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Well...thank you for giving me the impetus to really get into the pysche of the characters..๐..You must have had fun conceiving Alexander...๐
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At least the puzzle of the bracelet that Alexander has on eight years later has been solved ...Alexander ,even back then, valued Lyn...getting that bracelet from Lyn was like winning the world for him... I like how he is always calling out Lyn for being slow on the uptake...even back then..haha
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You have no idea how much I wished could enter the page and whoop Nick's ass...just so he could get some sense into his romance addled brain ๐
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He is young and eager to please.. his innocence is still intact as regards relationships is still intact
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Well, your faithful reader here will just keep waiting for the chapter updates๐...I want you to know that am filled with awe that you can conceive something so dark, twisted and yet it's something that unfortunately happens in real life in some places. Am looking forward to what you will indulge us with in the future after this tale comes to its end
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It was wonderful.... it's good to break the 'tragic gay trope'..You know the one where gay relationships never end well..remember the type of LGBTQ themed movies of yesteryear .the ones which always ended up leaving you depressed instead of happy ๐๐
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I was going to scream had this been another story of yours without a happy resolution ๐๐.. Thank you...blessed Weekend!
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Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
So every late 1990s/2000s YA romcom is your source of inspiration for this tale ๐๐ -
Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
Haha...some of us even read at work . Only we have to make sure we control our laughter lest we are deemed loonies๐. What I meant by soon was that...it will not take many days like our other favourite story updates. -
I know that you mentioned in the last chapter comments that all the people in that house need therapy. I agree Lucian is so messed up ..he is such a broken young man. Daniel is caught in the middle of this mess, second guessing where he stands with his father. Peter was messed up for life . I know it's a story and that nobody is without redeeming qualities...but Bruno Greene is just a monster.There is no way about it.. Last chapter Daniel tried to pass it off as their father being lonely ..but that is grasping at straws. There has to be something that made his wife turn to other men. Those things never happen out of the blue..Then there is the cruelty and child abuse he subjected to the two elder children. There is no excuse for him..he is a man who gets off on dominating and controlling others because he has the power to do so. I know characters usually have redemptive arcs and all but there is no excuse for what he did to Lucian and Peter.. I feel like giving him a redemptive arc is sort of white washing all the horrors he inflicted on those young boys,now men!..He might not have physically abused Daniel..but he still messed him up. I find myself hoping that I don't get to end of the story and find Bruno Greene playing happy family after all he has done..I feel like that would be condonation. Books/stories,personally to me, are meant to be sources of education..Bruno Greene having a happy ending in this story would be like saying folks can do cruel and bad things as longer as they can ask for forgiveness... P.s...am really passionate about this story๐๐..Don't mind me getting antsy. Thank you !...Blessed weekend to you!
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Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
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Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
Oh God...my weekend just got better ..that means it will not take long before it drops here...whoa... Btw ..your chapter titles are a marvel....they are so funny and catchy -
Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
You have watched enough High school/college rom-coms to know when someone makes statements like the ones Ryan makes ,always the person that is the topic of discussion is usually the person the other person is crushing on seriously.Not to mention all those pen throwing antics of Ryan..were just so he could get Skylar's attention๐๐- 64 comments
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Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
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Oh Nick!...you hopelessly romantic naive boy!...Teenage emotions are a mess..this is has potential to be one hell of a mess!
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Chapter 10: Only When He Said I Could
Seraph28 commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 10: Only When He Said I Could
Your have an active imagination๐๐.. Personally I do not think Mason and Casper are in 'cahoots'.. The way Mason treated Eli on Friday is not a way someone treats one with whom they are in a BDSM relationship..Not that I know how they act๐.I feel like Mason does not even understand his own feelings where it concerns Eli.Not to mention he has no idea what is going on between Eli and Casper. Casper on the other hand is so into the whole Domination thing ..all is he doing at the moment is conditioning Eli into what he wants him to be and poor Eli is feeling adrift because he has no idea what his role is in all of it. Thank you! -
Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
Oh God...next chapter cannot come soon enough..๐....This chapter was like an inverted love triangle from One tree Hill...you know Lukas scott/Peyton Sawyer/Brooke Davis...only this time it's Skylar/Ryan/Gabriel....๐๐...It is going to be fun reading this angst riddled combo๐๐... Skylar indeed show throw himself into a bonfire and consider it as performance Art ..haha Thank you!...just so excited for the next chapter! Blessed weekend!- 64 comments
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And so the hunt begins...this cat and mouse chase is going to be so epic!
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Act III - Master Of The House
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Master Of The House
What a thriller of a chapter !...I repeat..Mother and Lord Valerius need to be brought down..They must, to channel Darth Vader, choke on their ambition๐๐ We will wait for you!..just enjoy your vacation -
Me thinks you do 'coddle' Keiran too much @Cane23๐๐๐๐
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Oh the tragedy of teenage romance!๐.... Me thinks Asher doth protest too much ..eh..
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If a child in my country did that, they would be in a world of pain. They would be beaten blue black for having the temerity to talk back to the parent๐๐
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That's the battle of wits ...am looking forward to. Its always nice having a 'villain' who is on par with the hero ..it makes for good viewing and reading . We your humble readers await whatever you offer us Sir๐๐
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Not some rides it turns out๐๐.. Just curious,when you set out to write this story, did you ever find imagine it would get this big and long?
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I take back my word. I like Enrico....the anti-hero vibe you have given him is so impressive..It has the Anakin/Darth Vader vibe going on there...Like really of all the characters in this story,Enrico seems to be the most beautifully complex . Like you took your time to concieve him and it shows..vividly. I like the way you have structured this chapter...and find myself wishing you would do it more..I mean showing us what is happening at the same time on different places...It is like watching a movie..at least for me it is Thank you!
