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What Just happened?..I personally nominate Chapter 9 to be the best chapter yet of the written ones in Carter's campaign..Now the fun can earnestly begin ...That was genius Mr.Lydon.....Tomorrow cannot get here soon enough .. My hope is we have the A-team(Will,Caleb,Lisa and Brody) back in the same room.....because ass kicking is about to start... The last portion of this chapter is award worthy material I swear ...the sequence of the trio in the bar and Will at the Mansion finally getting his epiphany that the only way forward is burning Trump and his acolytes......C'est magnifique! Thank you!
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And you succeeded...
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Chapter 13: The empire strikes back
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 13: The empire strikes back
It's the crotch goblin part for me that...😄😄 Well...if the last chapter was any indication...the only thing that matters to Arthur Hayes is power and control...blood not that much....The manipulation of Aiden is an indication of how nefarious he is .. -
Chapter 13: The empire strikes back
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 13: The empire strikes back
That would be murder..haha -
Chapter 13: The empire strikes back
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 13: The empire strikes back
You are not alone in that regard...hihi.. I called the first time and @vanalas shot me down claiming Dean is straight..😄 -
Especially since they go at it alone....it's them against the ice...with no help from outside whatsoever ..just one's will,strength and stamina..
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You are sort of telepathic....haha...in my comment was going to say this To my sequence reminded of this guy above...the Olympics when he won that gold medal .🤣
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The Three of Us, We’ve Always Been So Misaligned
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Three of Us, We’ve Always Been So Misaligned
Good thing @Laura S. Fox nipped that thought in the bud long ago .hihi...- 36 comments
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Chapter 13: The empire strikes back
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 13: The empire strikes back
Okay...there are really nasty people in Valerata...and it seems Arthur Hayes and Aiden become odious each chapter that comes up....Sophia..I don't even know what to make of that one . Thank you! -
My..oh.My...This chapter served a gourmet..damn!.. That was just so marvelously written....I almost felt sorry for that harpy Blaine...that was a take down like never before.... You Sir need to keep having these invaders get humiliated ....That was just so beautiful ....the way he didn't even give her any significance..damn Will Carter can serve 🫡🤣
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Sometimes....one can take so much..until they cannot anymore...Will Carter was a badass ...French never sounded so powerful than it did in that address..🫡
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In most shifter stories ,unlike vampire stories, changing a human is dangerous..I have read a lot of them and I can say with confidence that they mostly never change into shifters ..Changing fundamentally changes the human ..so in this case Jack would not be a clairvoyant. Maybe @Laura S. Fox will change that.
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[Memory, Senior Year, May] – Terrible Mistakes
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, May] – Terrible Mistakes
We all wanted to know what caused the rift ..but damn If I was prepared for this chapter ... This was a train wreck....all 3 guys working on assumptions....I do not even know what to add since @Cane23 and @LeeSA have got covered it...Brad was just ....cruel.. That was like adding salt to an open wound..it makes things worse and Lyn was already feeling worse...Damn! -
That was one banger of a cliff hanger!..Jack finds himself in peril ...from a ghostly interloper...it's getting a little crazier with each new chapter and am all for it
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I don't think it's that kind of shifter story @drpaladin.hihi
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Oh you Sir know how to make a boy's day🤣🫡
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Chapter 1: Meet Nate and Pax
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Meet Nate and Pax
Whoa!....I cannot even begin to explain how I felt receiving a notification for a new story..... At first reading ..it seems so straight forward and simple...till one reads that last scene of Paxton ...That is when one knows there are in for a thrilling ride.... Am all for it....even started running theories in my imaginative mind..hihi.. Thank you! -
[Memory, Senior Year, May] – Terrible Mistakes
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, May] – Terrible Mistakes
This chapter finally clinched it for me...the part where Alex told Lyn that he was not a good friend ..or something of that effect in a previous chapter.. Personally for me this chapter shows Lyn is bad shade ...He really was so self absorbed to the extent that he could not seem to think about what was going on with the others...- 39 comments
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Am super excited to have our resident geek back with us..
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Well Ned seems to have a different opinion on the matter....those Carter men can be quite resilient ..
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Chapter 12: Julian is back and not everyone is happy.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 12: Julian is back and not everyone is happy.
He had a fate worse than death ..becoming an invalid, paralysed from the waist down if I remember who wetted himself.. -
If someone had told me Enrico and Ned would take a tumble in the sack..I would have tagged them crazy 🤣 🤣...Guess loneliness can cause strange phenomena . That being said ...Graves is starting to grate on my already frayed nerves .
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Chapter 12: Julian is back and not everyone is happy.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 12: Julian is back and not everyone is happy.
That will just make him even more bitter and cruel...You remember that villain in Gael's story ...how that is a fitting end for Arthur Hayes...🤣 -
Is there something worse than a dick because this Graves fits that
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I have never wished so desperately to see a villain meet their end like I do for MocVann....that woman rubs me wrong
