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OMG!..Graves such has delusion of grandeur...eh...The audacity to make such a deal...At first I laughed then after calming down a bit ..I felt sorry for him...he has no idea what bind he just put himself into.. You are the expert on the human condition Sir, what drives people like Graves? The MVP for this chapter is Caleb....that young lad took one for the team literally....I felt so broken on his part ..Now I cannot wait to have Trump and his people get their just desserts.... this is the first time you have made Caleb really human ...he has always been this perfect intelligent automaton....Here you stripped him of all that and gave us a young man who is swimming in a sea full of hidden monsters..

Can't wait...🫡 ..

I swear to God...that mother and Son duo need karma biting them....I mentioned last chapter commentary that I feel for my Dean..Nothing sucks like having bottled up feelings....been down that round and it sucks like hell.. Before was worried for Julian....now am worried for Dean. @vanalasyou better not drag this misery and angst on for long otherwise am going to sue you.🤣...An angsty Dean depresses me. Thank you!

Each time I read the concluding lines of each chapter ..I wish I had time travelling abilities🤣....That way tomorrow would come sooner .. This chapter made me feel sad for this version of Biden ...Dementia is a bitch..eh.. That being said ...you mentioned Tommy and Peter being the fulcrum of this book...After this chapter ..I am beyond convinced...you are so brilliant Sir !

Professor is becoming crankier each day.🤣

A marvelous chapter....I felt sad for the deceased crew members of the midget submarine...as you called it.... You must have a lot of fun writing Peter...my most favourite was the marine saying Peter threatened to smother them with ennui...or something of that effect...I don't doubt for any second that he would fail....that fella is something else! Thank you!

Professor ,just put us of misery already and tell us..haha...Assume we were too out of it to do homework🤣

Well..Yani has always been unhinged. In a beautiful way ..That fella is not impeded by anything 🤣

In my country we have a proverb ..I will rephrase it in English....It goes something like ...'Only underestimate a small man from the other bank of the river's When was reading Peter's sequence could not help but feel that proverb is apt..

For me this chapter reinforces my belief that Robert is a spineless man....he cannot seem to make up his mind and stand up for himself....To quote a certain blithering orange clown of a president ...'Shame' When the story comes to an end, I reckon Aiden should get a whole lot of therapy because...eh...thats Uber manipulation ... I loved that Julian outsmarted the old geezer...and unveiled him for what he really is.....a street thug masquerading as High society Patriarch..

You ever read a character and wish all the bad stuff happening to them....well for me that character is Arthur Hayes .. That's old geezer needs to be brought down ... Thinking about Aiden ....he is a twat sure, but I like to believe he is a pawn for his mother and grandfather's thirst for power.....Imagine growing up with someone as shady and manipulative like Sophia..

Well Versatility never seemed so hard as Jacob will soon attest😄😄... That being said..even though you put up a disclaimer ..about this not being based in reality...it sure does have echoes of US2024....I had to read the sequences of Plouffe and the Law folks twice..You outdid yourself there Sir.. I am so giddy with excitement for when Will drops that bomb on the RNCC and the DNCC ....I have even theorized the looks on their faces when they realize they were played for fools .haha

What did Will call them in his head ...dumb as hammers🤣🤣

Good morning....you are warranted it... You Sir work too hard 🫡

I know it's just a story....but reading that scene made me want to take a cold shower several times over...that was beyond disgusting ...It makes me wonder how those folks in Hollywood during that monster Harvey Weinstein reign of terror..

I had the impression he was young. Like a teenager . Late teens at least. .reading this chapter makes him seem older than my earlier approximation..

Gripping....Nate reminds me of Icarus...flying so near the sun and getting burnt for his efforts .. That being said ..I find myself trying to guess Pax's motivations..

Just one question ...do you reckon Will read Sun Tzu' Art of War from cover to cover ?.😄..I ask because that bespectacled nerd 's strategic mind is scary ....I got glimpses of it in the last book ...but his put down of Harper Blaine at the ice rink ..now that is strategy embodied.

I can wager that Laura will cackle on reading your rant😄😄...because you have accurately captured my frustration with these 3 men...Your irritation however warrants a study because these fellas have certainly made you Uber irritated. that's testament to Laura's brilliance in crafting them...

My...you outdid yourself with this chapter ..I had a feeling the teens would be separated after reading last week's chapter...Am glad to see I was not wrong .... That being said ...the 'Sandkan' family has to have the best luck in the world how else would one explain how Andreusz keeps finding trouble and yet escapes unscathed ..eh.. That Bartos has might ..and two types of it it to boot(some sort of precognition and Telekinesis) makes him a dark horse in this story... Am glad to see the paths of the Royal family(Negos) and the rest of the heroes,even if it's only Andreusz at this moment, converging...Have been restlessly waiting for them to come into contact ...Just a reminder if you don't mind,I seem to have forgotten....Is Otello the same prince who deciphered the stories or that is another prince.? Thank you!

What Just happened?..I personally nominate Chapter 9 to be the best chapter yet of the written ones in Carter's campaign..Now the fun can earnestly begin ...That was genius Mr.Lydon.....Tomorrow cannot get here soon enough .. My hope is we have the A-team(Will,Caleb,Lisa and Brody) back in the same room.....because ass kicking is about to start... The last portion of this chapter is award worthy material I swear ...the sequence of the trio in the bar and Will at the Mansion finally getting his epiphany that the only way forward is burning Trump and his acolytes......C'est magnifique! Thank you!

And you succeeded...

It's the crotch goblin part for me that...😄😄 Well...if the last chapter was any indication...the only thing that matters to Arthur Hayes is power and control...blood not that much....The manipulation of Aiden is an indication of how nefarious he is ..

That would be murder..haha

You are not alone in that regard...hihi.. I called the first time and @vanalas shot me down claiming Dean is straight..😄