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  1. Seraph28

    Chapter 20

    Yes...but then he has people who have shown him time and again in that one month that they are in his corner....Trace told him he has gotta to start meeting people half way.
  2. Seraph28

    Chapter 33

    Oh God!..that's akin to what our president possesses.Total Executive Power and we have had 39 years to endure it.. A certain excuse for a British MP tried that a few years back and he nearly lost his Premiership ..Thank God the Supreme Court there is not partisan like ours here or the US one .. Mr.Lydon...that is a really scary prospect .I.have always believed any head of state of who has the Executive authority to appoint the judiciary and members of the legislature is just too powerful..That type.of leader is a threat to democracy!
  3. Seraph28

    Chapter 20

    At some point ,like Celia hinted sometime back, somethings become tired...I know some readers are all about giving Joel some leeway but I personally find this a little taxing now. @Okiegrad has mentioned Joel has fear and anxiety..Granted it's true but he is not given himself any favours.. You cant help yourself if all you are doing is putting up walls and keeping people at bay .He is doing it with Trace and his family ..In his head , they are just a stop over .He is not willing to give folks a chance, to meet them half way.That part with Coach Finn had me wishing could enter the story and tell him we don't always get what we want and that life is about compromise ...this part below pretty much irks me I probably am alone in this but I find Joel a little prickly and quite unlikeable for me..Now I know folks will say his life has been uprooted suddenly and all that but he really has an asshole streak to him .Sorry @Krista..pardon my French there🤣. I guess it comes with putting on a facade for long..it just rubs me the wrong way and that is coming from someone who lives in a country where being queer is dangerous ..not to mention that am a femme projecting guy....now I really gotta stop..am now ranting.. Thank you for this update @Krista
  4. Seraph28

    Chapter 33

    Good morning Sir...wouldn't mind a cuppa of that brew too
  5. Seraph28

    Chapter 33

    Hmm..Mr.Prime Minister you just crossed the Rubicon Sir.. I can say with certainty that he has signed his own political obituary.. My..did Will Carter coming out swinging with that declaration..eh... You do have a knack for ratcheting up tension Mr.Lydon🤣🤣.. Now am going to enjoy seeing that spineless man get what is coming for him
  6. Seraph28

    Chapter 32

    Poor Julien doesn't know what is going to hit him🤣...I almost feel sorry for him.
  7. Seraph28

    Chapter 13

    Eh..those are a lot of questions @Philippe🤣...You just made Mr. Aterovis work load a little heavier..
  8. Seraph28

    Chapter 13

    Well...that last scene of the chapter definitely shows Killian has to muster his gifts lest he finds himself in a more precarious situation ... I think guessing the killer this time is going to be hard like a lottery 🤣
  9. Am I the only who thinks this is so far the best chapter of the 6 that have been posted so far!.. One rarely comes across characters like Reese who are so resolute and smart like him...He was able to see the poisonous allure of pills and nipped it in the bud before it had a chance of blooming into something worse .That there was marvelous! Dexter was something else too...It takes guts to admit you have a problem like he does in this chapter .that's just something so ..surreal Thank you!
  10. Seraph28

    Chapter 22

    Thank God...our impulsive hotheaded golden boy is coming back..
  11. Seraph28

    Chapter 22

    God!...I had to take a walk out after reading this chapter!.. There are some really dastardly people...and equally dark things in this universe..
  12. God!..these are really messed up people..the whole lot!
  13. Seraph28

    Chapter 30

    It's becoming clear ..that Julien overestimates his charm...Maybe he was not an apt pupil during seduction 101...because it must suck having your seduction attempts rebuffed in the way the two brothers do..even though they find him physically appealing🤣
  14. I once mentioned that each past chapter enhances it's corresponding present one...It's on clear display here.. This chapter basically gives us a glimpse into Lyn's psyche...he feels so inadequate that the only way out of the situation is to make up an imminent family move and then take Brad to his 'room'. Like @Cane23 aptly stated ,his room is the only place where he seems to have a semblance of control and in his mind he feels by taking Brad there ,he has some of that control back. Much is 'said' with Brad's reaction to Lyn's home...I like to believe he finds the place wanting..like the expectations he had about Lyn just been blown to smithereens..In that moment I cannot help but feel pity for Lyn...It must be so taxing having to put on a facade full time... That being said ...this was a sad chapter for me....Sad in that a whole lot would be solved if these two young men would really talk...but then again the story would be over already...right?🤣
  15. A bit?...tell us something we didn't suspect🤣
  16. And that woman has certainly has supreme moaning game and durability!🤣🤣
  17. Oh Sir..he did more than drowning if it's even humanly possible🤣
  18. Seraph28

    Chapter 12

    At least the self-absorbed Killian finally worries about someone ...that is something good
  19. Eh..Sir...let me have this win🤣🤣.....okay..He crossed the Rubicon🤣
  20. Seraph28

    Chapter 37

    I felt the stress of Finals week as though was there ..It took me back to my High school and University days...Those two weeks are always minor hell on earth .. That being said ..am glad the 3 musketeers have resolved everything .. Thank you!
  21. I always compare CasualWanderer82 to the Pied Piper of Hamelin...Not that we are rats mind you🤭..His stories are the equivalent of the magical music of the Pied Piper....and we merrily follow the music by reading each story that he posts.
  22. Seraph28

    Chapter 29

    Oh sorry...so basically while others are merrily rolling a long during festive season...you are up in arms trying to fight off an allergic reaction😏
  23. Seraph28

    Chapter 29

    I wonder how.Peter was unable to clock that ..he has always struck me as a perceptive one..🤣
  24. Seraph28

    Chapter 29

    Come on Sir...I use Axe...it's not all that bad..and it's sold expensively here ..at least in our currency🤣🤣
  25. Seraph28

    Chapter 29

    At first I thought there was some redeeming quality in the PM....After this chapter however, I amend my opinion...He needs to be brought down...Does Defenestration still work?🤣
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