VBlew
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Loving the surprises you keep treating your readers to. So many questions just like the others have. Is the cat a transdimenstional being who has to have a companion to work with? Looking forward to where this goes!
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Looking forward to what all the mystery was about the family’s sudden move, and the boys time at the cabin before the start college.
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Maybe being sent back home Gideon will get to feel the loss of Kavan, while he is being shown Venice like a prince…
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Aside from the bad exchange vets, the guys are taking advantage of their time in the UK. Visiting zoos and possibly seeing animals the would not see any other way.
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Darn, the people Asher ran away from have found his home.
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It was good for Tommy that he has good friends to talk through this with. Sounds like he may be bi, but then again at that age, you can get hard from many things…
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I like this interviewer, they seem to want, and possibly be able to help. That would be a good thing.
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Hopefully their quick action will save the buffalo.
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The Night on the Mountaintop
VBlew commented on Kelevra's story chapter in The Night on the Mountaintop
Getting them to work as a team seems like they are going to need to have this trusted relationship in the future. Maybe this experience will rid Novo of some of the trauma of his past too… great chapter. -
Great chapter, all of Marc’s friends are on the same page now. Hopefully this will help him going forward. Now for Sawyer to make up for not being there in his time of need. Then again, Marc had not left a message…. Communication is a two way street, and they both have been pretty poor at it up to now.
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Great matches. Was Frodd poisoned?
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Great 2nd chapter. And yes each of the describing thinking of the other while masturbating does seem believable. Really liking this diary format too.
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Chapter 9: Will Ben and David get the happy ending they deserve?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 9: Will Ben and David get the happy ending they deserve?
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Great start to a continuing story. Funny that Marcus got upset and just left. Seemed like they could have talked a little more.
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I felt that this was coming, just not the how of Zhiv’s death. David and River will carry on, and hopefully the world I’ll wake up and change.
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Is the earth part of the Mara too? It could have caused the storm. Sad that so many animals had to die. Although back earlier Zhiv said that some would die for their cause. Hopefully David’s parents are ok. Pete will be busy with cleanup and probably looking for missing people.
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Great ending. It does seem like time sped up there at the end, jumping from Ash & Cove’s wedding reception to putting together a baby bed for Ashley’s baby.
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I had to go double check the story status, as this looked like it might be the end. I really like the characters, and this chapter with the corrections to the misconceptions was handled well. The panic of a parent when their child goes missing is so heart wrenching. Fortunately it was all ok.
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At least they got some release of the sexual tension. Finn is an ass. Aunt May needs to get to a doctor soon.
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What a great ending to a lovely story. So glad that they waited until they were really ready.
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So it was probably the Homeland Security people in the helicopter. The video shoot went well. Now to edit and get it out. And hopefully keep Zhiv safe.
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Sammy is fully aware of what he wants and is asking Ritter to grow up and admit what he wants to himself.
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That was a really mature way for all 3 boys to deal with the situation. Daniel and Joseph being in a committed relationship seems really important to them, and even though Sam wanted sex, they wanted a loving relationship.
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The helicopter was a surprise, wonder if whoever it was informed the local police the we’re going to be doing that? Military or Park service, or possibly news crew? The boys are all getting along well. Hopefully they will all end up in the same home. There is a lot of foreshadowing about what could happen to Zhiv.
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Sawyer is definitely not a morning guy. And his joy at sharing his find of the top of the secret passage was awesome. There banter will eventually lead to more than innuendo 😊 Aunt May is not well but too stubborn to do something about it, an it seem this small town only has one doctor. Hopefully the boys find a solution to help her. I ant to know more about the secret passage. They did not get to finish their exploration.
