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So Jake's father has suddenly arrived at the hotel where Ethan and Jake are discovering each other again. My questions is who is with Jake's father at the hotel? Are there other CIA agents also there and just waiting for the boys to sudddenly try to leave. Ethan has already mentioned his father is not himself. So is that a put on by his father or is his actions a part of some sort of mind trainning that has been conducted. Suspense fills the air around this story. Much to my happiness as well. Ethans story about how everything that happened sounds plausable to Jake, but I can also see Jake at some point doing some more indepth soul searching or even doing some checking of his own. The money from his mother's death does sound like something that would have taken place. But why is Ethan's father trying to hide the money from Ethan? There is more going on here than the reader has yet to find out. Will Jake find a way to be with Ethan and get away from the hotel without being caught by the CIA? My bet is yes they will find a way to get out of the hotel together. After that I am of the opinion, Luke is going to be involved in this story more that I had thought. He also was left behind by Cody. Will Luke and Cody also be joined together as well. I love this story. I enjoy the plot and I just will not be happy until the chapters are comeing everyday. (HINT< HINT). Thank you once again for a great story and wonderful how the emotions are given as to how the boys are feeling. Stress is also a factor here as well. So the story move forward. A little thought here. Why did Ethan register with the name he had before the accident. Is that something he thougt would help Jake locate him. Or is it that Ethan is also messed up as well? Something is not right here. There is more to this meeting with Ethan and Jake. I want to find out, so lets keep reading and enjoying such a great story and adventure into the world of the unknown.

WOW!!! I enjoy suspense, action, undercover, mysteries, and science fiction. These last few chapters have made my reading your story about Jake, Cody, Luke and Ethan all the more interesting and must read more. Thank you for your talent in writing. I did not get any feeling or idea that something this shady and sinister could happen. Now it is going to be even more interesting what is going to take place in the coming chapters. Will Colin and Alan become the main characters in something more sinister now the CIA is in the foreground? Cody unfortunately is the person who is getting the short end of the stick, so to speak. Jake and Luke as well as Ethan are all being used to what end. I think there may be something coming in future chapters that will be even more shocking. I kind of have a few thoughts about who and what could happen, But I am going to just keep reading and be thorughly addicted to this story. Many thanks to you.

Finally Jason is having to face his own fear and his heart. Progress can be very frightening at times to some of us. Since it appears that Nathan is also Gay. It is going to be interesting how the friendship that there is with the two of them progresses. Unless Aiden is the rock that makes the ripples in the calm waters a little rough. Maybe the three of them will end up as good friends before the end. I enjoy this story very much. It has elements of friendships, enemies, shock and love. What more could you want in a story? So far there has not been any tragedy. But the story continues as well. Thank you for your story and your continued writing.

I enjoyed reading this first chapter. This is going to be an intriguing one to read and the direction and adventure it will lead to . Thank you for a great beginning and hopefully a great continuing saga for Eli.

I love the realism that you put into this sage of Joey. It seems almost as though Joey is bipolar. Seemingly normal one minute and flying off the handle the next. I do think he will see a professional to help him, but I can also see him suddenly stopping any therapy or treatment he is getting. Jack i am sure is seeing his father in Joey with the behavior he is showing. I think the one person is going to be Roman, Joey's brother. I can see Roman being the best thing to happen to Joey, if he only can realize he must seek some very harsh "forced love", or loose much of what he has now. I am waiting to see what will happen. Great story and great writing something that is so difficult to express to others .

Will we be seeing anything about Chris and the struggle that is going on before too much longer? I have enjoyed this story more than any other. I keep looking for postings of updates, all without seeing any. Temporary usually means for a short time period. I can understand personal things happen that upset the apple cart so to speak. I do hope that this story will continue! I can also see this story and Chris changing directions. With all of the "cute" elves that Chris has suddenly been introduced to, I can see a romance involving Chris and possibly several other elf's. Just a passing thought. It is going to be fascinating story when it is completed. Many thumbs up to you as well. But please lets get this back on the road as soon as you possibly are able. Thank youn

I thank you for this story. It has nearly everything you could ask for. Love, Betrayal, happiness, sexual and mental rape, abuse, suspense, adventure and a young man who grew up suddenly with loss of a love. But this loss seems as though it is driving Ramon to overcome all of the pain and grief that he has gone through. Ramon appears to be focused on his new life and his music. I think Ramon is going to become a force to be reckoned with by certain individuals that wanted him gone. I am hooked on this story. It is Fantastic! Thank you again for making reading an enjoyable sport.

I am thinking that Nathan's issue with his father has the word "gay " attached. I can also understand his reluctance to show his hand, so to speak to to someone that he feels so comfortable with. So when will either of these two love struck individuals take the plunge and open up? There has to be something in the near future that is going to help both of them to reveal what they so desperately need and want to happen between them. Let the good times roll!!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Such a great love that blossomed with two young boys that actually were two young adults. More so that the other supposed adults in this story. It was refreshing to read this story and thank you for writing it for those of us who can only dream while reading more of your stories. I enjoy reading things where I can put myself into the story line. Refreshing and exciting. Thank you.

