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Well...even adults sometimes cannot differentiate the two....it's a tall order for us to expect a 14 yo lad to do..even though he is just a character..

Welcome to the club...have been getting 'pissed' off for the last 3 chapters... He is treating Jack as his fall back option..

Stoker seems like a good addition...Like someone who does not abide by rules...at least thats the impression I got from that brief introduction... Thanks

Well...good thing towards the end of the chapter he realised he is the problem...Hopefully in next outing he displays some degree of personal growth because honestly he is coming off a stinker

Oh God..Lucian is such a broken man ..He needs serious therapy.. his compulsive behaviour is a recipe for disaster.He is so messed up that he does not even seem to recognise that his brothers care about him ...Bruno Greene really did a number on that one...eh.. This is yet another chapter in a row that Daniel's harmful yearning for his father's attention and 'love' has driven him to the precipice of depression!. You warned us sometime back, to be prepared for this story...just realised you were not exaggerating...I can only imagine you who puts this 'darkness' in writing....All the more respect to you! Thank you....next week cannot come soon enough..

When I was reading ...this chapter couldn't help but think..if angst were a person....he would have had a field day with these blokes😂

The learning curve for Killian is going to be helluva steep..

Emotions are just weird..eh

I do not even know where to start with this one...It is like Nick becomes insufferable each chapter. We are supposed to empathize with him since he is just 14 and is just a novice at emotional entanglements....However I find I cannot seem to do with each new chapter update . He knows Jack loves him and he takes advantage of it.He is not intentionally malicious but he is indeed taking advantage of it. He is a smart young lad and like to believe he has the emotional maturity to understand the consequences of his choice . What does he do instead?..He naively thinks he can have Jack as a bff when he is busy schmoozing around with Noah. Knowing every well how emotionally fragile Jack is... Seeing the part below Had me up in arms ...in my head of course!...😂...Was like bitch please!

Sentiment is mutual in the case of Randy-Rick indeed . Maama Carpenter will just have to get on with the program..😂

Well...as longer as you don't get stressed trying to bring them all out at once...will take anything you dish out whenever you can😂

Like we expected otherwise?..I swear one day I will drop my therapy bills on you😂😂

That was intense...eh.

This has been a beautiful tale...have enjoyed the journey but as is always the case ,all good things come to an end. I like to believe that these young men are thriving wherever they are in their universe... I have learnt that societal expectation(in the case of marrying and having children) is really detrimental one's holistic happiness. That parting scene between Rick and Randy is really sad to read for me...these are two lads who definitely love each other deeply but for the expectation of marriage and children. Thank you for sharing this story with us and I hope the Literary Diety wherever they are will bless you with more inspiration to craft more riveting tales to indulge us with.

That was a beautiful written battle...now Scarlet-Oeus need to be smudged as soon as possible.They have caused enough trouble

@vanalas.. I think am becoming jaded where you are concerned Mr.Despair😂😂...You know when was reading the scene with his friend Chris...I somewhat knew the final scene of this chapter would come to pass .Not necessarily how it ended...but that Jace and Matteo would cross paths again...which reminds me what is that you have a penchant for ghosts reappearing when the main characters are either driving or running errands?😂😂😂 Thank you for the update .. going to anxiously wait for the 'what happens next'😂

Now this is what they call thrilling!...This was an action thriller at its best!... Thank you!

Something always happens ....

Haha...I can imagine your reaction indeed....You must have had a laughing fit at such a blatant contradiction.😂

Honestly ..am just still in awe of the fact that you wrote this story series years ago..By the time you wrote this series, I was probably still in Primary school ...Age does wise us up indeed.

Well you have had the benefit of experience and probably become a parent ..that tends to give one a new perspective.hihi...

Yes it was....am really surprised... You have never really read anything that deals with Shifters and the like?..But at least you have watched some stuff on tv?

Okay...Killian Kendall is acting like a prick for two chapters now. He called out Asher sometime back for being prickly but now he is the one being so...that scene with Adam...was too much to take... When was reading the interaction at the Salon...couldn't help myself thinking about the salon that I go to to shave my hair.....I guess there is an Anita Johnson everywhere..

Oh I understand....Wolf shifters are born..What you are talking about are werewolves...In fiction usually werewolves are made ...usually through being bitten and such.

Oh no...I think you changed it or something...Theodore,Ryder are 100% wolf shifters. Not to mention in almost all of Wolf shifter literature....Shifters are born...not made.