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Whoa...two updates back to back after so long is really nice...Thank you! I find myself hoping our Simon is nearby ...anxiously gonna wait for the next chapter update

Duh...am one of your ardent followers...you would not punish us like that..eh ..I would literally enter the story and do the work ..for the good of mankind literally!😜

Oh no...oh no..This is bad ..Really bad!..I know it's a story @CasualWanderer82...but I felt a tear drop after reading this chapter..For the harmony and serenity that is going to be broken by this unrelenting passion!..Even writing this is painful. I prayed to the Literary Diety that you would not go there ..but alas my 'prayer' was to no avail😏.When I got the notification that you had updated was pretty wary of opening it because somehow I knew you were going to drop a clanger on us.. I have somewhat recognized a pattern in your writing.😀..Whenever you update promptly ,usually one of the chapters is emotionally draining ..I shudder to think about the next chapter because I know you are going to throw us off the precipice. That is the power of your writing!..Am going to one day make a wish...to the Diety that one day you will write a story that is just two people falling in love..organically 😜😃😆..I know convention is anathema to you😜...but a lad can wish..eh As always..thank you for this update!.

Ian...is like that persistent cold that never goes away...only he is the virulent kind...That leaves despair and destruction behind . Am just happy Galex is back on....anything else they will overcome..😂. Thank you for the update!

This was a really warm and beautiful chapter...you have captured physiotherapy in such a way that it doesn't seem clinical.Like reading it could feel the connection that Josh has with these people who are helping him on way to recovery. I almost forgot was reading about a teenager who is in recovery. Thank you!

Indeed....drama is the spice of life in your literary universe 😂

You have no idea how much I want those witches to be pegged down..😂....they remind of the witches of the Originals TV show...always scheming for something ..

Looks like he knows he is losing Cal...Remember the previous chapter when he didn't seem that happy that Cal was excited about his date with Jordan. I am inclined to believe that subconsciously Cal has been moving on since he already knew he couldn't be with Alan in real relationship.

Great chemistry does not always equate to a good relationship....Alan's actions in this chapter are those of someone who is running scared because he knows he fucked up.Now he is just realising that he could have lost Calvin..Not to mention he has never been honest from the beginning of their sexual relationship.

I think he is just knowledge crazy....haha

You are not predictable .haha...It's just that some of us have read almost all your body of work and it's always a given that the Main characters always have shit awaiting them each time they are happy

What a bloody menace Theodore is!... I had a feeling it was going to be bad for RyDan...just didn't think it would be this bad ..But then again you warned us .haha Thank you!

It's nice to have you back....it's been. A while....am just glad you updated again.. Power and knowledge can become addictive indeed!..It was such a nice detour from Connor and our lad...and the others Thank you!

Being a good person in the Vanalas universe is detrimental to one's life..especially if you are the main protagonist😂😂

Oh no...that was like a death knell.So much pain conveyed in that statement.. I have read your stories over and over again to know a storm is coming to Willow Creek and with it the inevitable emotional turmoil. Someone is going to lose out even though it's no game..But then again you having a knack for taking us on such emotional whirlwinds😂😂. Thank you for the update!!

Ophelia really does grate on your nerves too?...What Vanalas story would it be without a controlling and cruel bitchy mother😂

That broke me @vanalas. You have really put these two lads through the wringer it's almost cruel..I know one is not supposed to be emotionally invested into story characters but what you have done to Gael and to some extent Alex is worse than what you subjected to Praveen. It's like the universe has decided these two wonderful fellas have to be broken and hurt. Completely hollowed out ! I was looking forward to the downfall of the Sandoval siblings ..but when it came , was left empty. Like it was non-climatic and then you go ahead and pull the rug from right under us. like Galex, and by extension us, have not suffered enough🥹 Thank you for the update.Just thought of something...I think you are developing a reputation as a creator of angsty tortured youths.😂..Your whole body of work so far has our main protagonists being hollowed out ... Going to anxiously wait for next week's update! Blessed week to you! P.s....please do not break up Galex for good😂😂😂

Eh..Alan is kinda manipulative!. And quite self serving. I know this is a story but am so disgusted with Alan.

He is a pregnant 15 year old lad....am quite sure angsty is a default setting for that age😆

Eh hormones can be a brutal bitch😆...I find myself wishing could enter the story and throttle Lanelle's neck😆. Thank you for the update!

Exactly....and Hearst warned him many times....but he thought he knew better ..and now he is gaslighting Hearst for his own mess.

Now I find myself wishing had not wanted the truth to come out .haha... That was ugly...really ugly!...Jamie was really brutal .He was warned many times but he was hungry for fame and threw caution to the wind. And now he is being a git that he has been entrapped .I almost want to enter the story and slap him a few times😃😆 Then there is Hearst....he has to equally blame for this mess...He had many chances to come clean especially when he knew Wencel was circling Jamie...now we have this colossal fuck up on hands...I cannot even Thank you for the update!...Am going to take a cold bath even😆

I thought am the only one who is liking the slow burn nature of it..

This story is just so...fun and catchy so far. And it's just beginning !

Oh ...have you forgotten Renn is just the worst...Don't you remember the chapter where he had a POV?..He willingly serves the dark..Usually such people are evil to the core...totally without any redeeming trait...Think of Bellatrix Lestrange and Barty Crouch Jr in the Harry Potter series.