan has his picture in the adult magazine. So is this the story behind Nathan making gay movies? Maybe daddy has a secret of his own as well. I think daddy knows about Nathan and his movie making. He is afraid that this little family secret will get unleashed and Mr. Brown will not be so powerful any longer. Will have to see what happens there. Aiden going to Austrailia seems just somewhat out of place. He has found his old school mate the one he bullied in school, but now has feeling for Jason as a close friend. I think the going away meeting will turn into some more. Jason is having a very bad situation that may all come together at once. This chapter did speed things up and I like this. The suspense is now building and we will be waiting for the coming chapters for the direction Jason, Nathan and Aiden end up taking. Wonderful mixture of love, guilt, passion, and sex all mixed together. What more can one ask for???
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Grief does have many complicated ways of seeking to undo friendships. It was refreshing to see those who consider all in Keller Hall as friends come to gether and be there at the side of Min and grief wiith him. Friends coming together when one of the group is not able to feel complete will soften the loss for those in their time of solidarity. Each of them was there for Min in their own way to show support or Min. Those friends are also greiving with Min but all in different ways.
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All is well with the world, except in the house of the mother who seems to be an easy lay. The father who gets drunk and does coke and lets his boss slide right into him and give Alan a part of his own DNA. Then there is Jake who is now with Ethan in Egypt for now any way. Cody is going to get back with Luke in a few months. Then here comes Kit into the picture again with Cody. Cody is not totally free of being a part of the drama as well. Then Trevor giving Jake $25,ooo dollars. For being a good boy?? Or being man enough to understand that Trevor is his father. Then Ethan who is a nervous young man that Jake can see it as well. So is Ethan really out of the woods now and screwing Jake everytime one of them takes a deep breath?? Jake's mother getting therapy for her deeds and father sleeping on the couch and working still, for Trevor I assume??? I can see another book coming and there are a few ways it could head. Ethan and Jake and the reason that Ethan is so jumpy. Maybe they will have an adventure all their own. Or, Cody and Luke with Kit and Callum maybe a foursome?? Maybe Ethen and Cody will connect with Callum. There could be an direction with Trevor and Alan that could be something thrown in for a twist. I think if there is book 3, Ethan and Jake will leave Egypt and come back to the US. I think Trevor will know just what to do and offer both boys a job. What better than to young men who can travel around the world and also be working for the CIA or MI6. Just two young men enjoying the sights and sounds of their love making and spying on who is needed to be watched. Wow, JM, you could end up with material for lets say another 5 or six more books. I am ready to read. Purity also was great read for me as well. So far I can say i do enjoy your writing and how you come up with all of the small twists and deceptions is fantastic. I am ready for more.
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I have thought Jason was just a little more intellegent than what he is coming off as in this story. For someone who has feelings for Nathan and not just telling him how he feels, seems just a little on the whimpy side. Jason has heard Natan and his father having a heated discussion about himself, why did he not ask Nathan what his father wanted. Nathan needs to grow a set and speak his mind or at least defend the one he is in love with. Maybe Jason should go and have a nice heart to heart talk with Nathan"s father and try to find out what is so terrible about Nathan. Maybe Jason should just tell Nathans father how he feels about his love for Natan. Let the truth slap Nathans father in his face. But then doing so will open Jason up to his family finding out about his being gay. What about Aiden? What is Jason going to do about this new "friend". Will Jason continue to feel as though he is cheating on Nathan if he and Aiden meet again? I am beginning to think that Jason is just wants to have gay sex but with only the ones he feels are worthy of him. I may be wrong here, but Jason has had some other guys that seem to fancy him. I still think Jason needs to get his temper and his mind connected to his heart and his brain. Start telling Nathan what he wants and figure out what he wants with Aiden. Or will Jason continue down his path of woe is me attitude? It will be interesting to see what next happens with Nathan and with Jason. Aiden still is not sure what he wants as well. Maybe the three of them should get together and have a hot sexual meeting. Who knows what would result from something as that? Maybe there is even another young man just around the next corner or the next bus ride for Jason. Only the next chapter(s) will let us all know. Thanks for a good and fasinating story.
