Seraph28

Bad bad boy😂...Especially since you rank among the authors whose works are hard or almost almost to fore casts..

Oh dearie....your analyses are the second best thing after @CasualWanderer82 updates when it comes to his work... Fore casts are for the lazy and faint hearted..

I did call him spineless and stupid and you tried to defend him..haha... That man is just an embarrassment to literary fathers

One can only hope too...what really hit home for me was craven Robert's reaction to seeing Julian come home 'unexpectedly' and his attempt to divert Julian...That for me was the final blow ..

That portion of the chapter is epic..movie magic vibes all around. I have waited to see Andrew and Enrico physically interacting with each other(action wise) since the first moment Enrico made his appearance in Carter's Breach .....You just made this lad's day sunnier😂😂 Thank you!

This family doesn't deserve Julian ....Julian needs to completely extricate himself from this situation....I have mentioned it before ...second chances are not infinite..What the Hayes men do to Julian in this chapter is intolerable cruelty .... Arthur and Aiden ...those two don't have any scruples...Robert on the other hand displays a craven abdication of his fatherly duty, he fails to do the right thing and in the end does prove that he is Arthur Hayes Spawn after all .In failing to stand up for Julian when it comes to Nathan to appease Aiden shows that like Arthur, Julian doesn't matter because he doesn't carry their blood. Any other story would be the moment when Julian finally wakes up but knowing @vanalas and his flair for wringing as much despair as possible from the protagonists...we are going to have to wait for that moment to come.😂 Thank you for the update ..

@austinbiguy..I never meant it as reprimand ...am sorry if it seemed as such ..I only meant ,though was vague, that the arcs resolved as they were meant to ..

That is his forte after all😂

Both have flair for a monologue...Hannibal would talk to you about his choice cuts of meat without you knowing you are to be the cut on the menu.....Enrico would talk to you about the consequences of making bad decisions....and then he would snap your neck for good measure after...He does after all loathe guns..

Especially when served by a dapper Mexican...who loathes barbarity😂

Looks Like you have a side Sir 😂 😜

More like ...he is fucked and he knows it😂....Even Smith was left sputtering like an idiot ..at least from that phone call.. Good morning...

Another supernatural tinged story...count me in already! I like Michael....he is the wilder version of Kane.. That is going to be a lot of fun..reading about these two brothers I mean

You and @vanalas ought to start a club...He also knows how to wring as much despair as he can out of his characters....Chapter after chapter see his protagonists put through the wringer...hihi

A life well lived indeed...I don't know why I didn't feel sad reading this chapter ,when I should have been .. They had a nice 24 years....that is a celebration

Well don't blame a boy for harbouring some faint hope that it's not the case😂

Two chapters?...that is going to be a lot of angst on my side..

Someone is becoming a sociopath perhaps😉😂

Creating a multi-universe are we ...?...one of angst riddled tortured youth perhaps😂

Brutal indeed....it will make Ratatouille's Anton Ego look saintly in comparison😂

Morning.....those Carter boys are perpetually at it anyway..😂 At this point ,I think Silas should just add Loser as his name.

Finally!...Its raining heavily outside and this chapter couldn't have dropped at a more opportune time like this😂.... The dragon is free at last

Do be kind and easy on the lad Sir😂....He is after all fragile at the moment....any more prodding and he would go over the precipice.. Poor Ryan...indeed

No statement was ever more true😂😂

They are teenagers Sir....that is the part we seem to be forgetting....Am not making excuses here...At that point in time Skylar is openly gay and has accepted himself ....Ryan is just realizing that he is not who the thought he was all a long when it's comes to his sexual orientation... Can you imagine what that can do to a teenager's psyche!.... He is a jock...and playing the part of the jock is his social contract..High school in North America for that matter is all about image...Was he wrong to ignore Sky ..Definitely . One has to remember though that these lads belong to different social groups...they didn't even share lunch tables at all and if memory serves me right their association at that point was clandestine..They were meeting under the context of tutoring at Sky's home and not hanging out in public. So I ask my fellow readers, did anyone really expect a struggling Ryan at that point to ditch his usual crowd to come and hang with Skylar at that beach party?. Remember it's all about image..High school is hell after all. Plus you had taken time to show us facets of Ryan that he doesn't show to the public and that's why I personally believe that impatience on Skylar's part is what causes what leads to whatever happens after. I like to believe that Ryan was going to find a way to talk to Skylar which he was on his way to do and what did he find...him kissing and being ass grabbed by Gabriel...I would like to hear someone honestly tell me that any talking between Skylar and Ryan was possible after that.. I agree that Skylar would bounce back faster than Ryan because he has had longer time to accept who he is..