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Lessons in politics, and he outed himself as a werewolf. Now to build some mental toughness with regards to the wolf’s sex drive…
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Loved this chapter, seeing more of the property, and the haircut and shave. Haircuts are intimate, but shaving is so trusting and on a whole other level. Reid is a thorn in Lucas’s side. Reid needs to let go. Jubal is being a gentleman letting them have their conversation in the cabin. He does seem to be missing all of the hints that Lucas is throwing out there.
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Good Fighting all of the creatures attacking them. Does Travis have some other connection to JJ, as he did seem to sense he was in danger at the conversion camp.
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It’s so sad that Simon is gone. It looks like order may be in Connor’s future.
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Oh, that’s a horrible turn of events for JJ, his first Tim and his parents are just crazy about his sexuality.
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Glad that the boys are back in a good space with each other. The mystery of the voice that James is channeling is interesting. Could this be a tomb for the ones depicted in the fresco?
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So glad that all of Rusty’s supporters pushed him into this. They both confessed a lot. The proposal was a very good surprise. Looking forward to their future.
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Wow, I’m assuming Zain is going to be coming through the vortex in the forest. What a surprise that will be for all of them. This Sherrif is a sneaky one… is he one of the gang murdering magical beings?
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This is a great story for October. Off to a spooky supernatural start. Is Mark ok or was the operating room his imagination?
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And They All Lived Happily Ever After - Well, Most of Them
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in And They All Lived Happily Ever After - Well, Most of Them
Thanks for tying everything up. Not a HEA, but then most of life is not a fairy tale. -
I had to read all of the comments to be sure this theory was not posited previously. With the need to RE wire Caleb’s brain, after the heavy metal is removed, would the wolf shift healing help at all? Seems like if the person is hurt in their “human” form, that typically a couple of wolf shifts is all it takes for them to be good as new again. It Caleb’s neck wound is still healing too. This theory may apply to other shifterverses, an not this one. Learning about Asa’s betrayal, and attempted murder for coming out to someone he could not trust was something. And going forward with brutal honesty, especially in a mate relationship is really good.
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Amazing start to this mysterious, magical story. Looking forward to where it goes. There is something up with the Sherrif for sure.
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Chapter 10 Hallelujah and Amen
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Hallelujah and Amen
It’s great to see their growing relationship. Slow and steady as they say. Lucas has a lot off patience having gone to Larkspur and finding out what he was looking for there was not available, found this new place to start a farm, and now had a partner he picked up on the side of the road. Fate is being good to these guys. We’re all expecting something more to develop between them, and it seems that it will, all in due course. this is the first mention of the edge of Lucas’ property, so perhaps Jubal should see the land agent about buying the next parcel, soon.- 108 comments
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Wonderful chapter getting to meet the parents. These guys come from very different backgrounds, and are dealing with it quite well. It’s nice them giving Toby the option of skinny dipping with the old folks or not. Toby’s interest in ecology is bringing all of them together too.
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Great chapter, so I gather Kurtschono is like a priestess? Performing this ritual of the naming ceremony.
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Great chapter. Maybe now Gideon will know how Kavan felt when he was rejected from trying to save his bonded! Who or what is this creature that first got away, then came back and attacked Kavan? Looking forward to what is coming.
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EPISODE 11: THISLEBAUM'S BRIDGE
VBlew commented on LJCC's story chapter in EPISODE 11: THISLEBAUM'S BRIDGE
This seems like Nathan may have something to do with this but not the one who stated it. A brother of his? Taking someone with this skill set off the street and making them into a Spy? This seems like some demented kind of training. -
Chapter 5: “Pose as a friend, Work as a spy”
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 5: “Pose as a friend, Work as a spy”
Great chapter, this story is very interesting and intriguing. Looking forward to more. This is a period of history that I know little of, and the main character is very engaging. -
Nice twist, a Dakota being honest and coming out as it were to his family was met with love and support. Then meeting Drake and Shamus in town was no coincidence. Does Dakota know what kind of shifter Drake is? Or just know he’s not human?
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Nice flashback to their first meeting.
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JJ got some good advice from the girls, and seemed to follow it. Having a friend turn on you like Matt did hurts, maybe he will come around, maybe not, but his other friends are there for him.
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Through The Mud, On Our Way To The Stars
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Through The Mud, On Our Way To The Stars
So glad that Rusty finally took action, but waiting 4 days to do it? Seems like the bold romantic gesture was enough to get Matty back. Very glad that Jamie was a gentleman, and we’ll see if Matty tells him so?- 38 comments
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Why Chase left 3 weeks later after his confession has not been explained. What happened during those 3 weeks? Why did they not stay in touch if they had been such good friends? seems like they both still have feelings for each other and a bond too. Danny may not know what he saw, but he was jealous of Michael’s relationship with Sam. We still have no real motive for the Murder, it’s usually money, or jealousy.
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Won’t Giles figure out the Mate Connection? I thought that was something that Alphas could detect, but maybe they have to connect first.
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Demeter is going to wish she never messed with him. Travis is getting stronger and learning more about using his powers. There is an implication that he is going to be stuck here for years. Is this the same timeline that Josh is living in?
