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Wow, that’s a super intense chapter, can see why you can’t write short stories. I really want to see a HEA for Griffin and Sean, but in just a few chapters, don’t see that happening. This copycat or trainee now murdering parents and abducting the abused children is something special. Hopefully Griffin gets some clues and the find these three, and maybe more children before they are inducted to be serial killers too…
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This chapter shows what an amazing loving family can look like. This family is so amazing. Led by Marc and Adam. Who are always surprising each other. They are raising amazing children to be the next leaders. Love that new leisure ship, as well as what they have planned for the expansion of their leisure division. This story is so incredible in its scope and world building. Enjoy your time off for reflection.
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D'Artagnan & Chapter 4 - FIN
VBlew commented on RedMoon's story chapter in D'Artagnan & Chapter 4 - FIN
Michael did seem to be holding back in that fight. Interesting being alone on the inside.. -
Slow burn on this. The are getting to know each other, working late, side by side. Very intimate. No lines crossed yet.
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So much pride and loving support for the new family member.
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What a great bonding day. I love hiking like that but it’s been a long time since I have. Alex’s questions are good, letting his dad know they are OK and he wants to get to know him better. This whole walking Jon off is just insecurity and he needs to face that, or he’s going to loose it. It also seems like Alex has more of a clue about that. And may be able to help…
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Michael’s fighting is most definitely Psychic abilities. Zorro is still alive to continue fighting. And this is the beginning of Railroad…
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We learn from Caitlin that this behavior of Joe’s has been happening longer that their conversation about Will loving him. Seems like wince he was out of his home he went crazy, but he did set Will up with Aidan, even if he didn’t consciously know they were both gay, their may have been a subconscious recognition. And the anger seems like a lot of internalized homophobia… The big question is who is in the pool? The story seemed to have started with drowned people in a river if I remember correctly, so it may not be Joey.
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Great beginning, something from the ashes is brought forth.
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I Shouldn’t Be Looking at Dylan Like That
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in I Shouldn’t Be Looking at Dylan Like That
Fast pacing, love the characters already. Just the tension between Troy and Dylan… is Dylan gay too, and Jake was setting them up?.. -
This chapter was deep. Connecting emotionally, opening up. Still leaving some things unsaid, but in the end they are comfortable together. Wonder if being around a dragon would prolong the unicorn lifespan? Can’t wait for the dragon to come out and play.
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So I’m wondering more about the missing underwear, the mystery man outside the strange dreams, and the pentagram that Troy wear. Then Ralph’s “accident” are they all connected?
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Act II - When You’re Good to Mama
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - When You’re Good to Mama
Gabriel forgot that just swallowing Ray’s cum wold be detected by the wolves at the party… We still don’t know what kind of shifter Ray is, he seems to be more than just a wolf. That magic bouncing off him was interesting. Seems like they need to truly bond soon. -
Chapter Chapter Twenty-Three
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Chapter Twenty-Three
Great chapter, Rory is accepted by the Euphon, has a vision and is told it will take them all working together. Ash is going to wear down Desmond, they will be a great couple. Love the joint kings idea… the homophobia has to go… on to dinner, crowning ceremonies in both kingdoms… -
Blake seems like he may be a predator, and definitely doesn’t want anyone playing with a new toy before he has his chance. The boss employee relationship is headed right for a sexual harassment case…
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Love that Tony is thinking of Adam and their business and for sure moving back to Thompsonville. Not sure about Randy Thompson for the pen name, could be a bit close to home for the Thompson family the town is named after… Adam was very helpful, and once he recognized Tony was overjoyed. He may need an invite to the party??
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Loving the ticklish superheroes.
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Chapter 2 - New Friends
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 2 - New Friends
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Act II - The Bitch Is Back
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - The Bitch Is Back
That was a big cliffhanger. What is Mother, if she was not a wolf from the inter species breeding options? Ray now know that his presence can lead others who touch him to possibly start to shift. That means he could be used as a weapon… So much more to learn. -
Loving the relationship development, and they happen to be living in a gay friendly area, so hopefully that will help too.
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There Is No Other Place I Wanna Be
VBlew commented on Bry Bryant's story chapter in There Is No Other Place I Wanna Be
Damn, after waiting so long to talk with Greg, Bry finds he may just be too late. -
Beautiful chapter blending all of the religions in the household. What is Tankiso’s religion? Buddhist?
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This inner dialogue of doubt is hard. He at least needs to talk with Jon about what he’s feeling, if he won’t be honest with his son…
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Well handled, Aiden arrived in time and was able to get Will professional help right away. There is true caring there.
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Love the ending. Wonderful how all of their lives intersected.
