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The ending this chapter is disturbing. There are a lot of emotions going on. And a huge sense of loss of his best friend and nothing to look forward to, from his vantage point. Hope that his mother’s sense that he is not doing well intervenes before it gets too far.
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Chapter 13: The Prophecy
VBlew commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Prophecy
Yes that’s what I meant. Kind of like with his abilities. He seems to be thinking about how they should work rather than feeling them.. kind of like the conversation with Yoda and A young Luke Skywalker… -
More good conversations getting to know each other better. Great chapter!
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Chapter 13: The Prophecy
VBlew commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Prophecy
Dani keeps getting vivid dreams of things that are coming. Some are not so cryptic, seems like he’s trying too hard. Great chapter. -
W.T.F. Was Zum Teufel Wird Ihre Antwort Sein?
VBlew commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in W.T.F. Was Zum Teufel Wird Ihre Antwort Sein?
Another brilliant installment in this series. Great to see that his parents are accepting of their relationship, even though she seems to have lost her family. -
Love the start, looking forward to seeing where this goes
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Only You Can Set My Heart On Fire
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Only You Can Set My Heart On Fire
So glad Troy took charge of that out of control Corbin situation. He really needed that strength and love supporting him. -
Glad to see Corbin standing up to his abuser.
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I was thinking that was where this was going, there were clues that Vinicius didn’t kill himself.
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Great conversation, they are making progress.
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Great story, love the sci-fi aspect, you did a great job with setting the framework for that. Sad this part is at an end. Like others have commented, there is much more that this could evolve into for sequels.
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Adam is doing a fantastic job in his situation. Will be interesting to see if hypnosis will override the memory wipe.
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Good to see another chapter, and Jason standing up for himself. Hopefully Devin will be able to soon.
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W.T.F. Do I Make Of That?
VBlew commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in W.T.F. Do I Make Of That?
Another incredible story in this series. Very well written. The caring and loving growing relationship between two people who really want to be with each other. The self doubt from Jenny is understandable give her being hurt in the past. Would like to see that hopefully evolve into self confidence in the future. -
Glad the are talking to each other better. Reinhard still needs to be more direct with what he wants. Less passive aggressive.
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Very well done for a speed writing contest. Sad it’s the end, but very enjoyable reading.
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This is a very interesting series. I’m glad you’re continuing to write these segments. It’s people having to work through what they conceived their sexuality to be. And that can be more fluid than they first imagine. Great work.
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That was a lot of Drama. I do hope they got to him in time. At least he now knows he may be able to integrate the personalities
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Chapter 26: Discordant Dinner
VBlew commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 26: Discordant Dinner
Another great chapter. Been missing this storyline. Looking forward to Cyrus’s performance. That was a pretty traumatic time on his first shift. Glad he shared that with Kaplan. -
Making up was good. Hopefully Erith seeing someone will help him.
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Looking forward to his choice. I’m thinking he’s going to touch the stone, then we’ll see what kind of power he gains.
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Yes, lots of dysfunction going on in this story.
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Glad you’re back. Great chapter, new progress with the American pack
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Hopefully Erith gets to connect with Blake before he leaves the store. And the figure out why Blake has not been getting his messages. This is an interesting twist, and may help Blake heal some.
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Seems like they need to talk more to each other. I get Erith being new to knowing about the additional alters. That would be frightening enough to have to deal with.
