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Brad messed with the wrong guy this time. But will he know where Peter was taken to? Or was it just revenge?
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Wishbone was pretty viscous during that initial attack in the woods. This is an interesting turn of events.
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Just how straight is Len, when he keeps getting BJs from a guy 3 times a day? Maybe he just can’t admit he’s bi?
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Good fight, they have a map and a rifle now. Just need to get that silver bullet out of Barghast’s shoulder.
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What a gentleman, and an amazing introduction to Hawaiian cuisine. They are really enjoying each other and starting what I hope is a great relationship.
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Mason learns that maybe not passing the test to be a medic saved his life. This is Orc warefare, not playing by human rules…. Braden is still as crazy as ever.
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I do wonder if Peter or Matt will break the news to Ned that he is Will’s son. Interesting he got the James Dean reference too… if they have a hard wired connection, they could hook the PlayStation into that and then communicate with the outside world… just a thought.
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Chapter 34: A Funny Thing Happened When Landing on the Moon
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 34: A Funny Thing Happened When Landing on the Moon
For me it was something intuitive, that they wouldn’t put these young guys in space just to have them pass a test, with no prior training. -
Chapter 34: A Funny Thing Happened When Landing on the Moon
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 34: A Funny Thing Happened When Landing on the Moon
Ha, I was good at guessing it was a simulation, and they all mostly worked together, except Zane. -
Barghast saves Crowe from the evil spirit and performs a cleansing ritual. Hopefully this frees them from this evil.
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Gallagher is going to be very sorry….
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Chapter 33: Practical, Surprise Training
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 33: Practical, Surprise Training
Knocked out this group awakens to find themselves in space with a mission to bet to a moon base. Could this just be a simulation? Or did they really get put in space? -
Kenny stitched up a very bitchy Alex, then their rescue plane arrived with a “care” package. Kenny is committed to rescuing his friend and boyfriend. Would be a good time to check in on the prisoners and see what they’re doing to disrupt things.
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Wow, that was sad what happened to Dailan, and sharing it with Creek may have helped him heal some more. And Marvin explained where his head was at. Wanting to be friends. Though, if he hadn’t run into Creek at the cafe, would he have reached out? He had been silent for a while. Glad Creek is in a good place now too.
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Wow, that was sad what happened to Dailan, and sharing it with Creek may have helped him heal some more. And Marvin explained where his head was at. Wanting to be friends. Though, if he hadn’t run into Creek at the cafe, would he have reached out? He had been silent for a while. Glad Creek is in a good place now too.
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This is very good seeing this from Barghast’s perspective.
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Chapter 31: Physical Skills Class
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 31: Physical Skills Class
Interesting that Agility ability seems to make things appear to move in slow motion. Like super speed. -
Back to the beginning again. I really like these two. They were stuck in a time loop in the last story.
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Hopefully Shane just had to go get some test done and was not abducted.
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This chapter had some interesting sex… Jesse started to get into the controlled pain. The gaming might give Shaun another outlet for his want to see blood, but could also become a distraction from the music. The interaction with Brian and Shaun is so sweet. Sam got his knife back to Shaun, and Jesse would be pissed about that if he knew. Interesting about the Nurse and the stolen identity… that could be a real way to get back at Erin.
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Chapter 30: Shower, Dinner, and Dessert
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 30: Shower, Dinner, and Dessert
That being versatile in this universe is unknown. The gene therapy story is a good cover especially since he is so much more endowed than most of the population. -
What a beautiful ending to this very interesting story.
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Chapter 29: Back to the Dorm to "Relax"
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 29: Back to the Dorm to "Relax"
Curious how many points he will get for that little orgy, also maybe a top session with Caio later on. -
Mac and that burner phone, doesn’t seem like it’s made up. That much back and forth between 2 people for that long, especially if there are photos… If he goes to jail and that is found out, he probably won’t last long.
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Now, not only does Alex know but so do Steve and Kenny. hopefully they can make a hasty retreat and not get caught.
