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Damn....another bloody cliffy 😂

"Yes," West answered, his voice wary, watching the birth of a monster... That was the death knell of of the White King that was previously Will Carter.....It's scary but epic as hell

I have wanted to see the Dark Passenger in Will Carter unleashed ....thanks for delivering that. Though I must admit like West and DG am freaking scared of the Grey Monarch that is Will now😂

This chapter made me cry . It's all about family...It was nice to see Dalian/Creek and by extension Marvin all healed/healing respectively... This was love and family at its best

The wait was worth it.....that chapter delivered everything and more...

I keep hoping Xander/Lysander will subvert the prophecy...You know the whole free will and all..Like just because you were born/created to do something ,doesn't mean you follow the preset path..but judging by the closing scene ..my hope will be in vain Thank you @vanalas.

This chapter validates my point of why I was Team Marvin....That man regardless of his personal demons is a really noble and good person...He loves with grace....any other person would have gotten weird on learning Creek had fallen for Dalian ..Not our Marvin...he accepts it and even 'blesses' it in his own way ... I feel sorry for Dalian...that people who should have loved you wanted you to diminish yourself for their comfort(Lucy) and his Dad was busy giving the son space when he should have been closer . All in all this chapter was superb .. resolved everything that had to be in a way Thank you!

Yet another superb offering . ..that anchor Laura Vance reminded me of some anchor from Fox News....you know the ghouls who masquerade as new anchors on that accursed TV network..🤣.. I am just happy that the DG is done playing nice now....that was epic!

Now my fellow readers can see why I mentioned last time that it's an exercise in futility to play a guessing game where your stories are concerned ...

What a nasty piece of work Cloves turned out to be!...and cloves are not even a nasty herb/spice🤣🤣 That being said ...this story is supposed to be about Dexter and Reese and yet without knowing it ...Colby became such a big part of it....He is just so superb! Thank you!

Conditional love really sucks...So Lucy wants Dalian to diminish himself for her comfort ...Sometimes when I read stories on GA I wonder if some of these characters are a reflection of what is going on in the real world... I mean I understand such attitude from the side of the world where I come ..but read it happening in Europe and North American adjacent societies makes feel sad for our human race

Well...is Rook on permanent cynical setting because that lad is wound too tight ..he could use some loosening!

Damn...I had to read the ending scenes of Will Carter in Parliament...That was not just a gambit!...That was like Mr.Lydon aptly called it ...throwing down the gauntlet.... Sometimes Will can be frustrating but it's moments like these when his terrifying brilliance,cunning and strategical mind are on display that I take a bow. That was pure and ruthless brilliance..am still in awe🤣🤣

There is something definitely in the water in your universe that makes most of the men in your works to suddenly become dense......like they suddenly become illogical at the drop of a hat....Robert is shaping up to be one of the most spineless men you have ever written and it's just chapter 3... That being said @Summerabbacat come here already....we have dastardly characters to bash(Grandpa,Sofia and Aiden)....and wish for all bad things to happen to them🤣🤣

Z Zdain is a living portrait of an angst ridden tortured youth🤣

What a depressing read this chapter was!...Basically Zdain's sexuality in this story is a tool and vulnerability that is exploited by dastardly forces....First the dwarf and now Renn.. That lad cannot seem to get a break..

I guess it's finally official ...Dalian and Creek are #relationshipgoals.... Personally was Team Marvin ...but this is better.. the connection was there right from the beginning ....

Me too ...it was such a a hard read for me...the good news is at least subconsciously he knows he is just a piece of ass..and that somewhat gives me hope that all is not lost .

That was a really depressing chapter!....I really want to enter the story and wrong MacLeod's neck ..how dare they! Then remaining 5 chapters are going to be a hard read for me...Mental manipulation has to be made a crime against humanity ....

Careful Sir...we wouldnt want you keeling over because of a caffeine overload🤣

If I had to hazard a guess.....I would say two people....on the home front Trace...that man is perceptive as hell....outside the home front ...my money is on Lorraine...

X ray vision denotes that he has exceptional observational skills.....Alexander got what he wanted because it was given to him willingly.

Damn....what a cliffie!🤣

This week am personally calling this chapter..Inextricable Dilemma.. Lyn finds himself in a situation where he is damned either way...Disclosing the affair to Bella,which would be the right thing, is a no..since the backlash would put him at odds with Brad. .Not disclosing it is also going to eat him up tremendously as we all know Lyn's overthinking and empathetic nature.. That being said I changed my assessment of Luke in this chapter. .I remember some folks saying he is immature ..The stunt he pulls with that text message clearly shows he has a manipulative streak in him...Being manipulative requires smarts and the fact that he is able to get Lyn in this situation indicates he we as readers have sort of underestimated him.. The last part of the interaction between Luke and Lyn is a doozy...A lot is said without being and like Lyn am left wondering what exactly is going on. @Cane23 referenced Alexander's dialogue from some previous chapter about Brad's knack for self destruction ..I like to think he must have figured out Luke/Brad's affair from the moment Luke is introduced.. The wedding, if it does take place, will be one hell of an event in this universe ...Personally would give anything to have front seat to the drama😉 that surely to ensue .

I disagree with you @spyke...about Alexander being a puppet master that is....I like to believe the present events are taking place with a week or two.. Chapter 1 has already firmly established that these men were not in contact for 8 years..So that negates the whole Alexander pulling Lyn's strings..Don't you think?...