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  1. CincyKris

    Chapter 6

    I can’t decide if Michael is rediscovering himself or becoming a new person, regardless Eric is performing miracles in Hickory.
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    Chapter 2

    The lingering anti-decisioner? The name-dropper for discounts? The loud douchey know-it-all? The time-sucking buy one thinger? Hmmm, maybe I've been in retail for too long!
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    Chapter 2

    I'm pretty sure my insurance company bought a Manageroid!
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    Chapter 5

    I think it's been so long since Michael looked within himself, that Eric is able to see things about Michael that he can't see himself. Michael really needs this trip.
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    Chapter 12

    Oh, that makes much more sense! I can’t imagine Beckett being the protector!
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    Chapter 12

    I'm not sure just how Beckett will "make sure Valrinda doesn't get captured"! He is starting to at least take this seriously.
  7. M'yn made the right decision this time. I still don't fully trust him, but I have hope now. This is like a crazy cross between Raiders of the Lost Ark and a travelogue! Looking forward to China.
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    Chapter 4

    The previous chapter was the beginning of Michael looking at his life, and at Pete differently. I think this chapter is the beginning of hope being reinstated in Michael's life.
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    Chapter 21

    I’m sorry to see this end but now I know for sure there will be another book. We have to be there when Randy gets turned! Thanks for the verbal beatdown of Shannon.
  10. I somehow missed this chapter being posted. This journey has brought sadness along with their achievements. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, which has just been posted.
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    Chapter 11

    I looked back at some chapters just to make sure I didn't miss some important info, but no. Parallax definitely did not give Beckett the info everyone thinks he should have. I almost forgot that Colby and his parents were in on this. I hope that Beckett quickly decides to engage with this world, his stumbling through his "dream" is going to get him killed.
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    Higher 20

    Wow, you packed a lot into this chapter, almost as much as was packed into Dave! We had references to Star Wars, royalty, three previous stories, a wild off-camera orgy, and saw some more nature sites. So glad this is not yet posted as complete!
  13. This chapter felt like a turning point. The guys are building a community and going on the offensive, rather than just reacting defensively.
  14. CincyKris

    Chapter 1

    What a wonderful surprise! The characters are complex and engaging, I'm hoping that Eric is able to give Michael some hope for a future, and give Pete some usefulness back. I didn't have any railroad nostalgia, but I love miniatures!
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    Scuba Diving

    Wow! Adventure always finds CJ and Owen. This was an exciting chapter, CJ will be held in even higher esteem by the Presidente than before. I am giggling thinking of Jay watching the eventual press conference for the announcement!
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    Chapter 10

    Things are finally looking up for Beckett! Perhaps Valrinda will be a little more forthcoming, seeing as they are bonded. @drpaladinhas a great point, this temporary journey may not turn out quite so temporary.
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    Chapter 9

    This had a feel of "Alice in Wonderland" crossed with "Goldilocks and the Three Bears"! I wonder when he will give up on his preconceptions and just go all in?
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    Chapter 14

    For what it's worth, I'll add myself to the list of people begging for the continuation of this story.
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    Higher 17

    I had faith that Randy would come around. Pun intended!
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    Day Drinking

    I don't think any defections are in the works, I think the Cubans are quietly choosing CJ to change the relationship between Cuba and the US. And I definitely think his picture will be in that wall! Happy Birthday!
  21. CincyKris

    Welcome

    I know you said he is black, but are we absolutely sure Jay is not related to Northman????
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    Chapter 8

    All this to save his best friend's cat! Hopefully the guide will be a little more forthcoming.
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    Chapter 8

    While I agree that Dane is a jerk for the way he ended their relationship, I can't blame him for not wanting to be with such a clingy, obsessed person. I can't stand Jim. This is a well-written story but I don't like the self absorbed, woe-is-me main character. I just can't relate to him. Thank you for your previous responses but I think I'll leave this one.
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    Chapter 7

    I just want to shout “get over it” to Jim! Because I’m really close to being over Jim! So far it’s been a lot of eye rolling over his perceived tragedy.
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    Chapter 6

    I’m trying not to look at Jim as a sad tragic character but every time he brings up Dane as his one and only, for all eternity love of his life, I can’t stop thinking he is a 14 year old.
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