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The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Are we still talking about the same thing here?..ππ...thought we were talking about temperament ...right?π- 54 comments
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Awesome as usual ...I find myself with an unpopular wishπ.. and hope @KKirk does not 'fire' me from his readers' list.π..I know these guys are just having a blast since they are friends who share everything. I however find myself not wanting Jim to get involved with all 3 of them. Guess am wishing,in my head of courseπ, to see Rick have a normal relationship with someone.Something special that he doesn't share with Randy and Mike....That's just the wish of the hopeless romantic in me @KKirk..pardon me ππ. Thank you for the update!
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The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Oh dear!...I think you missed the part where Josh reacted to Reed the first time he met him....Josh's inner passenger(pardon me for borrowing from Dexterπ)...I am inclined to believe this will be a slow burn rivals-to-lovers sort of thing .That is if Reed is the love Interest that @Jeff Burton hinted about in some chapter comments back. Am just so excited and hoping he is the one...the dynamics that have been introduced between them..will be so interesting to read .- 54 comments
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The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Dan Kincaid is like the king of sarcasm...his interaction with the older William and Priscilla Hastings was stuff on legendπ How did you come up with that scene of Reed and Josh ?..It was epic!...It has Alexis Carrington-Dominique Devereaux vibes(Dynasty freak here)...I freaking loved it .had to read that segment thrice ...just becauseπ- 54 comments
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The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Finally ...the moment I have been waiting for!...a potential love Interest or is it the love Interest you promised us?..π..I can already picture the tension that is going to happen btn Reed and Josh... In this chapter you have transported us to the gilded age..given us a glimpse on how old money and the nouveau riche interacted and still do. The polite forced smiles to mask the distaste..the calculating and assessing looks...Reading this chapter was like watching a Julian Fellowes scripted production. Thank you for indulging us with consecutive chapter updates!..Till next time.- 54 comments
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There Is Always an Easy Way Out
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in There Is Always an Easy Way Out
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It's like each week you find a way to outdo yourself!...This chapter was just so marvelous... Brad is either clueless or he is really good at acting dumb. Oh Alexander....now where do I start with him.. He finds tact overrated .There is no subtlety when it comes to him...That can be refreshing . Thank you!
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Exactly...I just like how he is blunt..he does not mince with words even though it comes off as rude . What do you think, according to you, when he told Lyn this: You donβt. Youβre only better organized and neater than me.β
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Personally I think Alexander is straight forward ....he doesn't play games..in his scene with Lyn outside the bar. It is clear that despite what he said about finding Lynton insufferable, he quite likes him to the extent to bailing him out..
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I couldn't agree more...it's like each flash back chapter really validates @Laura S. Fox's warning she gave us at the end of the first chapter. ....Lyn is really not a reliable narrator....I for one have got yet more 'insight' of Lyn and Alexander ...as opposed to what Lyn says in the present chapters..
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What a tongue twister mateπ..
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Haha..I think I need therapyππ...All of us who were rooting for Troy and Elliot to be the end game just got our hopes dashed. That was beautifully brutalππ.. Thank you for the update!
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Indeed....nothing is as it ever seems π...we are just waiting for you to pull the rug from under us
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And that there is the worrying bit...ππ....sweetness/calm always precedes a storm....and I get this feeling soon the Kincaids' world will go topsy turvy ... Thank you for the update!
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Someone is gender biasedππ...it's a beautiful one...especially if he has a combination of their temperaments..
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At first glance from the story tags, you might think you are going on a teenage angst riddled journey ..but once the CIA setting is introduced the story starts to become a beast of its own.
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Act III - Go The Distance
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Go The Distance
Oh you don't have to worry, well at least to me .what matters is you are able to update when you can. It's always worth the wait anyway!ππ- 15 comments
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All the more reason to anxiously wait for next week..π
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That Walter sequence had Treadstone vibes about it...was transported to the Jason Bourne universe ..π..I have said it before @Jeff Burton,this tale is just so riveting..The mysterious vibe around the Kincaids and Adam's exuberance just make this chapter top notch. I pray your imagination doesn't stall because this is epic stuff you are offering Sir.π Thank you for the update!
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Walls and Crossroads
Seraph28 commented on Absolute Debauchery's story chapter in Walls and Crossroads
Thank you for the update!..It is indeed sad so far...Bruno is a monster.I find myself feeling so bad for what Peter,Lucian and Daniel had to go through...Usually stories like these are clichΓ©. Where the victim always ends up falling for the abuser and they get a happily ever after!. I know it's just a story but I am hoping that cycle is broken with this one...in my mind, there is no way that monster Bruno gets to have happy ending!..Am looking forward to your next update!...Thank you! -
Appearances are deceiving
Seraph28 commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in Appearances are deceiving
Definitely hell would freeze first before Alarik meets Henry again...he did after all get up fast to leave...that's a social faux pas ..It was until I read your comment that I had a realization...the way @Thomas Lindblad has written this story is like a journal..and we are the readers of Alarik's journal. Go back to the previous chapter...this is the second ex he is meeting...The meeting with Simon was also not a good one ..Simon turned out to be a self absorbed show off.He wanted to show Alarik that he was doing better by taking up the bill after their meeting.Not to mention how he was dismissive of Alarik's feelings for him in the past... Henry is a radical right wing xenophobe...I am inclined to hazard a guess that the next chapter we might me another ex of Alarik. -
This chapter...was an angst filled ride..and boy was it epic!..
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Appearances are deceiving
Seraph28 commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in Appearances are deceiving
Okay...now I believe am lost..π..Usually with stories you get the idea where the story is going...after a few chapters in. I guess must confess that secretly was Team Alarik-Alex, even though Alarik is not inclined that way(lad can hopeπ)...but then this chapter goes and veers too much of course in my head that am left floundering. Can't make any more guesses where we are going . Am just glad your update schedule is consistent...Thank you and can't wait for the next offering next week! -
She is just mucking with us!π
