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Great chapter with this loving family all together.
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Armand is such a giving person. If Tommy had not needed to go to the bathroom, the would have been robbed. So it looks like there was some good timing with that.
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I. Sorry to hear about the diagnosis, glad that Pam will have loving support for her treatment. And it was not a sinister character.
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Chapter 12 — Prairie Playmates
VBlew commented on Biff Spork's story chapter in Chapter 12 — Prairie Playmates
The discovery of the prairie dogs intelligent use of building their burrows with a raised mound to naturally circulate the air was brilliant. They are not using soap but are jumping in the River to clean off the sweat is probably why they don’t stink after several days of not using soap. -
What an interesting interpretation of being an uncle forced to have an extended visit with his hellion of a nephew, and have Lucifer be so helpful with his care. Loved it.
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Chapter 10 — Sunrise Surprise
VBlew commented on Biff Spork's story chapter in Chapter 10 — Sunrise Surprise
This was an interesting chapter, more of the camping, getting to know more about each other, the prairie dogs, seeing the buffaloes was a treat. And the conversation about the trustees and guardians clarified things for Bumper. Their growing love for each other is wonderful too. -
I Almost Touched A Pussycat Tail
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in I Almost Touched A Pussycat Tail
Rusty is so intelligent, but can’t seem to identify that he’s falling for Matty. It will work out, hopefully soon. Or he’ll still be having that weird 3way dream with the cat boy 😏- 38 comments
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They are having so much fun being together. Very joyful and experience so far. I do wonder about Marcus’ adventures out at night when they first met. Was he being followed?
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What a fun story. Marcus put in the effort, was confident in himself and played well, he deserved to win. A mostly fun group of people. Kelly was the surprise backstabbing one. Sampson did great, and not sharing his new project with his British friend, while hinting of an upcoming project.
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Chapter 6 — You Can Get Anything on eBay
VBlew commented on Biff Spork's story chapter in Chapter 6 — You Can Get Anything on eBay
Fun chapter. The boys now both ave working scooters, and the test driving got Bumper acquainted with driving his. The trial wearing of the kotekas went well. They really are getting along, building their friendship. -
So Rusty seems to be accepting of his attraction. Is he just figuring out that he is Bi, and exploring that with Matthew? If so what will that do to a totally gay boy, if he gets played with? Hopefully they both get to the point of accepting their attraction and are able to communicate about it.
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Seems like working and living together was good for the relationship to grow. Lovely ending to the story.
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I loved how the street artist captured each person that he did a portrait of. And how Armand took it as a learning lesson as well.
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Glad to see that they worked out the house issue. Now furniture…it’s all about compromising, and communicating. And yes, big dogs and leather are not good combinations. On to moving in together.
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Just pure delight. What a fun dinner.
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It takes a spirit to show him what being in the closet can do to a person. Truly wreck them emotionally.
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Who is the red haired woman? Is this a good thing? Or are we in for surprise antagonist?
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Who is the red haired woman? Is this a good thing? Or are we in for surprise antagonist?
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Another interesting chapter. I vote that you continue this work after you take the pause on it. It is a very different type of story to the others here on GA, and as historical fiction is very interesting.
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So, Mike shows up. Was not expecting that with all of the self loathing Corbin was going through.
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Great chapter. Interesting developments in non gender stereotypes. And the wealth that Marcus apparently grew up with.
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A very fun Uncle Joey, love this guy.
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Awesome, another tickle story. Great introduction to the main characters. Looking forward to reading where you go with this one.
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This is interesting. Being vegan for over 10 years, this youthful approach to making people more aware is a very aggressive approach. The guys are having fin, and with the washable paint not as aggressive as some other tactics. It will be interesting to see where this goes.
