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  1. VBlew

    Chapter 17

    Some headway toward a possible friendship. Not sure about drinking though, could free up either of the bad actors in Travis.
  2. VBlew

    Thirty-Seven

    Liam needed to hear fro. Someone else that knew the truth about him being bullied. Maybe this will help him out of his depression.
  3. VBlew

    Chapter 4

    Connor has some real latent ability to communicate with these horses. Is he the wolf in his dream?
  4. VBlew

    Chapter 29

    So one curious thing with this new knowledge that there is something up in space that these bad mages want to control. Will it be for the good of the inhabitants after these mages are dealt with? is the universal translator that Irik has magic or machine? Can it be used for our group to talk with this “oracle”?
  5. VBlew

    Decisions

    Great chapter, Corbin seems back on track. Little cliff hanger there with Pete.
  6. VBlew

    Disp Ch14

    Thanks for another great story.
  7. VBlew

    Chapter 26

    Great new idea of seeing the vision of a place someone else has been before, and translocating there. This reminds me of the ability of the dragons of Pern stories to “go between” and jump from location to location. Interesting idea that Jamie is perceiving radio frequency messaging. Now to find a decoding device or Magick.
  8. VBlew

    Chapter 22

    It’s interesting that Jamie has wut to ask about seeing the hey closer to see if they can incorporate its “magic” ability to detect the mages and what protection it offers against the western mages. The realization about focused light energy, in a blue spectrum gives them all something to work on a solution together. they are gradually forming very strong defenses against every weapon that has been used against them so far. But they will need more than defensive options meeting these foes soon.
  9. VBlew

    Chapter 30

    Another fun jaunt with family and friends.
  10. VBlew

    Walking On A Dream

    Albert really quickly diffused that angry situation. Jedi skills at work there. The growing need for sex to happen between them is palpable….
  11. VBlew

    Chapter 17

    Valrinda at least gave Beckett some options for the potential danger they are headed to. Also seems like the time traveling Beckett is learning about this world.
  12. VBlew

    Chapter 19

    That is a very interesting ending/ new beginning. We are all in a quantum field creating our own reality, just most are unaware.
  13. Another tear jerking beginning to what portends to be an epic story. Glad to have you back with a new story.
  14. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Lovely story of first love, coming back around later in life.
  15. Great chapter, now Otis may not get caught up with the human trafficking that Hudson is investigating, and Hudson is going to be teaching him about dating. While trying to not get involved, let’s see how that turns out. Not so sure about the advice from Missy. Seems like she’s just trying to protect him, but that’s coming from a woman’s perspective.
  16. VBlew

    Chapter 17

    Going back in time, prior to all of the shifting. Is this where we find out what happens to his mother?
  17. VBlew

    Chapter 10

    Seem harsh for JJ I be punished so, but maybe it will bring them together. JJ mustn’t have been a real jerk to Travis in the past.
  18. Great ending to a wonderful story.
  19. VBlew

    Chapter 31

    Vanus opens up to his childhood trauma and is still loved by Bazzelthorpe! now maybe he can deal with the threat better.
  20. I find this topic of the white lion an interesting thread in the story.
  21. Welcome back. Great chapter. So much going on, I’m wondering what she scheming traitors did to have David lose his memory of Ben… and what is Ben planning to do with them all. Jim is so twisted all up, will he try to kill his brother?
  22. Great chapter. Will Talon be wearing white for the wedding?
  23. VBlew

    Chapter 29

    The stage is set, they have now. Both admitted how the frail about each other. The key of the lighter is leading them further on in the case.
  24. VBlew

    Conversations

    Good part of making up. Funny, they have now both been with girls “ all the way” but aren’t ready to take their relationship there? Maybe the gift from dad will help them out.
  25. VBlew

    Chapter 10

    Great chapter, good news is that Jacob now knows there are no rules against being friends with his friends.
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