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Please don't tell her😂😂

I figured as much ..You know sometimes I envy those folks who have read ahead...two days ago I almost subscribed but then changed my mind.. I would miss the engagement that happens in the comments section.😂...I even patted myself on the back for being so strong in fighting the urge😂😂

Eh..you are right...about so many stories .In fact in so many stories you can tell who the main paring are within the first chapter. This story on the other hand is a multiple character arc story like Wheel of Time.. so for folks like us who have read that, we can get it....what makes your story different is that it's GA forum story but the focus,at least for the first book, was on straight horny angst riddled youths and the only certified gay character was on the periphery... Oh God!..Zal and Ragart are just so different ...and yes opposites attract but eh...not this time😂😂

I like to believe that it's the greatest gratification a writer can get. That your work can evoke a debate among the readers. Take this story for example....all of us have all sorts of theories going and I imagine it makes you laugh when you reading about them in the comments section. Personally for me BDSM is not my cup of tea ,so I avoid anything related to it. However when I read the synopsis of this story when it started here, something about it was catchy so was like let me give this a try.It has also helped that the engagement in the comments section would give me different perspectives . Thank you!

Eh...how come you never talk about the scene immediately after the ironing...the one where he dresses up Alexander...or is that all included in the ironing ?....I liked the scene where Alexander called out Lyn on his poverty too

You know most folks are just inching for romance😂...Folks are used to reading steamy scenes involving the main characters even in fantasy series such as this one...You are on your way to getting the 'Slowest slow-burn ever' award!😂😂...We are in Series 3 and we have no idea who the main romantic pairing is😂😂😂 That being said....am not going anywhere...am here till the end...am after all a Virgo..and we are suckers for romance😂

In this story that adage is subverted ...each of the villains seems to be having their own agenda..so doesn't seem to apply here

No way!😂😂

Now you are being a 'meanie' with that glue assumption about our favourite resident jock😂😂

I don't know what your mind space was like when you were writing this chapter..it's just so intense ...I could imagine the fear that Will had when the doctor said Sepsis and Critical...those words are a harbinger of doom when they are spoken in regards to someone who is the hospital ... Can you imagine , I subconciously skipped the thrill of the Bank infiltration...and was as restless as Will and Jared .😂 Thank you!

I felt the same way too about Brad's nonchalance when it came to the gift that Lyn gave him..He acted like it was no big deal and was glad that at that point Lyn came to the realisation that friendship was better than something more with Brad. Now am anxiously waiting for the infamous event that made them go incommunicado until the wedding invite came in

His thoughtless in that 'You invited yourself ' was so hard to read ..and what is worse is that he did not even notice what it did to Lyn

Indeed...but you noticed Alexander even in the past was not abrasive, sure he is straight forward ..but he is not like his grandfather.

Careful there on the sex part...you are stoking @Cane23's sexual fantasies 😂😂... There are two things to always expect...@Cane23's thorough chapter analyses....and the drawn out sex scenes in your stories😂😂

Well...thank you for giving me the impetus to really get into the pysche of the characters..😂..You must have had fun conceiving Alexander...😂

At least the puzzle of the bracelet that Alexander has on eight years later has been solved ...Alexander ,even back then, valued Lyn...getting that bracelet from Lyn was like winning the world for him... I like how he is always calling out Lyn for being slow on the uptake...even back then..haha

You have no idea how much I wished could enter the page and whoop Nick's ass...just so he could get some sense into his romance addled brain 😂

He is young and eager to please.. his innocence is still intact as regards relationships is still intact

Well, your faithful reader here will just keep waiting for the chapter updates😂...I want you to know that am filled with awe that you can conceive something so dark, twisted and yet it's something that unfortunately happens in real life in some places. Am looking forward to what you will indulge us with in the future after this tale comes to its end

It was wonderful.... it's good to break the 'tragic gay trope'..You know the one where gay relationships never end well..remember the type of LGBTQ themed movies of yesteryear .the ones which always ended up leaving you depressed instead of happy 😂😂

I was going to scream had this been another story of yours without a happy resolution 😂😂.. Thank you...blessed Weekend!

So every late 1990s/2000s YA romcom is your source of inspiration for this tale 😂😂

Haha...some of us even read at work . Only we have to make sure we control our laughter lest we are deemed loonies😂. What I meant by soon was that...it will not take many days like our other favourite story updates.

I know that you mentioned in the last chapter comments that all the people in that house need therapy. I agree Lucian is so messed up ..he is such a broken young man. Daniel is caught in the middle of this mess, second guessing where he stands with his father. Peter was messed up for life . I know it's a story and that nobody is without redeeming qualities...but Bruno Greene is just a monster.There is no way about it.. Last chapter Daniel tried to pass it off as their father being lonely ..but that is grasping at straws. There has to be something that made his wife turn to other men. Those things never happen out of the blue..Then there is the cruelty and child abuse he subjected to the two elder children. There is no excuse for him..he is a man who gets off on dominating and controlling others because he has the power to do so. I know characters usually have redemptive arcs and all but there is no excuse for what he did to Lucian and Peter.. I feel like giving him a redemptive arc is sort of white washing all the horrors he inflicted on those young boys,now men!..He might not have physically abused Daniel..but he still messed him up. I find myself hoping that I don't get to end of the story and find Bruno Greene playing happy family after all he has done..I feel like that would be condonation. Books/stories,personally to me, are meant to be sources of education..Bruno Greene having a happy ending in this story would be like saying folks can do cruel and bad things as longer as they can ask for forgiveness... P.s...am really passionate about this story😂😂..Don't mind me getting antsy. Thank you !...Blessed weekend to you!

You have no idea how am excited about it too..haha