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Thank you!..I am just glad you did not get upset because some of us were being a little off about the 4some. We readers can sometimes have some inflated sense of entitlement 😂😂

Careful..you need to rest a bit...we don't want you losing your creative imagination because you are running fast . 😂 😂

Eh..just mucking with you😂..Am a quite well adjusted lad in person. I had a time to think about it really. I have read stories with incest in them before..I just didn't want the four guys to have an ongoing sexual relationship beyond that one time for the sake of the plot. I felt that doing so makes the story convoluted for the sake of it. My understanding of this story right from the first chapter is that love brings people together .People who are so different (DeSh and Rory/Keiran, Ewan/Gemma and soon Elion/Holden) that it defies logic yet they gel beautifully together and are happy with each other. Your other stories follow almost the same pattern..light and day melding together to form something beautiful. That is what I understood personally!

One good thing about being young is that resilience(at least for most) comes with it. Like it easy for young people to move from the precipice if given a chance.This chapter has illustrated this .The Joel depicted here is different from the one we met a few chapters back. This Joel is alive,smiles and even throws in a joke or two.He knows he has a support system in Trace and Celia...not to mention the fact that he noticed Roy's brown eyes😂.All these indicate someone who recognises that all shall be well,just as longer as they finish the day. I don't know if this really happens in real life but Lisa is something else. I don't know how one's personality can flip like that in a moment..That is some extreme bigotry and hate ..eh Thank you @Krista...looking forward to the next chapter...Now am going to fantasize about Roy with- Nice- Brown-Eyes Mason😂😂😂😂 Good day!!

It's too early to count off Colt...I say we give him a chance😂😂

Oh God..what a frustrating Chapter!..I found myself wondering what happened to old school communication!...am like if you consider Blake your best friend ..then just be honest with him .Am inclined to believe that this is going to cause a problem between them. Not the gay part and thing with Ryan.. it's the hiding that fact from Blake,especially since Blake was being open with him regarding Beth.

Some of us even booked our therapists😂😂..after all you had forewarned us anyway

Am trying to come up with. Ship name even...😂...

All good things,sadly,come to an end.😂😂...we will have the beautiful moments of the journey though..

I owe you an apology...I was among the group that was against the incestous foursome...even when you said it was a plot device to drive it forward(the plot). I thought you was just indulging your fantasies.😂I am glad to know you were right. When you introduced sanctimonious Elion and gave Holden some bit of prominence in this chapter,I knew your crazy imagination was building up another ship for us 😂😂. There is something that I find a bit 'unfair' to say the least..it's Gemma. You have given other characters depth but not Gemma.. I noticed in this chapter you have even made her out like someone so rigidly stuck to traditions, not to mention her relationship with her children is not good. When you wrote Keiran going through the trials there was a trial which showed him of his flaws..of not treating people better with respect and kindness .I feel like in that interaction with his mother,you kind of reverted Keiran to his cold pompous persona which defeats the purpose of the fifth trial you so painstakingly gave us earlier. Thank you and I am filled with trepidation that this tale is winding up.It has been one of my favourite pass times in the past few months .. Blessed Day to you!

I find myself wondering how @KKirk will resolve this with each chapter update😂...I would pay a fortune to get into his headspace to find out😂😂

Oh Wencel...you are not as astute as you think. Reading this chapter made me somewhat feel sorry for the guy..The expectations heaped on him by his father really messed him up. I like to believe he would have been a decent human being. Hopefully he has good ending in his future...He does grow on you after all. Thank you!

Oh now cannot wait for the remaining chapters....am sure we will be satisfied with the resolution you come up with.

Young uns are Innocents and easy to mould into something you can control...I like to believe that is what Elijah was aiming for since his Noah project had been a 'failure'

Omg!..that was really naive and self serving...eh.. I cannot remember the last time a story character frustrated me more ,to the extent of pulling my hair(which I don't have 😂) This chapter was a real downer for us Jordan/Calvin shippers... Am sure some folks here are going to be pretty pissed off with Calvin right now .haha .I wouldn't want to be Calvin Thank you for the update!

Even though we have not been introduced to Alex/Wolf properly...I am inclined to believe he is a smart person...am sure he must have noticed Alarik observing him from across the street too... Just curious...playing a game of guess...what do you think must be going through Alarik's mind at that particular moment in time ..when he faces Alex?😂

The things you come up with ..eh😉😂

Would you blame him?..Not that I think he is so...He is a 26yo just coming to terms that he was not as straight as he thought... For those of us who are gay,the first couple of interactions were exercises in awkwardness and eagerness to please .Not to mention the relentless need for attention..I believe that is the case with Justin

Whoa...that cliff hanger is going to leave us restless till next week Sir😉 I have always heard about the infamous 'Dutch bluntness'...I always pegged it as bias ..that last scene between Alex/Wolf and Alarik. Just curious...how do you come up with Alarik's mind mumblings?...It is almost as though you do it too Thank you for the update!

You are something else...I googled Saint Sebastian ...and I understood why his Mum had that apoplectic fit😂😂

Reading that part of the story was just so fun....especially Skylar's mind monologues..haha

Omg!..the trashy hilarious dialogue and snarks in this story need an award of their own....Lex is just something else..and that is saying a lot considering Skylar is like the Prince of Snark and Shade😂... The 'Gay Peter Parker but with better lighting'...is just so epic. I cannot however decide if it's better than Kenzi's We’re aiming for ‘twink with a tragic backstory,’ not salon Jesus.” This chapter is really a treasure trove of beauties...I hear Tragic Twink Patron Saint Sebastian .. Celestial himbo of divine vengeance!😂😂 My Mum saw me laughing to myself when was reading this ,am sure the poor woman must be having doubts my sanity now😂😂 You are just something else with this tale @Jeff Burton...Thank you!

I agree...Noah seems to have a manipulative streak in him.

Whoa...this chapter was something else...It was complex and beautiful. It captured the angst in such a relatable manner. Just puzzled and amazed in equal measures that a 14 year old would be studying about Jean-Jacques Rosseau and Montesquieu and actually understand them. The amount of work that went into writing this tale is just so impressive... I am now filled with trepidation for Nick...that secret halloween party has the makings of a hurricane headed to Linden Hall. It did not help that Mark remarked about the debauchery that happens at such parties.Suffice to say am anxious for Nicky and by extension Jack. Thank you!

Plot thickens. it was like re-watching The Universal Soldiers movies all over again .