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Oh Lucian is so messed up....he needs serious therapy!..I cannot help but feel sorry for Daniel...he is really living in a bauble of delusion when it comes to his father

I understand ...but don't you think Skylar was being a little biased here....For all we know Ryan could just be putting an act...I believe you have watched enough CW productions to know...the 'dumb jock has more depth than he seems' trope is prevalent. The dumb act is always to mask the pressure they feel from the expectations heaped upon on them. Not to mention that @Jeff Burton warned us he is going to pen a story that is an amalgamation of all the genre tropes of stories here.😂😂.

Just don't burn out in the process😂

This chapter was like those trashy 90s High school movies/tv series ..and it's just so good

Ryan being dumb is subjective bias on Skylar's part. If Ryan was dumb...he would not be in AP English classes....those require some level of aptitude .

You really went there...I thought you were mucking around when you mentioned you would write a story with that title.😂😂 You have attacked everything from CW....Instagram....it's like you are writing satire this time round....You are so crazily imaginative this time..Am all for it😂😂 The way you have described the resident himbo(Ryan) and bimbo(Madison) as having cumulative emotional range of a paper plate ..that was comically brutal😂😂....The Gossip girl vibe is something else..

Damn if Insidious was a person he would be Enrico .eh . He is playing 3-D chess with the Intelligentsia and they have no idea they are in his game....this is just so marvelous

I stopped trying to predict the character projectories of your stories @vanalas..hihi... Ian started out bad and got worse as the story progressed ....We don't know much about Elijah so far...since we have not got Noah's perspective of him....but dragging away a new born child from his father ...is just plain cruelty . So I am inclined to guess that Elijah will be another nasty vermin that will have to be squashed down the road!

Two chapters updates that you deliver and more...No words this time...at least Theodore is not all bad..he is an acquired taste😂😂.. Ryder is the hot headed one while Danny is the calm and collected one. Thank you!

For some reason most of our community is caught in a perpetual loop of fighting .First it was the discrimination, which was largely successful....but then there is the frivolousness that seems to be a default setting of most of the community😂

This tale is sadly a reflection of our community ..Happiness is fleeting when it comes to our community.Most folks are never satisfied . I have read stories on Nifty Archives in the Relationship section ...it's really sad ..stories written there..eh I like that Brad never loses hope in love. He is always positive that someone special is out there waiting for him to find .

The domesticity of it...was so beautiful...I loved it too... You always bring a new perspective when it comes to the chapters

well...regardless of it being your Sci-fi/thriller debut, it's really beautifully complex and riveting .

This is by far among the best chapter analyses of a work you have ever done @Cane23...I do not even have anything to supplement it...it's that superb!

If you are going to Greece to relax...then just do that sir...You only get two weeks off to let go😂...You could even indulge your fantasies while at it.😂

I tell you...even the video has a soap opera vibe...I liked the song so much that it was my ring tone back then ..it didn't help that I was going through exactly the same thing the artist was singing about..😂😂

It was not just walk and talk though ..personally for me it was sort of revelatory . It means whatever is going on has a large scope as earlier thought...So our Josh and by extension the Kincaids might just be a small piece in whatever chess game he is inadvertently caught in Thank you!

Have you ever considered moonlighting as a match maker?😂😂...you have this penchant for match making folks in your stories... If another High Priest of Cian dispenses from their vows, then it's surely a sign that Cian wants his followers to have love in their lives and rather than being held back by the archaic rules of the church that was founded in his honour😂😂

This story is definitely an equivalent of what the current political situation is..eh

I find myself hoping it's a long read with a time jump ....So far Elijah seems like he has no redeeming character ..right from the go in chapter 1

Oh..does that mean Elion is going to become another prominent character the way you introduced Ashkareth😂...Please please😂..keep him around .

He was on his way....just starting to accept he has messed up .

Not to defend him but reading this chapter somewhat 'exonerated' Jace...His fear of the unknown made him change into a prick. Imagine having your life upended by a 'miracle pregnancy'..especially since it's something you never imagined would happen or that you planned on at such a young age. He recognised that he has stupid and was just on the cusp of starting to make amends when egomaniacal Elijah came in and sent him adrift all over again. Only this time his adversary is an extremely wealthy egomaniac who is hell bent on asserting his control without any qualms.

Oh this poor young boy!..he is emotionally all over the place and that never ends well..it is sad for a lad of Noah's age to be so duplicitous even the naive Nicky noticed it.

This was yet another epic episode of this story...I almost wish next week could come in the blink of an eye. That said ...I could not help but feel sorry for Lynton. Whatever happened to his family seriously eroded his self-esteem to the extent that he takes overcompensation to another level. He has masked himself that I am inclined to believe he does not even who the real him is. From his keeping up appearances act in College to the present ..Even when it comes to his sex partners...he is hiding himself and yet sex is where people let go..let the masks slip but even then he cannot. His choice of partners(twinks who are smaller than him in size and endowment) and his macho posturing with Alexander in that dark room .The way he was thinking about his sexual prowess.(from slow to hard fucking if I remember correctly) is him trying relentlessly to maintain the illusion that he is dominant ,that he is in control. Reading this chapter just opened another insight into Lynton 's psyche!..That lad is a broken fella trying so hard not to unravel completely ..I cannot wait for next week long enough😂😂.. Thank you!