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Very wrong ...Father must rue the day he thought Will was easy picking ...he forgot the unwritten rule...Always steer clear of the quiet polite ones, they are the most dangerous when provoked..
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You must have had fun writing Will's last part of the speech...and that scene when he makes his exit....that is meta🫡
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I was giddy when I read that ..I almost wished Enrico was playing on Andrew's team....they would raise such beautiful chaos and make Father rue the day he decided to mess with the Carter clan and Canada😂
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Chapter 4: Hidden agendas
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: Hidden agendas
Make sure you send me VIP ticket to his chicken coming home to roost moment .That man grates on my nerves to no end... -
Chapter 4: Hidden agendas
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: Hidden agendas
Eh..you forgetting that in your universe ..the characters sort of practice some form of Confucianism...you know the whole filial piety shtick..respecting elders and all that shit?😂 -
Bravo!...that chapter delivered and more...I like the smirk on Andrew's face when he delivers that speech to Smith....now going to be restless till first chapter drops ..damn!
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...and they lived happily ever after... This has been a wonderful journey @Tony S.....Creek,Forest,Dalian ,Marvin and the others ..may we meet again...hopefully😂 Thank you!
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How does one move on from a painful loss ?.This book offers an insight on how to go about it. We are introduced to our protagonist Creek , a single father who is adrift after losing his partner.We follow his journey as he moves on from grief to healing and new love through his interaction with the characters introduced along the way. It is well paced tale with good complex characters..Highly recommended piece of feel good story telling.
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Chapter 4: Hidden agendas
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: Hidden agendas
In the previous chapter comments...someone tried to say we should give some leeway to Robert...that he is torn . I find him spineless and irresolute.. That is two chapters in a row that he has allowed people to steam roll him... In trying to please everyone, in trying to maintain peace the chasm between him and Julian grows ever larger ... My God....Sophia and Grandpa are something else...Those two are nasty pieces of work! -
Damn....another bloody cliffy 😂
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"Yes," West answered, his voice wary, watching the birth of a monster... That was the death knell of of the White King that was previously Will Carter.....It's scary but epic as hell
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I have wanted to see the Dark Passenger in Will Carter unleashed ....thanks for delivering that. Though I must admit like West and DG am freaking scared of the Grey Monarch that is Will now😂
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This chapter made me cry . It's all about family...It was nice to see Dalian/Creek and by extension Marvin all healed/healing respectively... This was love and family at its best
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The wait was worth it.....that chapter delivered everything and more...
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Chapter 4: The forbidden Bond
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: The forbidden Bond
I keep hoping Xander/Lysander will subvert the prophecy...You know the whole free will and all..Like just because you were born/created to do something ,doesn't mean you follow the preset path..but judging by the closing scene ..my hope will be in vain Thank you @vanalas. -
This chapter validates my point of why I was Team Marvin....That man regardless of his personal demons is a really noble and good person...He loves with grace....any other person would have gotten weird on learning Creek had fallen for Dalian ..Not our Marvin...he accepts it and even 'blesses' it in his own way ... I feel sorry for Dalian...that people who should have loved you wanted you to diminish yourself for their comfort(Lucy) and his Dad was busy giving the son space when he should have been closer . All in all this chapter was superb .. resolved everything that had to be in a way Thank you!
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Yet another superb offering . ..that anchor Laura Vance reminded me of some anchor from Fox News....you know the ghouls who masquerade as new anchors on that accursed TV network..🤣.. I am just happy that the DG is done playing nice now....that was epic!
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Now my fellow readers can see why I mentioned last time that it's an exercise in futility to play a guessing game where your stories are concerned ...
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What a nasty piece of work Cloves turned out to be!...and cloves are not even a nasty herb/spice🤣🤣 That being said ...this story is supposed to be about Dexter and Reese and yet without knowing it ...Colby became such a big part of it....He is just so superb! Thank you!
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Conditional love really sucks...So Lucy wants Dalian to diminish himself for her comfort ...Sometimes when I read stories on GA I wonder if some of these characters are a reflection of what is going on in the real world... I mean I understand such attitude from the side of the world where I come ..but read it happening in Europe and North American adjacent societies makes feel sad for our human race
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Well...is Rook on permanent cynical setting because that lad is wound too tight ..he could use some loosening!
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Damn...I had to read the ending scenes of Will Carter in Parliament...That was not just a gambit!...That was like Mr.Lydon aptly called it ...throwing down the gauntlet.... Sometimes Will can be frustrating but it's moments like these when his terrifying brilliance,cunning and strategical mind are on display that I take a bow. That was pure and ruthless brilliance..am still in awe🤣🤣
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There is something definitely in the water in your universe that makes most of the men in your works to suddenly become dense......like they suddenly become illogical at the drop of a hat....Robert is shaping up to be one of the most spineless men you have ever written and it's just chapter 3... That being said @Summerabbacat come here already....we have dastardly characters to bash(Grandpa,Sofia and Aiden)....and wish for all bad things to happen to them🤣🤣
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Z Zdain is a living portrait of an angst ridden tortured youth🤣
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What a depressing read this chapter was!...Basically Zdain's sexuality in this story is a tool and vulnerability that is exploited by dastardly forces....First the dwarf and now Renn.. That lad cannot seem to get a break..
