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Chapter 26: Blood, Money and Betrayal
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 26: Blood, Money and Betrayal
Oh my..The amount of tea serving and cooking in this chapter was epic! I personally would named this chapter the Tale of the formidable Clare Hayes .The amount of dressing down she does in this chapter is on another level...I liked the subtle connection to a certain president of a country who has bankrupted several of his own businesses..haha That being said. .am I the only one asking for an aneurysm to happen to Arthur Hayes ..That old geezer is like a pimple that just cannot go away . I mean you cannot keep overestimating yourself the way that man does without having some undisclosed mental issues.. I feel Julian should slap some more faces ..because I heard that slap all the way this side of the world -
So much going on here in this chapter I literally had whip lash😂 That being said. ..Jack is just something else...eh..Even under pressure..he always has a joke on the ready..
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Veridien is not for the faint heart indeed...That place is a hazard ..eh
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Owen Donnelly is 90% of what we go through here in my country..You literally have no agency and have to tow the line of familial obligation and expectations .God forbid you make a mistake of even slightly going off trajectory . Thank you for this one!..It hits so close to home.
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Such a beautiful chapter...I dare say Azula's heart is thawing ..
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This chapter highlights transitions for me..The dynamics of the relationship between Ade and Zdain that is ..The chapter starts on such a high note of reunion only to end with the unspoken/undeclared 'truth' that the 'ship' has sailed .That there are totally different people now .No where is it more highlighted by how assertive Zdain is when it comes to their coitus and also when Zdain calls out Ade on his denial..Am not even going to start on Josel popping up in Zdain 's mind . That being said this chapter is awesome..
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Chapter 25: Dead men tell tales!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 25: Dead men tell tales!
The plot thickens!...Nothing pleases me more than seeing Sophia and Arthur's schemes come to nothing. All the hate and plotting against Julian only for him to end up getting everything they wanted..I would go crazy😂😂 -
I liked how Theo gave 'lip' to the evil spirit..that was super awesome...Nothing sucks powerful beings like ignoring them...it bruises their ego a great deal.
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Thank you!..That's all I can come up with..just feeling the story now
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Oh.my!.To borrow from Gen Z speech...you cooked with this chapter @CasualWanderer82🫡....I do not even know what to say...Am that 'speechless' That being said am I weird for feeling a little 'sad' for the clever ones?..Because I have a feeling a reckoning is imminent. I don't think am ever going to be stop being in awe of how you are able to craft characters ...The description of Mouse is just a class of it own Thank you!
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Yes..there is that angle too. The scheming am talking about was in his thought patterns regarding Elyssa and Temogam. In addition, I personally feel that his loyalty to Vargan has run it's course so to speak
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I was talking in terms of being scheming...He is scheming too. Every thought ,as shown in this chapter, indicates he is a player of the game of politik. Maybe because he grew up in an environment where it was all about scheming for power .
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The amount of politik in this chapter gave me a migraine 😂....Despicable people ..all of them... It makes even feel sadder for Venr and Zdain.
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I could not agree more... I have even elected to treat it as a sacrament and not make a personal comment ... Yeah...it's that beautifully profound!
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I think @Laura S. Fox is on a mission of sorts to get the Best red herrings Award for this one...because the amount that have been dropped so far warrants a case study That being said I cackled reading the part where Ali urges Larry to ram it deep and hard...eh... Which brings me to his attitude towards the Golden Princeling ..there seems some resentment in there an indication of unresolved business..
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Spartan is indeed an apt description..I have been thinking the same thing.... Only you would think the bleak Veridien could use a dose of the Rocky Horror show..haha
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Whoa...just speechless here ...that last part of the chapter was something else ... I always revert back to biblical King solomon's proverbs...you know the one man proposes,God disposes..This chapter is a clear vindication .. Thank you @CasualWanderer82...it is good to have you 'back'
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Am in awe of Julian...He built himself up ..Anybody else might have completely broken down but not him. That is resilience embodied... My deepest respect for him comes from the fact that he completely excised himself from his family. That is something some folks in real life try to do but never achieve.. Thank you @Nuno R.F.C.R..You just keep surprising me ..
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You couldn't have stated it any better.. it is indeed beautifully written..
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Blimey!...never seen a warning delivered with such grace..haha
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I don't even know where to begin with this chapter..I mean we have always known that this day was coming..but knowing so does not quite prepare one for the real thing when it finally happens That being said...I knew Victor was despicable from reading him in the first chapter but even I was not prepared for what we find out in this chapter...It reminded me of that saying absolute power corrupts absolutely ...There is this common phrase I hear people use that our worst enemies or people who hurt us are those closest to us. Catherine and Victor are just the worst..eh. That you can invoke such a visceral reaction is testament of your craft Sir..Thank you!
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Exactly....life is full of nuance
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I had always had an inkling that Catherine was very much aware of what was going on ..and that to me is what makes this more tragic ..Like Victor says to her in that argument ,she is as equally a monster as he is. They are both despicable in my opinion.
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Chapter 24: Who killed Robert Hayes?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 24: Who killed Robert Hayes?
@vanalas...good to have you back... Richard's will be back in a few days better not turn out to be months before we find out what the will says😂😂😂 That being said .. I like how Julian brought Arthur's abysmal circus act to a screeching end😂...He cooked that old geezer seriously -
I felt sorry for Young Theo in this chapter ..Nothing sucks like having nobody believe you even when you are actually speaking the truth. That being said ..Jack and Vince are truly fish out of the water in this timeline..eh
