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Fun chapter, makeovers for everyone. Ryan is following their socials if he posted back that quick. Jasper needs to talk with him, even to just say hello…
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So much drama, loved Mateo stepping up, finding a decoy, helping his friend. The biggest thing I’m thinking about getting to Europe is, does Hudson have a passport? That was not mentioned in packing the backpack…
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Loved this story. Wonderful world building. All of the choices for sharing future stories are genres that I love. I will say Dragons have a special place, so would be my first choice.
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I was wondering how long it was gonna take for Will to get that message “I know “seems to have taken days but maybe it’s just the pacing. Excellent chapter.
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An amazing visit with the sun, moon, and other stars. Beautiful news about the wedding of the kings.
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Chapter 13: The empire strikes back
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 13: The empire strikes back
Is Julian really so oblivious to Deans desire for him? Sophia started something that she’s going to be paying for, whoever this mystery man is, they are dangerous. How did Dean find out about the competition, having Julian’s prototype designs? -
The threat of the evil Queen trying to kidnap Lani again will mean he will be guarded in the future. I’m thinking that with all of the people in the two kingdoms that he has helped, they would go to war with the Queen’s country at capture and imprison her so she could not hurt the Star again.
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Wow, there was a little foreshadowing of what happened in the barn, but the actual thing was a breaking point for both boys. Did Tarquin continue this behavior with others under his influence? Possibility of these boys not being the only victims increases their potential allies when it comes to putting him down. Glad for team Finn and Lydia, soon to add Oliver after he’s been tested…
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Wonderful trip to an interesting place.
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Very interesting experiments with the mind meld and the mechanics of the life force calling. Finding the giant orcas to the shark memories was interesting. What an adventure.
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Great short story, two men coming together helping each other out.
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What a cliffhanger, Jack needs to be more vocal about his observations…. Seemed like Vince and Theo have also been pulled into this realm…. But arrived prior to him. Is it a vision or were they pulled into the veil?
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Beautiful short story. Life is looking up for both guys.
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Loved the role playing game theme to this chapter. It brought them all closer, I thought that when Tabby and Oliver saw each other that there might have been a relationship in their past, it was a friendship. Loved Tabby playing match maker here. Walter is a true blessing to Finn.
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After Sam got out of the hospital everything seemed nice for the night, snuggled up on the couch. The day started ok, but then the detective showed up with bad news…. Both brothers had been drugged and raped, with video proof. If Kyle stays in jail, he won’t be safe there with drug suppliers wanting him gone… if he gets out he has a target on his back too…
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Damn that was cruel. I’m assuming he can’t change into his larger form for some reason. He would be better able to defend himself. What is the purpose of taking the stardust? Does it have healing powers?
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Beautiful story. Love the slow building friendship.
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In the beginning of the chapter Jasper said he gave up drinking, but at the end he’s in a bar drunk?
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Finn and Garrett were not good for each other. Kyle is very good for Garrett. Finn just needs to get over himself and look at another direction and find somebody that’s good for him as well. Get him out of this mood that he is in and find real love. It sounds like you have a potential prospect for that.
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Very interesting beginning. Looking forward to the story and the world building.
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Chapter 66: Training Mission to an Outer Moon, Part 1
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 66: Training Mission to an Outer Moon, Part 1
So far so good. This part of space travel isn’t that interesting. It does seem that this is militarily training vs civilian training. -
Seems like his mother was pretty understanding, unlike his father.
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So these Khareans came and took Lali. Wonder if they started the blight too? Hoping to weaken the kingdom for an invasion?
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They made the journey… what will the repercussions be? Jacob just wants to support his dad, an Tommy is not letting go of Jacob.
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I Needed to See How It Would End
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in I Needed to See How It Would End
As rough as it was finding out Lyn does seem to be running away. Alexanders confession of why he got married was something that showed how much he cared for Lyn so that he would be able to continue his life after his mother’s death. Lyn needs to think really hard about that. There is a huge question of why Alexander did not reach out after he divorced, and the timeframe was up?- 36 comments
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