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Tarquin’s character is a malevolent blight on their family. A truly despicable individual, manipulating both of his brothers for so long. Can’t wait to see it come tumbling down. Hopefully Oliver gets his heart back. Pining for something that could have been with Finn, they never even got started, like Garret did, so it’s hard to see why he fell so deep and got jealous.
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Just started this one, hooked me right away.
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Yes, Mr. Rhodes was primary cause, but he can’t see that. That was a bad prognosis, hopefully not accurate. Miracles do happen.
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Chapter 69: Professor Petrov Makes Three
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 69: Professor Petrov Makes Three
So now Heath knows about the powers. Did he get let in on Shawn being versatile? That by itself is mind blowing in this world. -
So there is some history between the Herald and Ain. Are they related? Fenn seemed to come out of this encounter on good footing.
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Dean should have just kissed Julian, and he would have known he was serious about the marry me…. But that would not be your style. I really don want to see Dean get hurt.
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This was very deep. First the physical contact. Than the emotional openness. Adrian stated what he wanted. Liam made a decision, for now. He needs to dig into himself, maybe with professional help, or his friends.
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Yes, they are going to be together and fight for each other. Loved the first approach of intimacy. Orel is so sweet. Garret did the right thing informing Lydia.
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I especially loved the part where Will requested the ability to travel and be out of the guided cage, and the order miraculously appeared. Get ready for the campaign….
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Asset Protection: A Hulking & Wiccan Tale
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Asset Protection: A Hulking & Wiccan Tale
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That was some heavy lifting. Shame that Brad was so used by his supposed friends. And he is right Aaron needs to get Carl’s side of what happened, maybe it will stop the nightmares.
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So leveling up in Matter manipulation then just walking through a wall… that’s going to take some explaining…
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Jasper was the F up… you were supposed to be there for Ryan’s birthday! Did you even call?
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Lovely chapter of falling in love. Loved the woman in the store, the flirty barista, the movie theater was perfect.
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I think Fenn under Ain’s care will flourish and learn what his powers can really do. Hopefully this is good for both of them. Ain seems to really like Fenn. Loving the world building.
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Peter is hilarious. West is going to pay for this… in a very good way. Will needed his brother too. The letter is interesting as I was thinking Ned was roaming around with Enrico…. I thought there had to be a coded message in the last one. You just confirmed it. I tried call the simple codes, but that would have been to obvious. First word, first letter, etc. Andrew used Peter’s book as a code, but that was on the espionage front, this seems simplified. Figure you will let us in on it in the story later on.
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[Memory, Junior Year, October] – That Time When You Needed Me
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year, October] – That Time When You Needed Me
Alexander was telling Lyn exactly what he wanted but Lyn was oblivious… -
Brilliantly ended. The recovery after, the year gap to the sentencing of the pimp, the takedown of the other participants in the sex ring. The boys having stable lives. Looking forward to further stories of the constable.
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Amazing chapter, Orel moves in. They go to the attached house, where there is a window that looks directly into Garret’s office. I thought Garret’s office could see the garage bay doors? Where he stalked Finn…. Loved Andrew’s arrival. Finn doesn’t seem to know who he is other than the connection with his father.. being Finn, he just fixes the Mustang. Love the geek connection with Tommy and Orel. Maybe they’ll get to the ice rink? Tarquin is going to be in such deep do do if he tries to attack Finn…
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The plan is falling into place. Carter’s campaign is coming, and the democratic machine is providing the legal framework. The boys are so adorable.
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Beautiful reconnection.
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Great ending to this part of Jody’s story. I’m sure he’s going to find plenty of companions in the Navy.
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This mystery woman seems to possibly be able to steal others powers, Ainreth was lucky his friends came to his aid.
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Chapter 12 - What Should We Call It?
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 12 - What Should We Call It?
Love this chapter, with the emotional development, and the growing friendship, once they or one of them decide they want to take it further. They’ll have a good foundation. -
The trip to the barn was quite a revelation for Finn and Orel. The notebook will be a useful tool in the takedown of the oppressor. Tarquin revealed his true self to Oliver. It seems very ironic that Tarquin manipulated Orel for their homophobic father, to control him, and yet is tryin to do this gala event to impress a very openly gay man who hates bullies… I hope Oliver pulls the funding before all that money is wasted.
