Seraph28

Oh God...my weekend just got better ..that means it will not take long before it drops here...whoa... Btw ..your chapter titles are a marvel....they are so funny and catchy

You have watched enough High school/college rom-coms to know when someone makes statements like the ones Ryan makes ,always the person that is the topic of discussion is usually the person the other person is crushing on seriously.Not to mention all those pen throwing antics of Ryan..were just so he could get Skylar's attention😂😂

And you having a blast while at it .😂😂

Oh Nick!...you hopelessly romantic naive boy!...Teenage emotions are a mess..this is has potential to be one hell of a mess!

Your have an active imagination😂😂.. Personally I do not think Mason and Casper are in 'cahoots'.. The way Mason treated Eli on Friday is not a way someone treats one with whom they are in a BDSM relationship..Not that I know how they act😂.I feel like Mason does not even understand his own feelings where it concerns Eli.Not to mention he has no idea what is going on between Eli and Casper. Casper on the other hand is so into the whole Domination thing ..all is he doing at the moment is conditioning Eli into what he wants him to be and poor Eli is feeling adrift because he has no idea what his role is in all of it. Thank you!

Oh God...next chapter cannot come soon enough..😂....This chapter was like an inverted love triangle from One tree Hill...you know Lukas scott/Peyton Sawyer/Brooke Davis...only this time it's Skylar/Ryan/Gabriel....😂😂...It is going to be fun reading this angst riddled combo😂😂... Skylar indeed show throw himself into a bonfire and consider it as performance Art ..haha Thank you!...just so excited for the next chapter! Blessed weekend!

And so the hunt begins...this cat and mouse chase is going to be so epic!

What a thriller of a chapter !...I repeat..Mother and Lord Valerius need to be brought down..They must, to channel Darth Vader, choke on their ambition😂😂 We will wait for you!..just enjoy your vacation

Me thinks you do 'coddle' Keiran too much @Cane23😂😂😂😂

Oh the tragedy of teenage romance!😂.... Me thinks Asher doth protest too much ..eh..

If a child in my country did that, they would be in a world of pain. They would be beaten blue black for having the temerity to talk back to the parent😉😂

That's the battle of wits ...am looking forward to. Its always nice having a 'villain' who is on par with the hero ..it makes for good viewing and reading . We your humble readers await whatever you offer us Sir😂😉

Not some rides it turns out😂😂.. Just curious,when you set out to write this story, did you ever find imagine it would get this big and long?

I take back my word. I like Enrico....the anti-hero vibe you have given him is so impressive..It has the Anakin/Darth Vader vibe going on there...Like really of all the characters in this story,Enrico seems to be the most beautifully complex . Like you took your time to concieve him and it shows..vividly. I like the way you have structured this chapter...and find myself wishing you would do it more..I mean showing us what is happening at the same time on different places...It is like watching a movie..at least for me it is Thank you!

Thank you!..I am just glad you did not get upset because some of us were being a little off about the 4some. We readers can sometimes have some inflated sense of entitlement 😂😂

Careful..you need to rest a bit...we don't want you losing your creative imagination because you are running fast . 😂 😂

Eh..just mucking with you😂..Am a quite well adjusted lad in person. I had a time to think about it really. I have read stories with incest in them before..I just didn't want the four guys to have an ongoing sexual relationship beyond that one time for the sake of the plot. I felt that doing so makes the story convoluted for the sake of it. My understanding of this story right from the first chapter is that love brings people together .People who are so different (DeSh and Rory/Keiran, Ewan/Gemma and soon Elion/Holden) that it defies logic yet they gel beautifully together and are happy with each other. Your other stories follow almost the same pattern..light and day melding together to form something beautiful. That is what I understood personally!

One good thing about being young is that resilience(at least for most) comes with it. Like it easy for young people to move from the precipice if given a chance.This chapter has illustrated this .The Joel depicted here is different from the one we met a few chapters back. This Joel is alive,smiles and even throws in a joke or two.He knows he has a support system in Trace and Celia...not to mention the fact that he noticed Roy's brown eyes😂.All these indicate someone who recognises that all shall be well,just as longer as they finish the day. I don't know if this really happens in real life but Lisa is something else. I don't know how one's personality can flip like that in a moment..That is some extreme bigotry and hate ..eh Thank you @Krista...looking forward to the next chapter...Now am going to fantasize about Roy with- Nice- Brown-Eyes Mason😂😂😂😂 Good day!!

It's too early to count off Colt...I say we give him a chance😂😂

Oh God..what a frustrating Chapter!..I found myself wondering what happened to old school communication!...am like if you consider Blake your best friend ..then just be honest with him .Am inclined to believe that this is going to cause a problem between them. Not the gay part and thing with Ryan.. it's the hiding that fact from Blake,especially since Blake was being open with him regarding Beth.

Some of us even booked our therapists😂😂..after all you had forewarned us anyway

Am trying to come up with. Ship name even...😂...

All good things,sadly,come to an end.😂😂...we will have the beautiful moments of the journey though..

I owe you an apology...I was among the group that was against the incestous foursome...even when you said it was a plot device to drive it forward(the plot). I thought you was just indulging your fantasies.😂I am glad to know you were right. When you introduced sanctimonious Elion and gave Holden some bit of prominence in this chapter,I knew your crazy imagination was building up another ship for us 😂😂. There is something that I find a bit 'unfair' to say the least..it's Gemma. You have given other characters depth but not Gemma.. I noticed in this chapter you have even made her out like someone so rigidly stuck to traditions, not to mention her relationship with her children is not good. When you wrote Keiran going through the trials there was a trial which showed him of his flaws..of not treating people better with respect and kindness .I feel like in that interaction with his mother,you kind of reverted Keiran to his cold pompous persona which defeats the purpose of the fifth trial you so painstakingly gave us earlier. Thank you and I am filled with trepidation that this tale is winding up.It has been one of my favourite pass times in the past few months .. Blessed Day to you!

I find myself wondering how @KKirk will resolve this with each chapter update😂...I would pay a fortune to get into his headspace to find out😂😂