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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Well...it's GA @drpaladin...stranger things have happened...opposites attract is a running theme in all her works.. plus Clairvoyance can come in handy when you are an Alpha and have your pack members' lives at stake . There is an author here, have forgotten the name, who specialises in fantasy especially shifter romance and I can tell you, all most all the main pack members are mated to males๐ -
Motherโs questions & queers dancing
Seraph28 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Motherโs questions & queers dancing
Oh Matt and Gray have come a long way. ..the personal growth these two lads are showing is just marvelous to say the least!. Made me envious ..of having to dance with a bloke you like in public like that.. -
Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Well..how sure are you?..Besides @Laura S. Fox has not explicitly outlined the rules and customs of the supernatural community in this universe...besides I like to believe that she did not just include this for fun. It is the classic Chekhov 's gun! -
The wait will be worth it...they are after all in a precarious situation...what with that evil entity trying to possess Huxley .Romance tends to take a back seat when you are busy trying to survive death or a possession in this case๐
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seems we are still not in the know...you will probably be back from the Mediterranean when we get to know๐๐๐- 58 comments
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
I am counting seconds till next Sunday pops around..๐- 58 comments
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
I have my theory that Jack is Theo's fated mate.....I have read enough shifter stories on this forum to recognise the pattern .. two characters who are fated mates getting on each others' nerves without much effort.. You notice how they seem to wind up each other....that right there is typical sexual tension๐๐๐....I could be wrong though!- 58 comments
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That statement right up there just flared up my hormones๐๐๐... God! GA tends to evoke the inner horniness in most of us Thank you!....Can't wait when the chapters start dropping ..whoa
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Basing on the way he killed Marcus ...a robbery stage up would definitely raise immediate scrutiny .
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Oh Enrico...you badass๐...There must be something wrong with me if am rooting for a duplicitous and ruthless character like Enrico, right? You really had fun writing this chapter ๐ ๐.It must have brought out your inner boy worship of action figures Thank you!
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Eh..in your mind they are Nick and Schmidt๐๐
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Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Not unless you want me to literally become Pop๐ -
Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Finally someone says it out loud ๐๐..There is something a little loose with you @vanalas..you can't keep doing this over and over again..unless there is some deep rooted issue that makes you churn out such work...tale after tale ๐๐๐...I know some really good therapists...could recommend you....if you ask ...Nicely of course ๐ -
Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Did you expect anything different?,..This is @vanalas's MO...the characters are happy and then pop...a shady ex or obsessed best friend of one of the characters shows up to create upheaval...we have seen this chorus play out many times๐๐ -
Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
You ever watched Chicago the musical?..There is that song ..Cell block tango...especially the chorus...you know...I think it applies to you here๐๐ 'You had it coming, You had it coming',.'You only have yourself to blame'๐๐๐ -
And here I thought Rook and Huxley had started eating each other's faces already๐๐๐ If you don't mind me asking...would it possible to have a multi-perspective chapter.?I mean like having both Huxley and Rook's perspectives in the same chapter? Thank you!
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Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
me thinks you doth protest too much๐๐.....I wish could make a bet with you๐...I would definitely win of course -
Just take your time...we the 'faithful'๐๐..will wait for whenever you are ready to indulge us with your imagination..
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Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Go and read the synopsis @VBlew....it's scary ...It felt like someone had dropped a pail of ice water on me ...I suspect it's before Noah...I feel like I become too attached to stories here..it's almost scary. I didn't want Elijah to be proven right but somehow I know he will be if the synopsis is any indication -
Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
@vanalas...but why?...why build up our hope so...only to shatter it into smithereens ๐...Honestly for once I was like finally a story from you where our main characters are in a conventional relationship...doing conventional relationship stuff like bickering over finances, fighting then having earth shattering make-up sex..You know normal conventional things...but now with this new character you introduced at the end..you are going to create upheaval for this beautiful family who have just finally found the way back to each other!..I had to go back and read the synopsis for the story and it left me scared for Noah....But why?.... This is something unusual and this is your story ..you are the boss but please for once ...give us a story that does not glorify toxic relationships.. and whatever happens don't break up this family...Is that possible?...which deity can I pray to so that my humble plea is answered?๐๐ It sucks being an ardent reader of your works sometimes you know...I once said you must get off on despair ๐ ๐....Am.quite sure you are going to prove us right with this tale . Thank you as always ..Blessed week ahead! P.s .Am off to booking appointments with my therapist because I know you are about to spike my blood pressure in the coming weeks๐๐๐๐ -
I think what makes Jamie/Luca's world different ..and by extension Simon's whom we are yet to 'meet' is that the main characters have come into primary contact with direct abuse.They collided with the abuse head on either emotionally,physically or both. Writing such stories,I like to believe, makes one to go into dark spaces so to speak. That can somewhat affect you as writer,at least that is what I believe.
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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Oh God!...the dynamic between Jack and Theodore ...is just so nice to witness....it reminds me of banter between Jeff Huntsman and April Summers from Be the Father of this child . The way they pushed each other's button..it's fun and nice I hope you don't mind me asking...but if you had to base these characters on the Hollywood actors...who would Ryder,Danny,Jack,Vince and Theodore be based on?..It's something that has been running g in my head but cannot seem to make it work right..๐คญ- 58 comments
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Thank you ..am glad you re-traced your steps in Luca and Jamie's world...Especially since you have so much going on..you have like 3 ongoing works on your hands ..that must tax your creative imagination to no end... Thank you!
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