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I was going to scream had this been another story of yours without a happy resolution 😂😂.. Thank you...blessed Weekend!

So every late 1990s/2000s YA romcom is your source of inspiration for this tale 😂😂

Haha...some of us even read at work . Only we have to make sure we control our laughter lest we are deemed loonies😂. What I meant by soon was that...it will not take many days like our other favourite story updates.

I know that you mentioned in the last chapter comments that all the people in that house need therapy. I agree Lucian is so messed up ..he is such a broken young man. Daniel is caught in the middle of this mess, second guessing where he stands with his father. Peter was messed up for life . I know it's a story and that nobody is without redeeming qualities...but Bruno Greene is just a monster.There is no way about it.. Last chapter Daniel tried to pass it off as their father being lonely ..but that is grasping at straws. There has to be something that made his wife turn to other men. Those things never happen out of the blue..Then there is the cruelty and child abuse he subjected to the two elder children. There is no excuse for him..he is a man who gets off on dominating and controlling others because he has the power to do so. I know characters usually have redemptive arcs and all but there is no excuse for what he did to Lucian and Peter.. I feel like giving him a redemptive arc is sort of white washing all the horrors he inflicted on those young boys,now men!..He might not have physically abused Daniel..but he still messed him up. I find myself hoping that I don't get to end of the story and find Bruno Greene playing happy family after all he has done..I feel like that would be condonation. Books/stories,personally to me, are meant to be sources of education..Bruno Greene having a happy ending in this story would be like saying folks can do cruel and bad things as longer as they can ask for forgiveness... P.s...am really passionate about this story😂😂..Don't mind me getting antsy. Thank you !...Blessed weekend to you!

You have no idea how am excited about it too..haha

Oh God...my weekend just got better ..that means it will not take long before it drops here...whoa... Btw ..your chapter titles are a marvel....they are so funny and catchy

You have watched enough High school/college rom-coms to know when someone makes statements like the ones Ryan makes ,always the person that is the topic of discussion is usually the person the other person is crushing on seriously.Not to mention all those pen throwing antics of Ryan..were just so he could get Skylar's attention😂😂

And you having a blast while at it .😂😂

Oh Nick!...you hopelessly romantic naive boy!...Teenage emotions are a mess..this is has potential to be one hell of a mess!

Your have an active imagination😂😂.. Personally I do not think Mason and Casper are in 'cahoots'.. The way Mason treated Eli on Friday is not a way someone treats one with whom they are in a BDSM relationship..Not that I know how they act😂.I feel like Mason does not even understand his own feelings where it concerns Eli.Not to mention he has no idea what is going on between Eli and Casper. Casper on the other hand is so into the whole Domination thing ..all is he doing at the moment is conditioning Eli into what he wants him to be and poor Eli is feeling adrift because he has no idea what his role is in all of it. Thank you!

Oh God...next chapter cannot come soon enough..😂....This chapter was like an inverted love triangle from One tree Hill...you know Lukas scott/Peyton Sawyer/Brooke Davis...only this time it's Skylar/Ryan/Gabriel....😂😂...It is going to be fun reading this angst riddled combo😂😂... Skylar indeed show throw himself into a bonfire and consider it as performance Art ..haha Thank you!...just so excited for the next chapter! Blessed weekend!

And so the hunt begins...this cat and mouse chase is going to be so epic!

What a thriller of a chapter !...I repeat..Mother and Lord Valerius need to be brought down..They must, to channel Darth Vader, choke on their ambition😂😂 We will wait for you!..just enjoy your vacation

Me thinks you do 'coddle' Keiran too much @Cane23😂😂😂😂

Oh the tragedy of teenage romance!😂.... Me thinks Asher doth protest too much ..eh..

If a child in my country did that, they would be in a world of pain. They would be beaten blue black for having the temerity to talk back to the parent😉😂

That's the battle of wits ...am looking forward to. Its always nice having a 'villain' who is on par with the hero ..it makes for good viewing and reading . We your humble readers await whatever you offer us Sir😂😉

Not some rides it turns out😂😂.. Just curious,when you set out to write this story, did you ever find imagine it would get this big and long?

I take back my word. I like Enrico....the anti-hero vibe you have given him is so impressive..It has the Anakin/Darth Vader vibe going on there...Like really of all the characters in this story,Enrico seems to be the most beautifully complex . Like you took your time to concieve him and it shows..vividly. I like the way you have structured this chapter...and find myself wishing you would do it more..I mean showing us what is happening at the same time on different places...It is like watching a movie..at least for me it is Thank you!

Thank you!..I am just glad you did not get upset because some of us were being a little off about the 4some. We readers can sometimes have some inflated sense of entitlement 😂😂

Careful..you need to rest a bit...we don't want you losing your creative imagination because you are running fast . 😂 😂

Eh..just mucking with you😂..Am a quite well adjusted lad in person. I had a time to think about it really. I have read stories with incest in them before..I just didn't want the four guys to have an ongoing sexual relationship beyond that one time for the sake of the plot. I felt that doing so makes the story convoluted for the sake of it. My understanding of this story right from the first chapter is that love brings people together .People who are so different (DeSh and Rory/Keiran, Ewan/Gemma and soon Elion/Holden) that it defies logic yet they gel beautifully together and are happy with each other. Your other stories follow almost the same pattern..light and day melding together to form something beautiful. That is what I understood personally!

One good thing about being young is that resilience(at least for most) comes with it. Like it easy for young people to move from the precipice if given a chance.This chapter has illustrated this .The Joel depicted here is different from the one we met a few chapters back. This Joel is alive,smiles and even throws in a joke or two.He knows he has a support system in Trace and Celia...not to mention the fact that he noticed Roy's brown eyes😂.All these indicate someone who recognises that all shall be well,just as longer as they finish the day. I don't know if this really happens in real life but Lisa is something else. I don't know how one's personality can flip like that in a moment..That is some extreme bigotry and hate ..eh Thank you @Krista...looking forward to the next chapter...Now am going to fantasize about Roy with- Nice- Brown-Eyes Mason😂😂😂😂 Good day!!

It's too early to count off Colt...I say we give him a chance😂😂

Oh God..what a frustrating Chapter!..I found myself wondering what happened to old school communication!...am like if you consider Blake your best friend ..then just be honest with him .Am inclined to believe that this is going to cause a problem between them. Not the gay part and thing with Ryan.. it's the hiding that fact from Blake,especially since Blake was being open with him regarding Beth.