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    LEGALLY BOUND

    Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story in Fiction

    I trust this is going to be another beautiful angst and hormone riddled journey!..
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    I was starting to wonder if one of the Analytical maestros has gone into seclusion....am glad to know you have not 😂😉.. I don't even have anything to add on...you have captured it all and then some when it comes to Lyn and Alexander....thank you!
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    Well the main characters in @Laura S. Fox's universe always have some X-factor of sorts. It's a fantastical story so chances of Danny having hidden gifts or being more than human are expectedly high.
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    Eh .indeed that toaster came in handy!...I can't believe am saying this but I now feel sorry for Theodore.. I cannot imagine this story being as beautifully complex as it had your gotten rid of our inhouse clown(Jack)...These guys synchronise like family ...Neurotic Danny, Comedic Jack, Level headed Vince and Ryder.. Thank you!
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    You have indeed almost completed the genres of GA....😂... Whenever you write that ..I will be among the first to read
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    Are we still talking about the same thing here?..😂😂...thought we were talking about temperament ...right?😂
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    Chapter 20

    Seraph28 commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 20

    Awesome as usual ...I find myself with an unpopular wish😂.. and hope @KKirk does not 'fire' me from his readers' list.😂..I know these guys are just having a blast since they are friends who share everything. I however find myself not wanting Jim to get involved with all 3 of them. Guess am wishing,in my head of course😉, to see Rick have a normal relationship with someone.Something special that he doesn't share with Randy and Mike....That's just the wish of the hopeless romantic in me @KKirk..pardon me 😉😂. Thank you for the update!
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    Oh dear!...I think you missed the part where Josh reacted to Reed the first time he met him....Josh's inner passenger(pardon me for borrowing from Dexter😂)...I am inclined to believe this will be a slow burn rivals-to-lovers sort of thing .That is if Reed is the love Interest that @Jeff Burton hinted about in some chapter comments back. Am just so excited and hoping he is the one...the dynamics that have been introduced between them..will be so interesting to read .
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    Dan Kincaid is like the king of sarcasm...his interaction with the older William and Priscilla Hastings was stuff on legend😂 How did you come up with that scene of Reed and Josh ?..It was epic!...It has Alexis Carrington-Dominique Devereaux vibes(Dynasty freak here)...I freaking loved it .had to read that segment thrice ...just because😂
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    Finally ...the moment I have been waiting for!...a potential love Interest or is it the love Interest you promised us?..😜..I can already picture the tension that is going to happen btn Reed and Josh... In this chapter you have transported us to the gilded age..given us a glimpse on how old money and the nouveau riche interacted and still do. The polite forced smiles to mask the distaste..the calculating and assessing looks...Reading this chapter was like watching a Julian Fellowes scripted production. Thank you for indulging us with consecutive chapter updates!..Till next time.
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    Complexity is what makes it all the more riveting..this 'friendship' of theirs.
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    Eh...that's BDSM vibes you are oozing with that statement😂😜
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    It's like each week you find a way to outdo yourself!...This chapter was just so marvelous... Brad is either clueless or he is really good at acting dumb. Oh Alexander....now where do I start with him.. He finds tact overrated .There is no subtlety when it comes to him...That can be refreshing . Thank you!
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    Exactly...I just like how he is blunt..he does not mince with words even though it comes off as rude . What do you think, according to you, when he told Lyn this: You don’t. You’re only better organized and neater than me.”
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    Personally I think Alexander is straight forward ....he doesn't play games..in his scene with Lyn outside the bar. It is clear that despite what he said about finding Lynton insufferable, he quite likes him to the extent to bailing him out..
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    I couldn't agree more...it's like each flash back chapter really validates @Laura S. Fox's warning she gave us at the end of the first chapter. ....Lyn is really not a reliable narrator....I for one have got yet more 'insight' of Lyn and Alexander ...as opposed to what Lyn says in the present chapters..
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    Gilded Shadows

    Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Gilded Shadows

    What a tongue twister mate😂..
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    Haha..I think I need therapy😂😂...All of us who were rooting for Troy and Elliot to be the end game just got our hopes dashed. That was beautifully brutal😂😂.. Thank you for the update!
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    Gilded Shadows

    Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Gilded Shadows

    Indeed....nothing is as it ever seems 😂...we are just waiting for you to pull the rug from under us
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    Gilded Shadows

    Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Gilded Shadows

    And that there is the worrying bit...😉😜....sweetness/calm always precedes a storm....and I get this feeling soon the Kincaids' world will go topsy turvy ... Thank you for the update!
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    Someone is gender biased😜😉...it's a beautiful one...especially if he has a combination of their temperaments..
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    A New World

    Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A New World

    At first glance from the story tags, you might think you are going on a teenage angst riddled journey ..but once the CIA setting is introduced the story starts to become a beast of its own.
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    Oh you don't have to worry, well at least to me .what matters is you are able to update when you can. It's always worth the wait anyway!😉😜
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    A New World

    Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A New World

    All the more reason to anxiously wait for next week..😉
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    A New World

    Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A New World

    That Walter sequence had Treadstone vibes about it...was transported to the Jason Bourne universe ..😜..I have said it before @Jeff Burton,this tale is just so riveting..The mysterious vibe around the Kincaids and Adam's exuberance just make this chapter top notch. I pray your imagination doesn't stall because this is epic stuff you are offering Sir.😉 Thank you for the update!
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