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  1. VBlew

    Twenty Six

    Another amazing chapter. Excellent work. Now that they are really communicating, and the abuse piece of the puzzle is out in the open. I’m looking forward to seeing where this relationship goes.
  2. VBlew

    Say My Name

    I was thinking that it would be Ethan. Wondering if he really did have serious injury that may have left him immobile or in a coma for a long time, so it was better for everyone to think he was dead. Looking forward to the next chapter
  3. Seems like someone doesn’t want Dani to learn more about his abilities…
  4. VBlew

    Ethen

    Very sad ending with Ethan’s death, tragically so young. But there is the possibility now of Jake and Cody deepening their relationship in the future.
  5. Oooh the L word. Big surprise. And we know that Jake really means it.
  6. VBlew

    Chapter 54

    Looks like the boys were busy with damage control. It’s amazing how many people were out to get them for just being who they were doing good in the world.
  7. Loved this chapter, an agree with everyone’s comments about Will and Mitch needing to get together to at least have a good conversation about their feelings for each other. Anyone else pick up on the boys relationship with Red Eagle? Seems like there is a story there…
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    Chapter 43

    I like this story and the characters have grown on me, and agree with the other, would like it to move a bit faster. What is Nathan hiding? We have the Father’s visit coming up. And that may give some more insight??? Hopefully Nathan will still come to Christmas and more will be revealed.
  9. VBlew

    Sidewinder

    I started off reading the sequel to this story, and found myself drawn to the characters and wanted to get to know them better. This is a great story about 2 men falling in love and dealing with emotions and expectations of family, that we have still in the present, it is set in the old west and that adds to the flavor of the writing, which is beautifully set. Highly recommend reading this.
  10. Galen is a romantic Tiger.😍
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    Too Late

    The ending this chapter is disturbing. There are a lot of emotions going on. And a huge sense of loss of his best friend and nothing to look forward to, from his vantage point. Hope that his mother’s sense that he is not doing well intervenes before it gets too far.
  12. Yes that’s what I meant. Kind of like with his abilities. He seems to be thinking about how they should work rather than feeling them.. kind of like the conversation with Yoda and A young Luke Skywalker…
  13. More good conversations getting to know each other better. Great chapter!
  14. Dani keeps getting vivid dreams of things that are coming. Some are not so cryptic, seems like he’s trying too hard. Great chapter.
  15. Another brilliant installment in this series. Great to see that his parents are accepting of their relationship, even though she seems to have lost her family.
  16. VBlew

    Bombshell

    Love the start, looking forward to seeing where this goes
  17. So glad Troy took charge of that out of control Corbin situation. He really needed that strength and love supporting him.
  18. Glad to see Corbin standing up to his abuser.
  19. I was thinking that was where this was going, there were clues that Vinicius didn’t kill himself.
  20. Great conversation, they are making progress.
  21. VBlew

    Chapter 24

    Great story, love the sci-fi aspect, you did a great job with setting the framework for that. Sad this part is at an end. Like others have commented, there is much more that this could evolve into for sequels.
  22. VBlew

    Chapter 22

    Adam is doing a fantastic job in his situation. Will be interesting to see if hypnosis will override the memory wipe.
  23. VBlew

    Chapter 39

    Good to see another chapter, and Jason standing up for himself. Hopefully Devin will be able to soon.
  24. Another incredible story in this series. Very well written. The caring and loving growing relationship between two people who really want to be with each other. The self doubt from Jenny is understandable give her being hurt in the past. Would like to see that hopefully evolve into self confidence in the future.
  25. Glad the are talking to each other better. Reinhard still needs to be more direct with what he wants. Less passive aggressive.
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