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Reading this chapter made me get the same vibes I get whenever Dexter's passenger from the Dexter TV series takes charge ..haha
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To borrow and misuse a John Wick quote ...I have waited...I will continue to wait🤣🤣
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Theories...theories and questions 🤣🤣
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Sometimes one has to walk in the dark to see the light at the end of the tunnel ..Hopefully PM Carter wisens up sooner because the enemy they are up against fights dirty...and leaves no quarter.
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Damn...Det Owens is one tough cookie🤣
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Dixième partie : Les Légumes
Seraph28 commented on W_L's story chapter in Dixième partie : Les Légumes
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Damn...what a way to end the day!..that was marvelous!...the cliff hanger was ...superb🫡
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I was thinking when reading that this is actually a Peter chapter!..Like we are experiencing everything from his eyes and it makes the chapter all the more richer for it.
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I can tell from how much dialogue(Internal and otherwise) you give her whenever she makes an appearance..
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Now that is what you call a plot twist!..Maendrym Cors..Didn't see that coming... That being said.. this chapter and the characters in it are all paying the price of the original sin.. Zdain and Venr have to pay the Piper for the bargain their grandfather must have made with Kal'ditha and whoever he serves ....Bartos has to pay for his father's bargain.... It hastens back to what I mentioned before ..Ambition is good but one has to know when to stop lest their find themselves on the precipice like Berron Rigailon is.. I like to think in a different set of circumstances, Elyssa Monteilon might have been a good mother .Even great..However if you are unlucky to be saddled with a weak POS like Dareis...then chances of that lessen .. Thank you @Lupus
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Sarah has three captives...don't forget Ned...we don't know where she has him
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No...I don't want Sarah to die...I want her to be imprisoned...For people like her,death is too easy.. We still don't know who Father is ....
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Indeed...he needs to be burnt too..
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One down ..three to go!...Brad .Sarah..Abernathy.... I almost felt sorry for Gallagher until I remembered the smirk on Sarah's face in the plane when Matt realized they were indeed being renditioned..
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He had it coming..he had it coming...He only had himself to blame..
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You Should See Yourself
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in You Should See Yourself
For me this is a chapter about dichotomy...About control and vulnerability as displayed by Alexander and Lyn.. In their intimate session and the after math .. we see this dichotomy come into play with the way both take turns to relinquish control to the other .We then see the stoic and emotionally A intelligent Alexander in a rare moment of vulnerability as @Cane23 pointed out....Personally for me I felt like this whole chapter and interaction between the two fellas was a form of emotional undressing even though in the case of Lyn it's temporary for now.. -
See?...that's why I mentioned it would be an exercise in futility ..
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One would think by now am used to 'endings' but this was something else...it's more like a respite, like a stop over before the journey continues ... Like the past chapter ,this one needs to be savoured ..I feel like comment is just excess embellishment... Thank you @LittleBuddhaTW
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Please Literary Diety. Don't take away our Jake😂😂😂.. That being said ...you have really set the ball running in these last three chapters Sir...I would say we get a bet rolling with my fellow readers on who the killer is and who Paul's paramour was but it would be an exercise in futility!..You Sir don't make it easy on us.😂
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You Should See Yourself
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in You Should See Yourself
Why is it always a cold.shower after a sultry scene @LeeSA....a cold beverage can equally do wonders ..😂 That being said....like you am also collecting my thoughts on this chapter ..it was a doozy of information😂 -
Chapter 2: Julian feels trapped in everything
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Julian feels trapped in everything
Someone once said ..sexual orientation is fluid or something of that sort😂😂...just kidding... That being said.. fact that the boy is closer or even same age as Julian speaks volumes 😂😂 -
Eh..who are we to refuse the offering...thank you Sir😂
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God..!..Brady never seems to catch a break...eh.. I hope he gets a win soon...because those hits must hurt like hell..
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Chapter 2: Julian feels trapped in everything
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Julian feels trapped in everything
Oh that household is nasty!...When was reading at the beginning of the chapter,I had hope that Robert was different in a way...but I guess that was too much to hope for. Imagine the pain that Julian must be going through after having been made to feel like he should feel grateful that he was adopted and all the time Robert had a biological son.. who could have handled the emotional abuse coming from the expectations.. One aspect I didn't like was a hint of a Dean/Julian romance...that would be so out of the blue and unearned😂. Thank you! -
I was watching some Chinese TV series yesterday and coincidentally there was a scene where two characters are playing Xiangqi( the Chinese chess) and then one character mentions that one must always exercise utmost calm during the most chaotic moment...Reading this chapter made me remember that scene. Hubris is such a bitch.Abernathy has always overestimated his strategic mind ,thinking he has no equal...Guess this chapter just disabused him of that notion and now the die is cast.. Hmm...super marvelous action sequence and thrill Mr.Lydon🫡
