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This was such a happy optimistic chapter. I was most taken by the difference in their departures. Almost nothing vs. as warm a goodbye as you can get. Albert’s terrible advise to get ahead at any cost shows his true self. August’s total rejection of that advise shows his true self, also. Let’s all hope the ride to their new home goes a bit smoother than in some of your previous westerns! #nocliffs #nobandits
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Neil has so gradually come out of his comfort zone, a casual observer would never believe how closeted he was! Berlin will be an adventure. As for the "wrong" side of the road, I will point out the 65% of the world drives on the right!
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Levi is cruising along all happy and comfortable so it's about time for a Thompson to come along and add some danger and excitement. Hopefully it turns out better than some of our past Thompson encounters!
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The way I look at, you writers are doing us a huge favor as it is. I appreciate anything you are willing to gift us with!
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I loved the conclusion! Zane faced his worst possible outcome, he was made impotent, completely without consequence. For an attention hog like him, going out with a whimper is so much worse than with an explosion. Eric getting his home back and Ash and Taggert openly sharing their love was as emotionally satisfying as it gets.
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I’m so sorry to hear this. His stories were so uplifting.
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Don't miss this fun story!
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I loved this! It was so much fun.
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What a great morning surprise! And we're now official! I like the start of the story, our hero is quite the pragmatic survivor.
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Thank you for this hopeful, peaceful story!
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This is alt-history and speculative historical fiction at it's best. Witty and well written with no wasted words and very suspenseful.
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I already have my guess for this secret author! This was a fantastic read, so suspenseful and thoughtful. I enjoyed using my brain.
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Very intriguing start! I hope this gets continued.
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Taggert obviously inherited his grandfather’s brains and decency. Too bad it skipped a generation! My guess is a friendly joint ownership of the Fleming ranch, with Tag, Ash, and Eric moving there. I eagerly await the auction, but will miss these guys.
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All good news in this chapter! With all the good actors, these boys could put on a travelin’ show!
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Chapter 8 A Troubled Soul
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8 A Troubled Soul
Thank you @Headstall and @FanLit! I am happy to report that my brand new med is working wonders just one week in. It's astonishing how my priorities and energy levels changed when I was in constant pain. If nothing else, I think it has made me more patient with people experiencing their own trauma. -
I love this beginning! You gave us just the right amount of info, but not too much. It adds greatly to my anticipation. What will happen to Silas? He's a VCR in a streaming world now! Why did a Dr. take a job as a janitor? He must have been desperate to leave. I suppose those problems are long gone! Does he have descendents? Can't wait to read the answers.
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Chapter Thirteen: Vickie Morrison
CincyKris commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Thirteen: Vickie Morrison
Will the cops be smart enough to match the rust with the bridge? They'll see the moss smeared where she slipped. Billy is under arrest for her murder. -
Chapter 12a: The Reckoning
CincyKris commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 12a: The Reckoning
I'm all caught up after binging the whole book today on my day off. Rust. It all hinges on the source of the rust. -
Chapter 8 A Troubled Soul
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8 A Troubled Soul
You're my favorite writer. There are a lot of great writers on this platform, but your stories connect with me more than any others. -
Chapter 8 A Troubled Soul
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8 A Troubled Soul
I've not been commenting very much on my followed stories lately, my rheumatoid arthritis has been pretty bad. It's hard to feel engaged when you are in constant pain, but still working, just trying to hang on. This chapter expressed a different kind of tension, of just trying to hang on. The mental stress of just trying to survive can be overwhelming. Our four young men are each experiencing their own anguish, their own life-changing crises, life-changing opportunities. -
Can you imagine if Neil's naked bum sculptures became the trendy new thing in local rich folks' homes!? A bunch of mantles occupied by Alex's bum instead of Hummels figurines !
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24. Friends, Family & Fun
CincyKris commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in 24. Friends, Family & Fun
Beer (stouts & porters, just like Neil), kebabs, IKEA. I have to be in the mood for IKEA, it can be overwhelming, but their meatballs are yummy. The guys are becoming closer friends, in addition to growing their relationship. -
Big steps forward! Sadly, I think we know why he never shows his back. No disgust and shame. No shouting and fear. No regret curling through the room afterward. No fire and metal. No blinding pain. No exile. No scrambling to leave. No pretending it hadn’t happened. The thought that his father would brand his son for being gay is horrible. Maybe it wasn't his dad, but he must have been ok with it for Taggert to respond the he has.
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