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Classic George, winning over the locals and making important connections, both politically and personally. His handsome Capitan will be a future conquest.
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Looks like an exciting secret mission is in our future. We have another mention of 10 year old Necho, the village boy. Does Luther see a resemblance to an old lover? Just how many heirs to the throne do we really have?
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I was having a very bad day with my rheumatoid arthritis, as well as a rough day at work when this chapter posted, so I didn't get around to commenting or even reading the comments. I can't believe no one has yet mention the coincidence of Raemande's 10 year old child (current whereabouts unknown) and the village child Necho, also 10 years old, who wants to be a knight someday. How much do you want to bet he was adopted by the village elder?
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Chapter 1 – Is it a scam?
CincyKris commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 1 – Is it a scam?
I'm intrigued by this mysterious client in London. Did his mother have some secrets? -
Thank you for this adventure! Kieran learned so many new tricks! I know we'll hear from Makelan and the giant orcas again.
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The first comments belong to the next chapter. The most interesting thing learned in this chapter is that there is a secret passage from the dungeon to the dark halls beneath the castle. Hopefully this knowledge will come in handy if Rae ever gets out of his cage.
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Judayah will find that being untrustworthy always begets the inability to trust in others. He is a snake in a pit of vipers.
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This victory was a hell of a team effort! The earth orcas expanded that team exponentially. Ranevargar and Maurice will be surprised and impressed, and maybe a little disappointed they missed out on the fun adventure.
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That was a happy and satisfying chapter until the end! I hope the mysterious new knight didn't stick his sword into Luther's back very far.
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Things might start heating up, literally! This was a very exciting chapter, so fast paced. It looks like we get a head to head matchup with the Usurper next chapter!
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If Chandar actually has this magical sword, he will hopefully lend it to Luther. Was that a normal bird or a special bird?
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Chapter 3 - Brothers in Arms
CincyKris commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Brothers in Arms
Maybe Marcus should have his parents contact James' parents for a conversation about unconditional love. I'm a little confused on timing. The confrontation happened in March, but then after that James' parents wanted him home for Thanksgiving, which is in October in Canada. -
I love seeing Slav's and Rory's relationship grow like this. I bet his sister would be impressed and comforted by him living with an "adopted" family, and will probably not be very surprised at his coming out.
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We are meeting new characters who will hopefully be included in the opposition to Septimus. I hope Willem keeps any bad news to himself, Septimus seems the type that would kill the messenger!
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I am very much looking forward to this fantasy!
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The trip through the portal will be exciting! I think that Kieran's best feature is his insatiable quest for knowledge.
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The Holiday: Sightseeing
CincyKris commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The Holiday: Sightseeing
I look forward to their response when Gavin and Jason have that conversation with Grandma and Grandpa. The whole extended family will be so pleased. -
Chapter 2 - New Beginnings
CincyKris commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 2 - New Beginnings
Marcus is settling in to his new life, but his past is lurking in the background. Hopefully his new friends will have his back when he needs them. -
I will listen later but that looks like it will make me cry! Thank you for writing it.
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Daphne, Graham & Charlie
CincyKris commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Daphne, Graham & Charlie
Wouldn't it be wonderful if Aunt Daphne and Uncle Graham get caught up in the legal wranglings that will undoubtedly occur in the aftermath of Thomas/Frank getting arrested! Graham might lose his dodgy clients and Daphne will get kicked off her charity boards. -
This mirror realm seems to be an ocean world, but structured similarly to our Realm. This Usurper sounds like a real bitch! That she uses and abuses animals is a sure sign of evil. Hopefully their new ally will be helpful in deposing the Usurper. I wonder if Ranevargar knows there are other realms?
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This murder mystery is tension-filled and gripping, but written in the personable and heartfelt style of our author. Full of love, humour, and life, you won't regret reading it.
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So someone is stealing animals from earth and controlling them, I wonder why? Without competition they have evolved to grow much larger. This implies the animals have been in this alien world for a very long time. Did our group get taken by accident because they were with the pod? Bet that's going to come back and bite the thief in the butt!
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The boys were fortunate to have the time to do all their experiments. I think they will come in handy during their trip to the island. I hope Nathan gets to go to the realm, Ranevargar will enjoy meeting him!
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I finished this at work a few days ago and forgot to come back and leave a comment. I love how well Nathan is being incorporated into the group. Even though he has loving parents, he's been missing the inclusion from peers. I wonder who sent them to this world. I have no doubt they will figure out how to get to the realm, then back home, but they're learning a lot about their powers on this adventure.
