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Another excellent chapter! I think Liam did record the conversation and that will become the centerpiece of his case against her and the machine and the premise of what sounds like a juicy documentary chronicling how Hollywood grooms its young stars and takes control of their lives. Marina sounded desperate for sure!

Wonderful recovery by Nate and a happy ending for all! Enjoyable story!

Well, we knew she'd go to great lengths to control the machine that's made her filthy rich. Buckle up!

Good luck Jody!

A monumentally sad chapter but one that was deeply emotional for all involved. It's sad to think people in real life are subjected to these situations daily. I too want to see how this ends.

Another powerful emotional chapter! Seems like clear lines have been established on both sides and now it's time for the war. Both guys have some emotional damage from the way they were raised.

It was time for the brutally honest conversation. Liam could definitely use some counselling. Adrian understands what he's signing up for. Very raw chapter and powerful indeed.

That first part was terrifying but thanks to Robbie and Sue, Mr. Lube survived. Typically, Don had to be Don. Nicola will likely continue to tease Robbie but I don't think she'll ever forget how he saved her boyfriend. Rory definitely confuses the hell out of me and has to at least be bi-curious. Most teenage boys would not deny staring at a girl's boobs. Excellent chapter!

Oh no, I'm expecting the worst now.

A pleasure to read such a tender chapter - their love is blossoming right before our eyes!

Way to go Julian!

I thoroughly enjoyed Jody's undergrad adventures and his progression from an inexperienced freshman to an absolutely passionate power bottom. I also thought the eye candy you provided gave us readers fantastic renditions of just how hot all these men were and it made your story stand out as unique. I look forward to reading how Jody navigates his time in the Navy but am sad to hear Jody never saw Len again. Fantastic story with such sizzling sex scenes!

What a rush! Mateo really came through for his roommate/friend and the whole clothes-swapping scene was hilarious! Glad to see the guys made it through security and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oof, what a cliffhanger! Hopefully, Nate & his dad can have a rational conversation about everything.

Another excellent chapter!

That was so intimately beautiful! I could feel the way they finally exhaled in their minds and accepted that what they have is real. I freaking love Mateo and his shocked ways at reacting to Hollywood's leading man being Pluto and how he put it all together suddenly. Of course, she just had to unleash the attention whores in an effort to obliterate Hudson's life. Things are about to get even more interesting!

Come on Liam! Take a chance!

This chapter had it all! Good for Liam & Hudson! Time to lose the "manager"! Can't wait to see how the next day goes! Superb writing!

I was instantly addicted to this story and have thoroughly enjoyed it! I was glad to see Joel finally stand up for time with Cody and to see that his dad still loves him. It's horrendous how his mother treated him, but I suspect he knew that hadn't changed. That said, I feel like it ended without a clean resolution. Does Joel come out to the team and at school? How does the team react? How is treated at school and by Roy? How does he do in his senior season? Does he go on to play college ball or at least make it to college? Does his dad make good on allowing Cody to come over? Does Javin make the Fletcher prom memorable by daring to slow dance together? Does Colt make it to Nashville? Does Celia's mom ever truly come around regarding Joel? Does Westley end up a teen dad or in jail? How do Davin's parents react to his sexuality - do they even care enough to know? Don't get me wrong here - I absolutely loved the story - I just wanted a happy ever ending for Joel. Thank you @Krista for sharing your talents with us!

Liam is too focused on the age difference to see what his friends see - an obvious attraction or "something" between him and Adrian. I too hope he takes Mark's advice. Excellent chapter once again @ChromedOutCortex

Liam's carefully choreographed life has been suffocating him for years, yet it seems the suffocation is getting worse. Hudson seems to be fine although we know he's not. Marina will do anything to protect the superstar she groomed. Great chapter once again!

Poor Liam and poor Hudson! What a tangled web they've created!

LOVED this chapter! The vest coordination was absolutely creative and the fact that no one caught on that Ryan was the blue until afterwards was genius. Sloane is one of my favorite characters - so cunning and manipulative! I hope Ryan can breathe a little easier now - the closet can be suffocating!

Sweet summer for Jody!

Emotional chapter. The guys of 404 have had some memorable times together.