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Chapter 4 - Jasper's place
VBlew commented on WritersBlock404's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Jasper's place
Great connection happening. I like the part about incorporating real experience into the writing. -
Was that a typo on the end value? And the dimensions, that would be an enormous boat! Used prices on Neels are in the 6 figures…. Sounds like this is going to be a grand adventure.
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More babies for this amazing family to love on. Awesome chapter
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Chapter 12 - Take Your Shoes Off
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Take Your Shoes Off
Seems like a little overreacting on having his home invaded an the potential of a new partner for his dad. Luke does have a lot going on in his head and this change seem triggering him some. Fortunately he has Taz, who was so cute with his reaction to the cuddle pic. -
Chapter 10 - Bedroom Talk
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Bedroom Talk
It’s just after Leander is getting off work. So probably a normal time for him. and he may not be out, so that’s a concern for him. -
Chapter 8 It All Comes (Cums) Together
VBlew commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 8 It All Comes (Cums) Together
Great story. Seems like a lot of coincidences led to their meeting, and things turned out well for them. -
Great story, the ending seemed a little abrupt, but did tie up some loose ends. Looking forward to the future.
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Do shapeshifters in this universe have destined mates like the wolves do? Could that be causing Kage’s reaction?
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Glad you’re back on this storyline. The parents murder was quite a shock, and coming into the home being trashed…. Probably not the way the police left it, and then Kage! I had some suspicion in the earlier series that his parents were more than what he thought they were…. Possibly shifters themselves, working for some organization, and having their “jobs”being a cover. Just a thought? So looking forward to more.
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What You Don’t Know Makes You More Curious
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What You Don’t Know Makes You More Curious
Was that hooded girl one of the strange triplets that Jonathan and Maddox ran into earlier? That whole scene with Connor was strange, and very intrusive.- 27 comments
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Chapter 2 - Match and Matched
VBlew commented on WritersBlock404's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Match and Matched
I loved the way he thought about and then setup his AI. Chris seems like he will be a good friend. -
No sneaking up on Mikey in his own home… love this group of ticklish brothers and lovers.
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Some good progress. Honest conversation and staying the night.
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Chapter 5 Surprise at the LGBTQ+ Center
VBlew commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 5 Surprise at the LGBTQ+ Center
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This is an amazing companion story to Boss Nanny. These characters are so interesting and have their own life challenges of navigating relationships. Masterfully written you will be drawn in and want even more.
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Chapter 4 A Virgin No More
VBlew commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Chapter 4 A Virgin No More
Wow, that was a great introduction for Bruce to gay sex by Mark. -
I’m thinking that was some device that triggered the tree growing, and not Daeran’s ability..
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As a Sci-Fi lover myself, the premise of having these colonies in place is very interesting basis for the world the characters inhabit. Looking forward to where this goes.
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Great start with the introduction of these two guys with very different experiences so far.
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Glad they got the evidence that Meg had been cheating on Jake…. Now getting his Sister’s stuff back was interesting. Coming out to his sister was a big step. Dealing with their father in person will be interesting. Looking forward to where this goes.
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It’s good to see Jonathan being able to open up and talk honestly about his past. I still think Rusty is a little jealous. Will see what happens there. Glad they’re talking more.
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Ok, so the soul color corresponds to the planet’s color. Earth being blue, and the green planet in the other galaxy. So the question is the green soul trying to build the tech to get back to the green planet or bring the beings from that planet to earth? Interesting premise, looking forward to where it leads.
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Great Story. Glad you picked it back up. It looks like it could be the beginning of an interesting friendship. Curious about what the green soul represents.
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Hopefully that is the end of Burt. These guys just keep having all kinds of needs to go to the hospital. Hope it calms down and they can enjoy life a little.
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Very true. So many lives given for our country to be.
