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  1. Seraph28
    Oh Wencel...you are not as astute as you think. Reading this chapter made me somewhat feel sorry for the guy..The expectations heaped on him by his father really messed him up. I like to believe he would have been a decent human being. Hopefully he has good ending in his future...He does grow on you after all. Thank you!
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    Oh now cannot wait for the remaining chapters....am sure we will be satisfied with the resolution you come up with.
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    Young uns are Innocents and easy to mould into something you can control...I like to believe that is what Elijah was aiming for since his Noah project had been a 'failure'
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    Chapter 49

    Seraph28 commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 49

    Omg!..that was really naive and self serving...eh.. I cannot remember the last time a story character frustrated me more ,to the extent of pulling my hair(which I don't have 😂) This chapter was a real downer for us Jordan/Calvin shippers... Am sure some folks here are going to be pretty pissed off with Calvin right now .haha .I wouldn't want to be Calvin Thank you for the update!
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    Even though we have not been introduced to Alex/Wolf properly...I am inclined to believe he is a smart person...am sure he must have noticed Alarik observing him from across the street too... Just curious...playing a game of guess...what do you think must be going through Alarik's mind at that particular moment in time ..when he faces Alex?😂
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    The things you come up with ..eh😉😂
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    Would you blame him?..Not that I think he is so...He is a 26yo just coming to terms that he was not as straight as he thought... For those of us who are gay,the first couple of interactions were exercises in awkwardness and eagerness to please .Not to mention the relentless need for attention..I believe that is the case with Justin
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    Whoa...that cliff hanger is going to leave us restless till next week Sir😉 I have always heard about the infamous 'Dutch bluntness'...I always pegged it as bias ..that last scene between Alex/Wolf and Alarik. Just curious...how do you come up with Alarik's mind mumblings?...It is almost as though you do it too Thank you for the update!
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    You are something else...I googled Saint Sebastian ...and I understood why his Mum had that apoplectic fit😂😂
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    Reading that part of the story was just so fun....especially Skylar's mind monologues..haha
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    Omg!..the trashy hilarious dialogue and snarks in this story need an award of their own....Lex is just something else..and that is saying a lot considering Skylar is like the Prince of Snark and Shade😂... The 'Gay Peter Parker but with better lighting'...is just so epic. I cannot however decide if it's better than Kenzi's We’re aiming for ‘twink with a tragic backstory,’ not salon Jesus.” This chapter is really a treasure trove of beauties...I hear Tragic Twink Patron Saint Sebastian .. Celestial himbo of divine vengeance!😂😂 My Mum saw me laughing to myself when was reading this ,am sure the poor woman must be having doubts my sanity now😂😂 You are just something else with this tale @Jeff Burton...Thank you!
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    Chapter 9

    Seraph28 commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Chapter 9

    I agree...Noah seems to have a manipulative streak in him.
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    Chapter 9

    Seraph28 commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Whoa...this chapter was something else...It was complex and beautiful. It captured the angst in such a relatable manner. Just puzzled and amazed in equal measures that a 14 year old would be studying about Jean-Jacques Rosseau and Montesquieu and actually understand them. The amount of work that went into writing this tale is just so impressive... I am now filled with trepidation for Nick...that secret halloween party has the makings of a hurricane headed to Linden Hall. It did not help that Mark remarked about the debauchery that happens at such parties.Suffice to say am anxious for Nicky and by extension Jack. Thank you!
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    Echoes of the Deep

    Seraph28 commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Echoes of the Deep

    Plot thickens. it was like re-watching The Universal Soldiers movies all over again .
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    And we are patiently waiting in the stands ..with whatever you concoction you brew😂😂
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    You forgetting these are teenagers?haha ...Angst and not being logical are the default settings...Just harken back to your teenage years!...the hormones are in control during that phase.😂
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    Careful there @vanalas....you are drifting😂😂...Besides through your 'proxy' Alma you sowed the seed😂😂.. What is that tot of wisdom...oh yeah..'The road to hell is paved with good intentions'.. Am an ardent reader of yours... When a character starts out like Elijah in your stories...there is never a change of heart, some sort of introspection to become better.No..they instead double down on their insidiousness. Besides ,a villain doesn't have to be as ghoulish as Ian Sandoval...even emotional abuse and casual cruelty like the one Elijah subjected Noah and Jace to respectively illustrates the moral compass of a person .
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    Chapter 9

    Seraph28 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 9

    That's why I earlier lamented about Enrico's insidiousness...Whoever he answers to is in the dark....however if he serves himself, then the Intellegentsia will not what he hit them...From Faslane, Petrovic and now the stealing of the Humboldt project...Enrico is just so thorough.
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    This was such a bitter sweet chapter...Elijah seems like dust that cannot go away..eh. I only have one wish when it comes to this story...that JaNoah is the end game...no matter what will happen in between...I am so going to petition the Literary Diety so that he can 'persuade' you😂😂😂😂. Thank you!
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    And we the readers are all the more grateful for it since it's something you do on the side ...That's pretty impressive..Juggling work and your passion ..that is
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    That Interaction between Ryan and Skylar ... the private tutoring request is so CW cliche 😂😂...Am inclined to start a GoFundMe in case the bigwigs at CW consider sueing for 'copyright infringement'' . All of a sudden you just evoked in me the urge to rewatch Gossip Girl,Mean girls,90210 and most of the High school/college themed rooms that were the staple of the Late 90s and the 2000s😂😂 Thank you Sir!
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    You must have been giddy while typing that reply😂😂
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    Welcome to the club .haha
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    I pegged the satirical format from the very first sentence of the tale ...Anything that has Hollywood in it is a harbinger of the beautiful chaos that is bound to be happen😂... Someone previously commented that they like what you have done with this story ....like it's taking a vacation to recover from intensity especially from the Just,Maybe story .
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    Chapter 8

    Seraph28 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8

    When I read the previous chapter .I was thinking Enrico is another despicable,cunning and soulless ghoul..but after this chapter.I somewhat have a different perspective of him...Sure he is ruthless(one has to be if you are in National intelligence Service)..but his interaction with Ezra Reed somewhat makes him a little humane!. it reminds me of Kendrick Leighton from your other story.. He makes really bad decisions but in the end you get to understand that he was just human albeit a broken one. I don't know what your plan for Enrico is but with this chapter am excited to see how how it pans out. Thank you!
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