CincyKris
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I can’t decide if Michael is rediscovering himself or becoming a new person, regardless Eric is performing miracles in Hickory.
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The lingering anti-decisioner? The name-dropper for discounts? The loud douchey know-it-all? The time-sucking buy one thinger? Hmmm, maybe I've been in retail for too long!
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I'm pretty sure my insurance company bought a Manageroid!
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I think it's been so long since Michael looked within himself, that Eric is able to see things about Michael that he can't see himself. Michael really needs this trip.
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Oh, that makes much more sense! I can’t imagine Beckett being the protector!
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I'm not sure just how Beckett will "make sure Valrinda doesn't get captured"! He is starting to at least take this seriously.
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Segment 12: The Discus Of Time
CincyKris commented on MrM's story chapter in Segment 12: The Discus Of Time
M'yn made the right decision this time. I still don't fully trust him, but I have hope now. This is like a crazy cross between Raiders of the Lost Ark and a travelogue! Looking forward to China. -
The previous chapter was the beginning of Michael looking at his life, and at Pete differently. I think this chapter is the beginning of hope being reinstated in Michael's life.
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I’m sorry to see this end but now I know for sure there will be another book. We have to be there when Randy gets turned! Thanks for the verbal beatdown of Shannon.
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I somehow missed this chapter being posted. This journey has brought sadness along with their achievements. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, which has just been posted.
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I looked back at some chapters just to make sure I didn't miss some important info, but no. Parallax definitely did not give Beckett the info everyone thinks he should have. I almost forgot that Colby and his parents were in on this. I hope that Beckett quickly decides to engage with this world, his stumbling through his "dream" is going to get him killed.
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Wow, you packed a lot into this chapter, almost as much as was packed into Dave! We had references to Star Wars, royalty, three previous stories, a wild off-camera orgy, and saw some more nature sites. So glad this is not yet posted as complete!
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Chapter 8 - July 22, 1993
CincyKris commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 8 - July 22, 1993
This chapter felt like a turning point. The guys are building a community and going on the offensive, rather than just reacting defensively.- 20 comments
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What a wonderful surprise! The characters are complex and engaging, I'm hoping that Eric is able to give Michael some hope for a future, and give Pete some usefulness back. I didn't have any railroad nostalgia, but I love miniatures!
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Wow! Adventure always finds CJ and Owen. This was an exciting chapter, CJ will be held in even higher esteem by the Presidente than before. I am giggling thinking of Jay watching the eventual press conference for the announcement!
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Things are finally looking up for Beckett! Perhaps Valrinda will be a little more forthcoming, seeing as they are bonded. @drpaladinhas a great point, this temporary journey may not turn out quite so temporary.
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This had a feel of "Alice in Wonderland" crossed with "Goldilocks and the Three Bears"! I wonder when he will give up on his preconceptions and just go all in?
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For what it's worth, I'll add myself to the list of people begging for the continuation of this story.
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I had faith that Randy would come around. Pun intended!
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I don't think any defections are in the works, I think the Cubans are quietly choosing CJ to change the relationship between Cuba and the US. And I definitely think his picture will be in that wall! Happy Birthday!
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I know you said he is black, but are we absolutely sure Jay is not related to Northman????
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All this to save his best friend's cat! Hopefully the guide will be a little more forthcoming.
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While I agree that Dane is a jerk for the way he ended their relationship, I can't blame him for not wanting to be with such a clingy, obsessed person. I can't stand Jim. This is a well-written story but I don't like the self absorbed, woe-is-me main character. I just can't relate to him. Thank you for your previous responses but I think I'll leave this one.
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I just want to shout “get over it” to Jim! Because I’m really close to being over Jim! So far it’s been a lot of eye rolling over his perceived tragedy.
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I’m trying not to look at Jim as a sad tragic character but every time he brings up Dane as his one and only, for all eternity love of his life, I can’t stop thinking he is a 14 year old.
