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Chapter 35 - Epilogue 5 - The Beginning
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 35 - Epilogue 5 - The Beginning
This world you’ve created and the stories you’re telling are most engaging. Looking forward to the next books. -
The Interrogation of Michael Anthony Loggerman, Cadet
VBlew commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Interrogation of Michael Anthony Loggerman, Cadet
Corbin mostly killed 2 relationships in this farce of a trial. I feel for Mike. He is a good guy, and maybe this will push him back to only being with women, and never speaking with Corbin again. That was brutal. Are they going to bring Pete in next? A this point all Corbin has done is sow doubt for the charges… -
Was this a trap that Garjah new was coming? Bouncer will be all over whoever has Essell. He never leaves his side. Which is curious how the got separated in the first place unless these traitors planned it in advance.
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Loose Ends Tied & Culprits Caught
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in Loose Ends Tied & Culprits Caught
Janice is caught again. So bad that she was able to bribe officers. -
Finally some real training. Maybe that will help with the voices in his head.
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You handled this life transition of Nona beautifully. She was a big part of Armand’s life and accepted him as another son. It can be hard to let go, but when it’s time to go, people leave. She had a very long life.
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I agree that someone able to change people’s memories got there first, and I still suspect the Detective, but this could be a red herring. Looking forward to more of this mystery. Then what will happen once Jase heals Macy?
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It’s All Nothing But A… Fairytail
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in It’s All Nothing But A… Fairytail
I'm agreeing with those saying Matty needs to come clean about his alter ego.. the sooner the better. Rusty still needs to come to terms with his attraction to Matty. The plot is moving along, and the anticipation of what it going to happen is kept up this chapter, looking forward to the party... -
Great story, such imagination to create these characters. They are entirely believable and entertaining. The interaction of the overbearing mother, and the emancipation. The ghost helping as a friend. Very well done.
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This was a hard chapter to read, emotionally... The Guards messing with him. The hope of getting back with Ray, learning that he has been reset back to close to the beginning of his arrival at the icebox... not clear if the chip was actually removed or not.. that piece of the conversation made it sound like it may have been the first go round, or possibly not. As for money to get things fixed, back on earth, it's been 2 years, but is there possibly money left at Piggy's place? Probably not, but worth checking. I was all excited about the team and the potential to earn his way out of being incarcerated. Maybe now that he knows and can move forward he will find a purpose again.. sounded like he was losing hope to go on.
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Funny comment by Mom after he just has a conversation with his gay “old” friend. Not like they can’t all get along. Tyler needs to do some soul searching and figure out what he wants, and not just someone to get off with. Rufus being himself is good. Not hiding any longer.
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The Talented Tristan von Aschenbach
VBlew commented on Lenny Bruce's story chapter in The Talented Tristan von Aschenbach
The beginning of what appears to be a love story with a ghost. Very well executed. With Tristian being so sheltered about anything sexual, he is very excited about this dream interlude with Furio. -
Great backstory to why he is so upset that someone got Macy when she seemed to be safe with them in the apartment…
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Bitches & Bad Guys Always Return
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in Bitches & Bad Guys Always Return
Ooooh, Janice is back, hopefully people only get tickled and nobody dies. These guys are so loving of each other. -
It seems like his friends may be ok with him if he will be honest with them. But his fear of being rejected by his parents is worse. His mother is being the worst, dad sounds like he may be ok with it.
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At least they are getting Jordan back, but what about the skipper? Sin the identity of the kidnapper is known, once they get Jordan back, the police can reach out to the parents again. Hopefully they won’t wreck this yacht… and get caught and put in jail for the kidnapping.
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Glad your back, and have a frequency for writing that works for you. Nic does need therapy, and seems to have something that happened to him that’s causing him to push people away. Glad that Jake’s figured out reading Nic, and that he got called out by Kenny.
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If the person at the police station didn’t have a Detective Swift… the was he really a detective or just posing? And Scott seemed to have found Swift in person really quick… and had too many good things to say about him, is there more there? We’re they already together?
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This is going to be interesting, Macy is #40, and Jase is beginning to like Lucas. What’s going to happen after this last healing? Will he have a life with a relationship to go back to? Or will he make a new life with Lucas. Is Lucas going to be “chosen”? Is that why Jase can’t influence him? Or are they soul mates, and a chosen one can’t influence their soul mate? Looking forward to where this goes.
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Pretty simple chapter. No Drama. Sounds like we get to catch up on 7 years next chapter.
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Great chapter, they decide to be friends and see that expanding. They are both honest about their sexuality which is a good thing too.
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Chapter 14 - Underground, Part One
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Underground, Part One
Seems like magma would be hot not cold? And there was no mention of temp change after she entered the stairs and saw these others…? The reason she went in the first place was the cold. -
Chapter 13 - Lahari, Part One
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Lahari, Part One
It’s great that Agrell was able to find Lahari so quickly. As she may have had more trouble if it was others who discovered her instead. -
The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
VBlew commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
Wow… cliffhanger there. Maybe this will end his relationship with Mike. Which would be a sad way for it to end. But will let him move on with Pete.?.? -
Thanks for this chapter. All are well and back home. Happy Holidays. Here is to a great 2023!
