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It is not easy to find well written stories about adults, even fewer about regular adults, who just happen to be gay. It is very welcome and I look forward to your new story. Keith has been conditioned by his late father to think of gay as wrong. Hopefully he will be encouraged to change those thoughts. Also, the house sounds fantastic!
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I grow it! Very easy to grow perennial.
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I'm not sure if it's a cultural difference, but it seems to this American that Mhairi is treating Joe as if he is 14 or 15, rather than 17. Perhaps it is her "training" by her parents to keep an almost 18 year old on a tight leash. I guess leaving him in Owain's care is a baby step. If she doesn't keep loosening up that leash, she is going to find herself all alone.
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I've enjoyed reading this funny and sweet story of friendship. Peter and Matthew are such a strong couple, but they might not have made it without Andy's stirring!
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Harris continues to completely discount the possibility of magic, and Morrison continues to underestimate his foes, these work in our heroes' favors. Our team, with the help of the Realm Elves, could obviously just alter the thinking of the government/mining bosses. But that would be a let down and too easy. I want to see the out-smarting and out-maneuvering of the bad guys by the good guys! Thank for spinning such a fun tale!
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Not an end but a beginning
CincyKris commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Not an end but a beginning
Brian, Gordon, and Toby have all come a long way since the beginning of this story! Thank for this entertaining look at a very well adjusted "unconventional" family.- 18 comments
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Sorry @Summerabbacat, I don't think Billie would murder anyone. He would know that Micco wouldn't be sucked in to Sam's drug culture (that's why Micco dumped Sam), and he certainly wouldn't frame Micco.
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I'm sympathetic in theory for what Martina went through with Jacob's death and after, but Charlotte left the money to the refuge. Martina did not have to resort to her selfish plan to keep the refuge operating. She did what she did for personal gain, just like Rory, Sam, and Frank. So she didn't get to travel, boo hoo! Lots of people don't get to travel the world into retirement age. So Rory had a heap of student loans, I know a bunch of people with more loans than her! If Martina is looking for sympathy, she better start looking elsewhere than the shelter, or the readers.
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I liked the direction Chris and Andre are going. We’ll see what drama happens in Melbourne with all the family, I hope Andre doesn’t get overwhelmed. I think adding a part-timer is a good move. As for watching the baby ….. After all, how difficult would it be to look after a baby for a day? Oh dear! I think Chris might be due for a life lesson!
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I’m not sure if we are supposed to pretend in the comments that we don’t know how this turns out. If you haven’t read I Hate This Town you really should or you will read spoilers in this prequel. That being said, I am enjoying River’s point of view. It even seems like his friends concern is starting to sink in at the end of the chapter.
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So glad this is back! I’m conflicted with Sarah, as is she with herself. I’m more like Ashlee (not as OCD) or Uyen (not as intense). On the surface it seems like Sarah has wasted a lot of opportunities. And as for the dress code, literally every place I have ever worked has one. I can’t really sympathize with her on that one, just suck it up and follow it like everyone else. I’m seeing her insecurity show through, I wonder what happened in college that threw her off her path?
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Such a fun weekend, and a lot of compromise and self growth. I’m a little jealous of the option of jaunting off to a different country for the weekend. Similar to Australians, in the US it takes so long to just get to other parts of the country, going to another country is definitely not a jaunt.
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Funny! I thought about the car too! Clara packed her ancient tomes next to the granola bars.
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I’m looking forward to reading another of your older stories. I like the camaraderie between the boys. It sounds like Peter needs to be jolted from his comfort zone, and Andy seems like he is up for the task.
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From Wikipedia: In Egyptian mythology, Wepwawet (hieroglyphic wp-w3w.t; also rendered Upuaut, Wep-wawet, Wepawet, Apuat, and Ophois) was originally a deity of funerary rites, war, and royalty association, whose cult centre was Asyut in Upper Egypt (Lycopolis in the Greco-Roman period). His name means opener of the ways and he is often depicted as a wolf standing at the prow of a solar-boat.
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I like the druid faery world you constructed, Maio sounds like an interesting person. So, I'm wondering if Grey's alter ego, Wepwawet, is a spirit, past life, symbiot?
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Their spirit and good will has gone viral! I loved the healing of Auntie, I sure wish I had a Rhys to cure my rheumatoid arthritis! I think that Ranevargar's plan to stop them with "A thousand little stings" is a great idea. I'm always concerned that they will be exposed to society, which would be catastrophic. Continuing the visible protest efforts on the surface, while using undetectable and effective methods below the surface is the best way to beat these robber barons.
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This chapter shows just how far Colin has come since meeting Owain. It also shows the progress still desired, but not yet achieved. Something to look forward to.
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Wow, what a tense chapter! We now have that vital piece of information we have been missing and searching, the secret contingency giving Martina her motive. How does a person make the leap from devoting her life to wild animal conservation to sacrificing the animals and Micco, and (I'm assuming) murdering Sam when the plan fell apart? If her husband was still alive, I can't see her doing all this (or at the very least getting away with it). The writing was perfect -- fast-paced, urgent, concise. We finish with Micco and Chase revisiting their childhood behaviors. Hopefully Chase will yet again come to Micco's rescue once he has Matthew and Calhoun safely in the shelter.
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I'm so glad to find out this beginning is set before Alec/Finn and River/Ji. I was worried for a bit! I'm looking forward to exploring the very complex River.
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I'm all caught up! I'm thankful that our guys have magic on their side, I can't see how ordinary people could win this battle. Sadly similar goings on are happening all over earth. I can't wait to see Benton's reaction when his dastardly plan fails!
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It sounds like Toby's perfect vacation. The guys are showing what good parents they are by catering this vacation around Toby's interests, rather than their preferences. I'm much more a small town/nature lover, than a city lover, so their vacation appeals to me.
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I'm wondering if Owain will try to make contact with the one good friend he lost touch with? I liked this calm, "slice of life" chapter, but I have to agree with some of my fellow readers that a disturbance is upcoming.
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I’m a little confused, when did Grey get out of his chains? When you told me you wanted to leave to go find her, I just remembered her words. And you wouldn’t budge… so I told your dad about your plans to leave,” he said. “That was you?” I screamed at him, “They chained me up!” We know that Mark and Grey were together 3 years later, until Mark publicly rejected him. We also know that Grey’s dad stopped abusing him around the time of the chaining.
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Val can go to earth with Beckett!? Hmmmm, remember months ago when we speculated that Val could maybe shift into or appear as a human in the human world? Maybe?