I am only one person, but being so interested in Chris and his protecting all of those around him as well as all of the elves who will now depend on his powers. I am so ready to begin the next chapter as all of us who are following Chris. I do not write, but I have also been in situations that drain your thoughts as quickly as the water draining from the sink when you pull the drain open. When I get to the point of becoming "foggy", I Look to the stars that shine about me at night. I look to see which one is the brightest of the night. If I just focus on that star, It soon begins to look as though it is shimmering right in front of my eyes. The longer I watch that star. My mind begins to take me to a place where things begin to have other thoughts fill my mind and my senses. I always end up more refreshed each time I do this task. I have come to find myself looking at the stars more often to bring myself back into the reality of things that are close to me and mean even more to me. I hope you have found your bright star to set you once again on the ability to entertain others with your writings. Carry onward, move forward towards regaining the spirit of your thoughts. Your writings are such a joy to read and put myself into the story so I can feel as though i am a part of it. Thank you so much for what you have done and what you can do.

I thoroughly enjoyed your first book. I am sure no. 2 will be just as enjoyable and will be looking for numbers 8, 9 1nd 10 in the not too far future. Thank you.

So now is appears that the masters of the school seem to be more that just the masters. Is it possible that all of the paddling that have been taking place are more than punishment? Could there be some pleasure group within in the school system that has motives other than punishment? I am going to be watching for more chapters of this story. I can see the future of some school officials becoming somewhat seriously uncomfortable with there secrets they may be hiding. Lets begin to see the pain on their faces instead of the children they are supposed to be nurturing.

I can see there is to be a very close relationship with our stories hero doctor. I fear the may be in a very stressful and dangerous saga of helping young individuals with the realities of many who have other issues and problems with gay people as well as growing young men and boys. I am looking forward to having a great story to be engrossed in. I will be waiting for each chapter to read. Thank you so much.

This sounds like a good story in the making. With being a new student in a different state and finding a mysterious new friend. What new things will these two become partners in. I will be looking for the next chapters. Thank you.

I am always looking for the next chapter in the fight Chris is waging to protect the all. Is there some clue to when the saga will continue? I am sure there are many, many fans of your writing that are wanting to help rally you along. I love your writing and the story line as well. It is fantastic to read and put yourself into the mindset of Chris while he is fighting for the lives of so many others who also have no clue as to their future. What an task for such a young man to be the only possible solution to such evil entities. Hopeful for you to continue this saga and also others you have. Success is the food for determination as well as love of one's followers in life and in the Relm.

Such an intriguing, and lifelike story you have here. I am almost putting myself into the mind of David Richards. I enjoy reading these types of stories when one can involve themselves into the narrative. There is adventure, love, close friendships and not so secret partners. All of the joys of life expressed within this story. I enjoy reading this so much. Bring on the Royalty and the advisors. Is there a sudden change within the Royalty on the horizon? I will be reading to find out.

I am sure Jason will realize soon that mothers always now what their children up to. I think Mothers and the child are connected by an invisible human need to protect their children. Mothers are the know all and see all, without a doubt.

Would you call this chapter " A come to Jesus Moment in the minds of Davey and Brian. I do believe mother may be working towards a private room in a mental ward. Or something even more intriguing. Could she even be another time traveler that no one has considered? Brian and Davey may have had an unfortunate, physical and serious heart to heart, but I have the feeling that this is not the end of this relationship in this time line. Great chapter and wonderful turn of events. Reading more of this story is going to be exciting to say the least.

Fantastic chapter!! Davey and Brian meeting was especially touching for me. Things of this type sometimes are difficult for those involved and draw out the deepest feelings of each party involved. These types of things are most difficult to handle in real life let alone reading of them. This chapter has brought to the surface from within me that made my own eyes tear. Your writing has done what many tried doing, Congrats to you.

Coming from a rather large family of relatives who get together for the holidays, I can relate to the trying to keep everyone happy and in the spirit of the holidays. This is a very trying task when there is no issues of sexual assaults on a child. I enjoyed all of my relatives when we get together, but still there were times when tempers would rise and voices along also. It does make for some enjoyable times especially when pictures appear that were taken during the "family's heated discussions. I love this story and looking forward to read the future chapters yet to come. Your story is actually relaxing to read but exciting at the same time. Carry on, please.

I am looking for what Pete has up his sleeves? Does he have some ideas about becoming the "top dog" to replace Chaz? It is going to be interesting to follow Chaz if he does retire and what lies ahead in the minds of his soon to be co workers.

Having grown up on a farm in Iowa, I am already into this saga and it is only the first chapter. I know there will be good things ahead.

I have read this story and gone back a read some chapters over again. I have thought about what it is that I can say about this story that will tell others what I am thinking. All I can say is" FANTASTIC". Suspense, murder, lives lost, hearts and minds coming together for unbridled love. I am wanting more of this. What better way to read a wonderful story than to put yourself into what you are reading as though you were a part of it. More, more, more, Please

I cannot wait for the next chapter to arrive Chris is taking over my thoughts throughout my days and keeps me wondering what new and unknown demon is going to appear next. Chris is falling into his royalty position as someone that has amazed his own father and possibly the love of his young life. Or do we have an unknown love in his future as well. With so many eye catching elves around and Chris noticing them all. Maybe our young Prince will be more loved than we know. It is going to be a great story to the end. I am eagerly waiting for this story to continue on and let the demons be aware of the new kid in town. Fantastic writing and you have captured my desire for more of this. Waiting patiently for the saga to continue. Many thumbs up to you.

Next is the Final Chapter??? No way Jose'. This story is just getting better with each chapter. Nothing like guys in high school and many of them finding out those around them are gay as they turn out to be also. What I would have given to be one of these boys while I was in high school. What a story to be reading and putting myself into the pants of one of these guys. Are you sure the next chapter is the Final Chapter. Maybe you forgot a couple dozen chapters someplace!!🧐 Great story by the way. Love it. Many thanks as well.