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Thank you...your explanation was technical...like you know psychology. Mine was just based on observation of the people have seen here who have ADHD

Oh no...revealing hints about a potential Zdain-Josel romantic relationship at this point feels a bit premature...I mean I don't think those lads are even have the right head space at the moment...😂😂... You know @Lupus...sometimes I imagine getting into the story to smack some gumption into Zdain...so that he can just come out already that way his sexual orientation is not used against him.. You have no idea how would love to go mano-o-mano with Renn😂😂 P.s....if you don't mind me asking do you plan to make this a long story series( I mean more than 5 books) Thank you!

Here too...and my Dad favoured his leather belt.. My mum on the other hand would, depending on the degree of anger, alternate between slaps and her flip flops..

Here in Uganda if you dared to speak to your parent like that on the phone,you would be in a whole lot of trouble!. First you would be lucky not to get expelled for using obscene language(It's a serious offense around here in schools)..don't even get me started on the punishments that you would get. Filial piety is a very big deal around here . On the parental side, depending on how conservative your family is ,you would be disowned but mostly you would be in a whole world of pain(am talking serious spanking with the cane).. Jack's mental health is somewhat vague since we only get to an insight of it from Nick's perspective but I am inclined to believe he has some sort of mania and ADHD... and from his comment about fear of unrequited love , lack of emotional connection with the parental units/family.

Each time we get a perspective from one of the villains...my frustration boils over😂😂...I know it is a story but can't help myself getting frustrated with the Zdain-Josel dynamics...I know it's a slow burn ,that our heroes are supposed to encounter so much but God...it's.. a lot. It's like the villains have an upper hand at each point.. Then there is that frustrating plotline of Zdain 's feelings for Josel and his unrelenting fear to hide it which is giving the villains(Renn, the small woman) added advantage over the heroes...and it just makes for a bleak reading....Next Thursday can't come soon enough for me😂 Thank you !...

You got your work cut out mate😂

Oh you poor lad!..what have you done?..Nothing good comes from withholding information or poor communication like Nick is doing here ...

I agree with you....this is going to get messy pretty fast!..But these are 14 year old teenagers ...at that age ,one goes with the flow/vibe without considering the consequences.

I cannot muster even a sliver of pity for the witches...self preservation can only go far.. To borrow from the Cell block tango lyric of the musical Chicago..🎼'They had it coming. They had it coming .they only have themselves to blame'🎵🎵... The coven village shows is a lesson in how appearances can be deceiving!..and Morwenna does deserve a burning... I could give anything to have the power to enter the story to witness the comeuppance of the vampires...they really really need to be brought down a few pegs...okay lots of pegs 😂😂 Thank you!

Not just saving a baby....it's also having to deal with a no good emotionally abusive excuse of a spouse(Jace)

I figured as much@drpaladin when I did not see a comment from you!...and you are among the most critical readers here.😉

That would be petty of me..and selfish on my part to want you to accommodate my sensibilities at the expense of the story ..I notice how you are choosing to forget the part that the foursome will include two brothers ..which technically means blood magic of a sort will be involved😜😂😜... As if anyone will ever hold you back....am inclined to believe you are head strong in person anyway...how else would you come up with characters such as Keiran and Ash ..usually an author's work is a minor reflection of the author..or say they say😂😂. P.s...If one of our in-house masters(@Cane23)..is on board..who am I to get in the way of your sex muddled imagination😂😂😂

It's your story and vision @mastershakeme and only you can decide the storyline.. Sure they will be some of us who will not be on board.I for one feel like it would be contradictory since you went through the trouble of having Desmond explain the dangers of blood magic...and this coupling in some way is sort of blood magic.I guess maybe it's because the magic system in this story is a little vague..That is just me anyway . That being said ,just because I am not on board doesn't mean am going to stop being your crazy ardent reader of your work though😂😜...Have after all read all the stories you have here. May your imagination and motivation never waver!

Unpopular opinion from one your most ardent fans here...please please don't let the foursome storyline come into fruition.. I know it's just a fantastical story but can it just be a conventional coupling(two couples who generally love each other as family minus engaging in coitus with each other)...pretty please?😂😂.. Thank you for the update....am glad your motivation is top notch..blessings!

Oh God!....Not a cliff hanger just as the story is getting hot😂😂..Now am going to restlessly imagine the next scene till next week! Thank you for this update ..at least Randy did not turn out to be a waste of time ..

Here we go...and am all for it...😂... It's always good to read a good old detective and espionage take once in a while. thank you!

Eh..you brutal...even though the characters can be an acquired taste in the Vanalas universe . I personally feel they are nice change from the usual same old character tropes...It's nice to change once in a while

You better..haha

You beautiful sadist😉😂....I like like like ...this is a domestic one.. We start at the point of disillusionment and am quite sure what you have planned for us this time is going to be so good....Usually your stories are boy meets cute with a lot of despair and drama before the Happily Ever After....this one is starting with the Not Happily Ever after ..I like it so much already! Thank you! P.s.....If that baby doesn't survive however am taking your emotional upheaval court @vanalas😂😂😂

Now It all makes sense why all your comments come a bit later ..unlike me who responds promptly..haha

I trust this is going to be another beautiful angst and hormone riddled journey!..

I was starting to wonder if one of the Analytical maestros has gone into seclusion....am glad to know you have not 😂😉.. I don't even have anything to add on...you have captured it all and then some when it comes to Lyn and Alexander....thank you!

Well the main characters in @Laura S. Fox's universe always have some X-factor of sorts. It's a fantastical story so chances of Danny having hidden gifts or being more than human are expectedly high.

Eh .indeed that toaster came in handy!...I can't believe am saying this but I now feel sorry for Theodore.. I cannot imagine this story being as beautifully complex as it had your gotten rid of our inhouse clown(Jack)...These guys synchronise like family ...Neurotic Danny, Comedic Jack, Level headed Vince and Ryder.. Thank you!

You have indeed almost completed the genres of GA....😂... Whenever you write that ..I will be among the first to read