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Good to have the Geek-in-Chief finally on board the campaign trail.... This Miller version is even more despicable than the real life one.

Good morning Sir

This chapter for me is when Lyn finally comes out into the light.. When he finally understands that love requires one to be bold enough to let go and be vulnerable.. It's been a wonderful journey for me to see him come from an emotionally 'closed off' young man to the man we meet in this chapter. Very well written @Laura S. Fox.... Thank you!

We are well rid of that pesky pest that was Tom Graves..

Squash Graves Already. . let him choke on his ambition .... When I saw Stephen Miller ...had the sudden urge to be dipped in acid..just to wash off the revulsion I felt

Good morning Sir

God!...Graves is a pesky rat that doesn't go away..haha

Oh God...it's early days yet but I think am liking Peter Mitchell...A whole lot...You sir are outdoing yourself these days🫡.....he is good...not scratch that ...in another world Peter/Andrew/Enrico/Will would be a formidable team...Scary as hell ...then add Jared/Lisa/Caleb/Brody...and our resident geek-in Chief Yani to the mix and you have such a crazy unbeatable team ..they are all crazy smart/intelligent and outstanding in their respective fields.. Thank you!

You have aptly captured it ..I think I saw a speech by the Leader of Greens in the UK..Zach Polanski..he mentioned something similar...though in simple brutal terms ....the biggest obstacle to social progress in the world is the billionaires and their enablers, the politicians.

I pity the phone that is going to face the wrath of the petulant man-child..That touch screen is going to be in a world of pain🤣🤣

This chapter for me just enriched the previous Present day one....it's clearly illustrates the depth of affection that Alexander had for Lyn.. I feel like this chapter demonstrates that despite everything going on with these men in the past, in that particular moment when the photo was taken ,their friendship was profound...They were 'hiding' from each other sure, but when it mattered(in the small moments) they showed up for each other.

@vanalas...I warned you before...😄...If you dare 'hurt' our Dean ,and from the looks of this chapter you are planning to ,I will 'sue' you... God.. when one thinks this mother-son duo cannot get any more despicable, they go and pull this stunt... Is it me or does Julian become a simp in this chapter?🤣 Thank you!

At first reading, one concludes that Ned really fucked up big time ..but as one reads it again, it becomes clear that it was the best decision. They were both injured with their lives in peril . That being said you really have outdone yourself with Graves...I don't think there is a character whose downfall am looking more forward to than his ...I don't even wish him to die..I wish to see him completely 'neutered'.For him to fall so low that he can never rise again😄...That is how emotional that character gets me Thank you!

Blimey!...loneliness does make strange bedfellows...lol.....Jared/Caleb and Peter/Jason...I wonder how the latter paring even happened. Must have been lots of divine intervention🤣🤣 That being said. I don't think I have ever felt such a murderous rage than the one I felt when I was reading the sequence involved Jared and the money people....What this version of Trump and his acolytes did/plan to do warrants a firing squad . ..bloody leeches the lot of them !

The dynamics of Peter and West have Always been Interesting to say the least ...😄....West was right....God help Graves....He is a for a world of hurt ....and am all for it.. That speech by Will was something else....It ought to be on the Political Science syllabus when all is over .

You Sir are brilliant!...That Enough campaign slogan was so apt....One word that has enormous power.

Blimey!...am already hooked...hihi

That was a really depressing but beautiful epilogue....I don't know if it's only me who has realized this but there is a pattern...all our young heroes have been touched by the Might in some way . ...All the main lads of the story are descended from someone who has might or Interacted with the Might ...Bartos is powerful and I like to believe a product of a Devil's bargain from his father ..Franz ...Zdain..Josel and now Darren ....You sir have crafted a gem...I cannot wait long enough for Book 4 to drop... That being said ...I look forward to the day when the good/Light will start taking the fight to Dark...There is so much loss going on the side of Light ...first Marl ...and now Jestok(even though we hardly knew you).... I like the fact that the mutilated man(Chab) comes out of this epilogue as the dark horse of the saga going forward....I cannot wait to see how Bartos and Chab will fare going forward as this book has so far hinted that they are the two most powerful of Might users.. Thank you!

It sure did especially since I have a feeling the next chapters are about to become tumultuous..🤭

You Sir, for a second time in a row, have outdone your own brilliance....that Tommy bonus chapter was everything and more . Thank you!

Amen!....he has been in the shadows for too long if you ask me

I was running scenarios of how Madame Xúe would handle Wexler..hihi

The Carter family is something else...It is like they have mastered the art of putting down folks with an overblown sense of importance ..Jacob does it with the press corps(photographers) by acting as though they don't exist, not giving them a quarter...The master evisceration of Sterling by Peter...Will and his team at the Airport lounge displaying 'conduct' unbecoming of a Governor(am sure the clowns on Trump's side must have been livid )...This family plays to beat of their own drama...it's just so beautifully brazen!. That sequence at the Nationals....That was something that cannot be desecrated by further comment on my behalf...It was like communion!...I personally loved how Tommy gave the proverbial finger to the US ..Him choosing to put that hat was like throwing the opening salvo in a battle ..C'est magnifique!...Tommy illustrated to the Orange turdball and his dingoes wherever they were watching from that the ice flame of North burns true in all 'Northerners' and can never be extinguished no matter what they do....Tommy's performance reminded me of Game of Thrones' House Martell's mantra ...Unbowed.Unbent.Unbroken! Thank you Sir!

My favourite was when he told Sterling to get the hell out because he was ruining the Feng shui..😄

Your chapter teasers are a story of their own....So marvelous!!