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Oh God!....Not a cliff hanger just as the story is getting hot๐๐..Now am going to restlessly imagine the next scene till next week! Thank you for this update ..at least Randy did not turn out to be a waste of time ..
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Here we go...and am all for it...๐... It's always good to read a good old detective and espionage take once in a while. thank you!
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Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
Eh..you brutal...even though the characters can be an acquired taste in the Vanalas universe . I personally feel they are nice change from the usual same old character tropes...It's nice to change once in a while -
Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
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Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
You beautiful sadist๐๐....I like like like ...this is a domestic one.. We start at the point of disillusionment and am quite sure what you have planned for us this time is going to be so good....Usually your stories are boy meets cute with a lot of despair and drama before the Happily Ever After....this one is starting with the Not Happily Ever after ..I like it so much already! Thank you! P.s.....If that baby doesn't survive however am taking your emotional upheaval court @vanalas๐๐๐ -
I trust this is going to be another beautiful angst and hormone riddled journey!..
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Good Value for the Money
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good Value for the Money
Well the main characters in @Laura S. Fox's universe always have some X-factor of sorts. It's a fantastical story so chances of Danny having hidden gifts or being more than human are expectedly high.- 42 comments
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Good Value for the Money
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good Value for the Money
Eh .indeed that toaster came in handy!...I can't believe am saying this but I now feel sorry for Theodore.. I cannot imagine this story being as beautifully complex as it had your gotten rid of our inhouse clown(Jack)...These guys synchronise like family ...Neurotic Danny, Comedic Jack, Level headed Vince and Ryder.. Thank you!- 42 comments
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The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
You have indeed almost completed the genres of GA....๐... Whenever you write that ..I will be among the first to read- 53 comments
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The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Are we still talking about the same thing here?..๐๐...thought we were talking about temperament ...right?๐- 53 comments
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Awesome as usual ...I find myself with an unpopular wish๐.. and hope @KKirk does not 'fire' me from his readers' list.๐..I know these guys are just having a blast since they are friends who share everything. I however find myself not wanting Jim to get involved with all 3 of them. Guess am wishing,in my head of course๐, to see Rick have a normal relationship with someone.Something special that he doesn't share with Randy and Mike....That's just the wish of the hopeless romantic in me @KKirk..pardon me ๐๐. Thank you for the update!
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The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Oh dear!...I think you missed the part where Josh reacted to Reed the first time he met him....Josh's inner passenger(pardon me for borrowing from Dexter๐)...I am inclined to believe this will be a slow burn rivals-to-lovers sort of thing .That is if Reed is the love Interest that @Jeff Burton hinted about in some chapter comments back. Am just so excited and hoping he is the one...the dynamics that have been introduced between them..will be so interesting to read .- 53 comments
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The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Dan Kincaid is like the king of sarcasm...his interaction with the older William and Priscilla Hastings was stuff on legend๐ How did you come up with that scene of Reed and Josh ?..It was epic!...It has Alexis Carrington-Dominique Devereaux vibes(Dynasty freak here)...I freaking loved it .had to read that segment thrice ...just because๐- 53 comments
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The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Seraph28 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Sharp Edge of Elegance
Finally ...the moment I have been waiting for!...a potential love Interest or is it the love Interest you promised us?..๐..I can already picture the tension that is going to happen btn Reed and Josh... In this chapter you have transported us to the gilded age..given us a glimpse on how old money and the nouveau riche interacted and still do. The polite forced smiles to mask the distaste..the calculating and assessing looks...Reading this chapter was like watching a Julian Fellowes scripted production. Thank you for indulging us with consecutive chapter updates!..Till next time.- 53 comments
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There Is Always an Easy Way Out
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in There Is Always an Easy Way Out
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It's like each week you find a way to outdo yourself!...This chapter was just so marvelous... Brad is either clueless or he is really good at acting dumb. Oh Alexander....now where do I start with him.. He finds tact overrated .There is no subtlety when it comes to him...That can be refreshing . Thank you!
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Personally I think Alexander is straight forward ....he doesn't play games..in his scene with Lyn outside the bar. It is clear that despite what he said about finding Lynton insufferable, he quite likes him to the extent to bailing him out..
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I couldn't agree more...it's like each flash back chapter really validates @Laura S. Fox's warning she gave us at the end of the first chapter. ....Lyn is really not a reliable narrator....I for one have got yet more 'insight' of Lyn and Alexander ...as opposed to what Lyn says in the present chapters..
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What a tongue twister mate๐..
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Haha..I think I need therapy๐๐...All of us who were rooting for Troy and Elliot to be the end game just got our hopes dashed. That was beautifully brutal๐๐.. Thank you for the update!
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Indeed....nothing is as it ever seems ๐...we are just waiting for you to pull the rug from under us
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