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Interesting chapter, the weather seemed to mirror his attitude. 105 and no AC is brutal. Maybe a pool, or is the beach close?
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Joshua is really playing the nasty pirate captain role hard in this chapter, almost making pet uncertain of what was really happening. Hopefully after these other scoundrels are dealt with, their life can be something better.
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So, the truth then???
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Gray’s heart is in the right place. Wanting Vince and Peter to be happy. I’m thinking Vince doesn’t know about Peter looking for other work, most likely out of town… Seems like a good idea, dinner at the Grange. Not out in public, that would be pushing too far.
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It’s nice to have a friend that owns the planet to keep the newsies away. They still got to enjoy their day, the racing with one skiing and the other hang gliding was amazing. Marc is going to learn to ski so they can do that together. beautiful time together on their honeymoon. Can’t wait to see what else they do.
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I still say Alan is not straight… Good times with Dad.
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The healed vampire has extraordinary strength and silver does not seem to affect him any longer… did the graze of Gabriel’s fang on Ray’s neck cause something to happen? Or was his healing something inherent in him? Seems he may already be some kind of shifter, just had not shifted before? At the end of this he still wants answers. Will he change with this full moon? can’t wait to see what happens next.
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Interesting that he needed to get up and write. Sometimes I believe that’s our subconscious bringing out ideas an it’s good to capture them. The morning walk was interesting. This house keeps coming up. Seems like foreshadowing to me. The introduction by Scott of the guys was brilliant.
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Chapter 4: Gael's world gets rocked. Is it in a good way?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: Gael's world gets rocked. Is it in a good way?
Gael is very different now. He is much stronger after the trials he’s been through. -
I had to go look. I haven’t seen any story of Joshua Thatcher here on GA. So am I right to assume this is a story coming soon? Loved the Blue Whale analogy. And we know from Eric’s story he is a billionaire.
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Chapter 6: The Distance Between Us
VBlew commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 6: The Distance Between Us
Oh hell, Adrian help save Aelios from his nemesis Kaelen, who tells him that Lord Theron is still alive. So he is going to have to kill him all over again. Bit maybe with Adrian at his side, he will be able to. Will Aelios have to make Adrian a vampire for them to be together forever? -
Such a beautiful love story. Meeting with Steven the coffee roaster, who genuinely wanted to know about them, now a cheerleader for them. The time at home getting more into a rhythm, and realizing they belong together. Now breaking the news to the sons…
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So, I’m wondering if this “phantom” empires heart is from the future? As we have no knowledge that in this timeline the ship can open wormholes… this seemingly is the time when Luther and Richter were in the throes of passionate lovemaking if I remember from the other story where Luther’s memory was hidden from him by Richter. So much more to uncover. Fantastic storytelling.
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Some progress, a good shower, showing the food replicator, although not quite right. But getting there.
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Chapter 2: Christian isn't giving up.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Christian isn't giving up.
Smoldering tension between Miguel and Christian…hopefully they will overcome their differences, get Christian’s father freed, and find common ground. -
Luther saved a stunned Abel from the phantom, then the abandon ship and speed away. 2 Empire’s Heart ships? Who or what is controlling the drones from the other ship? Someone with Richter’s level of psychic abilities?
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Hearst was called in to consult, and was lovingly embraced by his boyfriend, even if he’s not ready for that label yet. Jamie’s manager was right on target Jamie is being maliciously maligned by the folks at Livefeed. After a couple of blowjobs the guys need to get to strategy.
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The boys kicked ML out of their group. The will be better off without her. Things are going to begin to stop working, like the electricity, then running water, etc. they will definitely need to band together with others.
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True feelings come out now. No more lies. Maybe Joshua has enough treasure to quit being a pirate?
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Yes, Luther saved his lover. And the plan to blow everyone up was averted.
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Part One: I'm Never Gonna Pass...
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: I'm Never Gonna Pass...
I’m thinking that Devin saw Brandon around Tyler that day they spent in bed…. And he’s upset Tyler didn’t tell him about it…. Asshat is right. Talk, kiss or hug, and make up. This teacher is going to be a pain. Maybe there is another class he can improve on? -
I’m thinking like Andromeda Strain, but that was a virus, not a gas. Where else does that water drain into? Lots of dead people…
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Seems like all of their foes showed up at the same time… where are the youngsters in all of this chaos?
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Act I - Oh, What A Beautiful Mornin'
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Oh, What A Beautiful Mornin'
Interesting turn of events. His blood did seem to revive the almost gone vampire, so you could see his desire to have more of Ray… on the other hand, he does seem to be like a possible bond mate to Gabriel, who still doesn’t smell him, but is instinctively protective of him. Ray is right to ask these questions. Who am I? -
Hopefully Lucas will recover and get justice he deserves for being beaten by his uncle. And maybe the guys going to see him will help too.