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A Family Beyond Comprehension
bottomguy commented on James Matthews's story chapter in A Family Beyond Comprehension
Goodness alive man!!! What a chapter to wake up the sleepy eyed reader,(not me either). The pictures of Alan that Colin put on the table and told Jake to look at them. Jake seemed to become nearly sick after looking at the pictures of Alan. What did those pictures show? Was Alan really gay? Or were the pictures of him being used by other members of the organization he works for. Maybe someone younger like around Jake's age? WIll be very interesting to find out what the pictures are of. Cody saw the pictures and it appears that they shocked him as well. Maybe Alan was the one being used in the pictures? WOW, how interesting would that be!! The Cody appears and ends drops Colin to the floor dropping the gun. And the Police are knocking on the door. What will happen next? Are those the "real" Police, or did Trevor send them? Does Trevor know about Alan's picture situation? I am thinking he does know. What devious things will will come out in the next chapter? Cody being shocked with seeing the pictures, how is he going to react when the "Police" come into the house? Will Cody pick up the pictures soon enough the police do not find them? When is Trevor going to show up? I do think Trevor knows that Colin was coming to the house. What a turn of events we have here. Alan is not what he pretends to be. Jake's mother was enjoying the men Alan worked with. Jake's real father is Trevor. Cody was thrown out of his home by the parents when they learned he was gay. So what secrets are still waiting for us to learn about Ethan? Surely he must also have some hidden secrets as well. This chapter definately changed the flow of the story. So will Trevor show up to sort this all out for the family? Or will he show up and have another bomb to drop on all of them? I am going to enjoy the next chapter, hoping that is there comes an explaination of what just happened. Or will it take several chapters to unravel all of what has taken place? Onward to the next chapter and of course those beyond as well. Love this story so much. LOVE IT !! -
Oh to be in Levi's shoes so to speak. I think Levi is in for a wonderful education and possibly a more intimate education along the way. Is this possible? I can also understand what Levi is wondering, what the "H" what has just happened? This is going to be something to keep reading. Merlin being a part of this story, will surely be wonderful. There seems to be a little hint of trouble with a few of the characters. Bastion is either having some thoughts about Levi or just plain mixed up. I will love to find out which.
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WOW, does not say enough about this chapter. I had forgotten all about Trevor. So now is looks like Jake's parents are not to be trusted as all. Cody has been in contact with Luke and things he has been giving information to the Police. So Cody must has some sort of thought about what he has been doing to keep Jake from leaving? Will Cody go back to Luke who seems to be the only person that has made Cody happy? I had thought that Jake and Cody would drift apart as partners, but this chapter has not only made that drifting happen but has turned it into a coming tidal wave. I do feel badly for Cody, but he still has a home and I do think he will become a very welcome addition to Jake's parents, now that Jake seems to be heading away from them and on to Egypt and a life with Ethan. Seems to anyway???? If I were Jake, I would as "daddy" to get Cody to America to be with Luke. I would then go home to be as calm as possible. Get Cody into contact with Trevor. Before I leave to fly to Ethan. Leave a letter behind and speak my mind. Leave without so much as a goodbye or even a wave back. The parents may just continue with Cody and consider him then as an adopted family member. That is if Cody does not end up with Luke. A tangled web of love, sex, mystery, supense and undercover spying that has yet to be explained. Each chapter is a story in itself. Nothing like being young, hot and horny all the time, be involved in a government coverup, have a lover, lose a lover, find a great love and lose that love. Boy, I guy needs to have a note pad when reading your stories James. Taking notes would be a pain though, I would rather just read and picture what i read in my mind. It is going to be very interesting in the next chapter. I wil be on pins and needles waiting to read the return of Jake to his home. I would talk to each of his parents individually as well as Cody. I love good suspense stories along with mystery added. But James, you have definately gotten my attention in your stories. Great work . Great brain matter put into overtime as well. I am waiting for the next chapter(s). Or another book ?!
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GREAT chapter! Jake arrested and taken away for questioning by the police, withour a lawyer present even after Jake asked for one to be there. Now Cody is involved giving information to the police as well. Like Jake said after he was back home and with Cody in the bedroom. Can't trust anyone! I see where Jake feels that as well. So had Ethan really left Jake behind, or is this Tevor who suddenly appears and Jake knows him. Where did this Trevor come from. Is he working to help Ethan? Now we have the picture that Jake received in the mail. Then placing it on his mothers dresser where she will find it. Is Jake's mother a part of this CIA operation as well. Maybe a sleeper agent working with Colin? I love how this story has suddenly become a teenage 007 type senario. Hot digity, lets keep reading more of this fantasic and strange chain of events that keep turning us readers around in our swivel reading chairs.
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The Developing Dilemma
bottomguy commented on James Matthews's story chapter in The Developing Dilemma
I have been giving more thought to this story. Let us just imagine the move by Allen and his family to America, was planned long before they moved there. The home that was suddenly available to be bought for Jake and his family to move into. All fresh and new. And better yet with Ethan so close and Luke as well. Maybe this is just too good to be true. Ethan and Jake becoming together as quickly as they did and then there is Cody who is told to get himself to the airport and come over to be part of Jake's family. Is the sudden arrival of Cody and his meeting Luke, is what moved the CIA to change plans for what they are planning? Is Ethan really an innocent player in this CIA gameplan? Allen new this move was going to take place before Cody found out about the phone converstation he discovered and talked to Jake about it. Lets just suppose that everything so far that we have been reading was all some sort of CIA plan for something we have yet to discover. How can so many things change in so little time if it had not been planned to take place. Maybe not the way it was planned to pan out, but still getting done what is needed for who knows what will happen when we read the final chapter. How will these teen boys react when they discover they all have been used for someone's under the table spy program by the CIA.? Can something like this be happening to Ethan, Jake, Cody and Luke? It is going to be good reading to find out. I am on board for this story to play out and surprise more of your readers. Thanks again.
