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Oh yeah ..had forgotten about Brother-in-Awe...I did not read from here...think it was on Nifty archives... I think you just literally redefined what casual means😀😀

This chapter reminded me of Game of Thrones ,Season 6. Margery Tyrell thinking she could pull a fast one over Cersei Lannister. We'll see how well that turned out.The thing is there are some people who are beyond the rules of the Game. Rezak and the greedy Monteilons seem to think they know the game .They have no idea that the game was set long ago ,long before they even existed. That they do not even register at all in the game that is being played. I really am enjoying this Series so far...I only feel sorry for Renr and Zdain...being saddled with such power hungry and overly ambitious parents must be detrimental to one's sanity and emotional being! Thank you for the update as usual @Lupus...will excitedly wait for next Thursday!

I just love me that last bit.'.....charged with chemistry that does not ask for permission'..that drew me in.Had been contemplating a break but now you just blew that to smithereens.haha

Yet another trip to go on .I believe this is the first story of yours that I. have read that has women taking front seat.I mean women with agency and it is really nice.At least for me. I like the Southern setting.When was reading ,I kept imagining the accents😆.. I have always wanted to ask you but always refrained at the last moment. What is it about you and love triangles?.😆.I am yet to read a story of yours where it's just two characters in a relationship or on the verge of one, circumnavigating the challenges of being in a relationship .It is almost as though love triangles are your muse or something😉.Till I read this story ,had not realised I longed a for a story of yours that depicted a conventional son-mother relationship like this(am a momma's boy after all😀😀). Is it okay to make a wish to the Tooth fairy?..That the mother-son relationship will not be destroyed ,pretty please 😀😀?.. Thank you for this new offering. I am filled with trepidation(your stories are mostly tragic after all) but also excited with the drama you going to stir up in Willow Creek! Blessed day!

That was pretty close.!..Imagine the level of restraint you would have to muster to survive this new change ! Thank you!

Tension filled indeed....in a good way. Thank you!

Right on time indeed...now I can head off to sleep...Was only waiting for the notification that you had updated ..haha Thank you for the update!

Oh my!..that last part just made shudder...I mean the word consequences..haha...Look forward to the next offering

It most definitely will not be....he is after all a fledgling .

What a way to leave us hanging..😀😆...Just a personal opinion...Aaven is quite annoying...and on the verge of being unlikeable for me.Which sucks since he is our protagonist.haha Thank you for the update!

This is when your style of writing shines best😀...Alexander is going to be my newest favourite character

Oh yes...I must have forgotten to quote them .😆

Now is as good as confession time on my part. I only started following this story about a fortnight ago. I found it one day while browsing through your stories and binge read the first chapters to catch up. Each time I get a notification for chapter update..always have this in my mind...is Bunny boy going to finally reveal himself. You can imagine my personal frustration each time it doesn't happen😉😆😆... And my God....Jamie..eh..he is clueless much..haha

Whenever I get a new notification of a chapter update, am always excited for two reasons. The first being the chapter update ..and the other being your analytical breakdown of the chapter. The state of mind of the characters and their motivation at that particular point in each chapter update . Thank you!

You are devious...in a good way😆😉.Though now am filled with trepidation ..that the end of this journey is nigh.I do not want it to end but as all good things come to an end..I must get used to it. Thank you!

Well..what a delightful way to wake up!..Am glad the new series did not take long like you had stated. I like how the dynamics of the group are evolving.I like that Danae was given prominence in this chapter.Now everyone has had their moment in the sun so to speak 😉 Is this one going to follow the same update schedule like the other two chapters? Thanks for the update!

You are something else!..Two chapters in the same day is just such a delight for me😀😉. This is such a poignant chapter of a story about the complexity of human emotion!.The previous chapter was just so bleak. I know it's just a story but personally for me reading is like going on a trip, sort of a journey .When you encounter something unpleasant along the way, it kind of kills the vibe..Look at me being melodramatic all of a sudden😆..Let me sign off lest I make a clown out of myself. Thanks for the update!

Personally...sometimes I skip the sex scenes...like this one...I knew what was coming the moment the paper rolls came out

So good to finally get another update.It had been so long I worried you had abandoned the story.What a way to come back!..A blood bath..eh. Thank you for the update!

You were right to add that trigger warning at the top of the chapter.This chapter is just so...dark and you have written dark before. Adrian is just an abyss ..there is nothing really there.. You ever read a character before and got the feeling that no amount of rehabilitation that character was put through would ever change your mind on that particular character?.Well Adrian is it for me. Thanks for the update !

Wouldn't that be a hoot😀

Eh...how on earth did you come to that conclusion?😀

Well...there was a warning before the chapter.😀..It definitely means we are about to be put through an emotional wringer in the upcoming chapters😀

I feel like this new story ,unlike the others,is going to be a case study of the human psyche!.You did after all give us fair warning in the beginning.Nothing is really as it seems

Blimey...now will have to wait anxiously for the resolution of that cliff hanger😉😀.... Thank you for the update!