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Terrific humorous ending. So that wraps up the parents and children. Loved the series.
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Everything around them is moving at faster than light speed, and Marc and Adam are taking their time to get to know each other. It’s like two princes joining their kingdoms into a larger one. It keeps getting more interesting. Adam has some self-doubt about what he is bringing to the relationship, but Marc assured him, he himself was enough. Will be interesting to see what happens when their dreams of their mate becomes reality.
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Be Careful What You Wish For
VBlew commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in Be Careful What You Wish For
Scott is not a caring person. He just wanted sex, and didn’t really appreciate who he invited home with him. Joshua did good to leave him hanging. The fantasy didn’t match the reality. -
That stupid Leviticus quote is always taken out of context to control people’s beliefs. Unfortunately Matt has lived a very sheltered life to this point.
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This was an interesting self guided tour. The narration for guide training they received was better than the guides explaining at the previous site. I had a brief thought about the evil skinwalker at the beginning, and got so involved in the plot that when it made an appearance it was a surprise. The guys did what they needed to protect themselves and the parents. Now for the fallout. Hopefully the parents are accepting and will keep their gifts secret.
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Loved the part about this being real life and not an HBO show. It’s getting interesting.
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This appears to be a wonderful new world to explore. Looking forward to reading it all.
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Seems like something magical is in the air, and it affected his work today.
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Chapter 30: A love that heals. A journey complete
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 30: A love that heals. A journey complete
That was an explosive ending chapter! Pun intended. Glad for the HEA with all of those couples together. Thanks for this intriguing story. -
Can the both survive in brackish waters? Or is this an impossible boundary? I don’t think freshwater beings can survive saltwater for long. Interesting background about being a traveler, and now wanting to settle down.
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Great chapter, the guys just happen to befriend and save a young man from killing himself, and then Jordan recognizes him as the younger brother of his own “friend” who was killed in a shark attack. Now we know why he was so reluctant to go to this place… hopefully it will bring some healing for both of them. The coincidences in this story are very compelling.
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That was some crazy flying. Who did they rescue? And who are they meeting and why the need for formal dress? Looking forward to the next chapter?
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Chapter 3 We’re Gonna Be Here Awhile.
VBlew commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 3 We’re Gonna Be Here Awhile.
Still trying to figure out who the victim is. And was the killer sneaking up on C.O. ? Or was it someone else, does he remember? Thayer is one horny dude… -
Funny that the intent particle bounced off the armor…. Maybe it will need to wait till bedtime? Sounds like it was aiming for the heart, not the head. Would love to read more.
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Intense chapter. Dexter has been MIA for too long. That snake needs to be caught and brought to justice too. Then maybe a HEA ending…. But not sure with this author.
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The descriptions of the areas visited were very interesting. Maybe they’ll meet the medicine man tomorrow and cal alert him to the presence of the evil skinwalker. The trouble is not outing themselves in the process. I’m with several others a call to Grandpa would be prudent, even if just for advice. Would not want the parents hurt if there was a confrontation.
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Is the man they’ll rescue the fated mate we’ve been waiting for? Some fun maneuvering through the asteroids. This is a bigger ship than he normally flies, and it seems the crew has not had training to deal with this… more please.
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This was an amazingly sensual chapter, and started with Marcus being his bold self. These guys needed the time alone. Being vulnerable and open with their emotions.
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Geoff is now getting to experience some aspects of MM loving. Wondering why Tom has such a large house? Is there a family? There was no mention of photos in the large house to explain. Looking forward to more of this story.
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Interesting, being dressed up. Then a first day at school and finding an admirer in art class who has an asshat for a boyfriend…
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William Harker’s Journal: Entry 35
VBlew commented on MrM's story chapter in William Harker’s Journal: Entry 35
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Good news on the job front. I will say I’ve never had a physical exam like that… and when I was very young, did unfortunately have to go to the free health clinic a couple of times…
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BACK TO PRESENT DAY, NEW YORK
VBlew commented on LJCC's story chapter in BACK TO PRESENT DAY, NEW YORK
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This was a beautiful ending to an amazing story that started with these guys in college, an has been an inspirational ride of family, and perseverance. Thanks for the ride, and looking forward to the prequels.
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Glad he is alive and not living with homophobes. The cousins seem really supportive. And his Aunt too. Will James be able to make contact? Especially since he seems to have moved as well.
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