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Appearances are deceiving
VBlew commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in Appearances are deceiving
Justin is just figuring himself out, and apparently so is Wolf. Nothing wrong with playing around. Rugby is a very hands on sport… Alarik’s meeting up with his old friend Harry was interesting, very different political views it seems. Not likely another reunion there. -
Very emotional chapter. Jack wants to be friends, maybe more, but doesn’t know how. Noah is super friendly and asks Nick out on a date. When Jack says Noah isn’t who he thinks he is to Nick, that set off warning bells in my head… what does Jack know, was he hurt by Noah in the past? They’ve not been at this school for a long time….
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It seems to be a good thing that the contestants are now reading their contracts. Very interesting that some are like Jamie’s, and others not. Hearst is recognized by Jamie, without his mask…. This is getting really interesting.
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Good chapter explaining some more of this magical new world.
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Sounds like an amazing party. And he is getting the house 😁
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You said Yes, Eli. Beautiful.
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Jealous much for dumping a guy and your brother stepping in???
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Seems like a parallel universe that he woke up in. Having the consciousness of his older self in the body of his younger self. With 2 dads instead of a deceased mom and dad… very interesting.
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Fantastic ending. What a year. Jonah had a tremendous amount of personal growth. Found that sometimes first loves don’t last. And you can love again. Even with a ton of trauma going on in your life.
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Editing the roleplay video
VBlew commented on DanXWrites's story chapter in Editing the roleplay video
Yeah, still not straight….hot scenes, can’t wait for more. -
Chapter 24: Nothing sweeter than a fate fought for and won.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 24: Nothing sweeter than a fate fought for and won.
What an ending, just when it looks like happily ever after, there is a subtle prod of somebody lurking?…. Amazing writing. -
Ash and Desmond finally go all the way, and it was amazingly magical… This is such an epic story. You write so well, have faith in your muse.
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Wow, They were all so devastated by the loss of Zac, even Soullen’s power was not enough, it took Jacob asking Q to bring him back. Then Q did something amazing. Will he be the same when he recovers? What did he have to give up for this miracle? Will it change something in the fundamental reality of the Skai/Nave relationship? Even if Zac is now Nave? So many questions.
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So much emotion in this chapter, Charlie and Adams friendship, living together, learning all Charlie was involved in, then his death. And a new life for Adam to start living fully.
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Chapter 14 – The Final Chapter
VBlew commented on Inkognito's story chapter in Chapter 14 – The Final Chapter
Wow, heartfelt chapter. Vampires don’t typically die, unless killed, so this world is a little different. The loss of their friend and mentor was conveyed very well. -
S2 E6: "You’re Not Going Anywhere"
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E6: "You’re Not Going Anywhere"
This chapter really has me thinking that Dylan wants a relationship with Troy. He was upset seeing Troy with someone else. He certainly surprised Troy by showing up in Paris unannounced. But he needs to make his intentions very clear, not just in bed. -
This is a wonderful end to his time in NC and time ti go back to NY to be with his family.
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Very interesting. So Zeke, is the king reborn, but how did he get to earth?
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What's going on with Dillian?
VBlew commented on garfwiz's story chapter in What's going on with Dillian?
It’s all coming to a head. Great chapter. Tala’s power is much greater that his grandfather had any clue about. -
So Justin takes a chance and meets “Alex”/Wolf… is he ashamed of his relationship with Alarik now? Staying out of view for Wolf to se him on their dinner night? Very interesting turn.
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Nick is a true friend. Jack has some anger management issues, but thankfully seems ok now. The cuddles are probably more support than he’s had in years. Hope this group can include him more.
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Beautiful chapter, Kurt’s heartfelt speech, The Mayor doing a great job of keeping it short, and welcoming new citizens. Tony was a bit surprised by the whole thing.
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Uncle Charlie is a saint…. Adam now has good friends, and is moving on with his life. Eve is an evil bitch.
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Chapter 1: An Unscheduled Arrival
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 1: An Unscheduled Arrival
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Beautiful short story.
