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Why did Tav stop coming? Was he having feelings for Freddie? I wonder if he lied about what happens when he gets stabbed. I don’t think this is really all play, seems like it may be real.
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This was a rough chapter. The thought that so much abuse as a youngster that comes back later to destroy relationships, and lead to depression periods is beyond my comprehension. But reading that this happened and he had help from his friends, there is hope for a better life after.
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Dottie’s first error is thinking that Wojciech is still thinking in linear time. Maybe keeping Stoker in that one location will be his saving grace. Even with all the subterfuge of using agents to try to obscure his whereabouts. Love Stoker’s thinking that a pawn can become a Queen.
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Sweet chapter. This intervention for Jonah is a good thing. He’s not being his normal self, so something is off. They are good friends for caring like this.
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Can Wojciech come back and overlap himself? ie Paraxox, then step into the booth right after the woman gives him his watch and he left with his watch, and give Stoker another watch and they both get out of this time stream? so many possibilities!
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Great ending, sorry for the injury to Eddie. But they all came through it better off.
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I was thinking the same thing Wojciech with two watches gets back to Stoker and they escape together. We’re the agents in that scene with Thomas, the ones that took the original watches from Dottie, Wojciech and Stoker? Hopefully trapping Dottie in 1953? Time for a new more likable Ambassador!
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So Alan did need some help preparing for his show. 😉
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I think they need to find others willing to part with their watches, before Dottie thinks about this place. And then that leaves the two agents they gave their watches to stuck….
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Wow, amazing chapter. Max still has Sam on his brain though he’s now Ben’s. Hopefully Roman will sink in enough to replace that. These two are good together.
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Beautiful caring, controlled. The Biker is taking great care of this responsibility, being Bob’s first.
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When Your Exes Marry, Don't Kiss Your Fake Date
VBlew commented on Rafy's story chapter in When Your Exes Marry, Don't Kiss Your Fake Date
Beautiful short story, would love to know more about their future, however this is a perfect ending, leaving us with hope for a beautiful life together. -
Stoker finally took the aggregate of matter. Somehow I thought it would be like Neo in the Matrix, downloading what he needed to fight. It is apparent the the physical body needs to be trained to respond to the input… they escaped, but to what, with Reed wanting to kill Wojciech, does he still? Will he out himself as a former traveler? Will they get their watches back and escape this timeline? What else can Stoker do? They get the aggregates with no instruction on how to use them, but maybe the first one can tell them how to use the second, if they ask?
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Wow, what a cliffhanger. The part about Killian seeing through the killers eyes, now knowing it was Caleb was very interesting. Hopefully the police arrive soon, and get the voice recording, and Killian and Asher are OK.
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Act III - Holding Out For A Hero
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Holding Out For A Hero
Simply masterful chapter. So much tension and intrigue. With Gabriel and Ray back together, they are very powerful, captured in their love. Ariadne coming into her own power no longer being a pawn. The calling happening and leading Ray and Gabriel to simply get up and walk out. with all of the other shifters and witches going to the same place, and a Vampire army following. What prophecy is going to be fulfilled? So looking forward to see what happens next. -
Bob was being quite vulnerable, and the biker is being quite gentle leading him to the next level. Glad to see more of this story.
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A Wolfshifter Meant Only for Me
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Wolfshifter Meant Only for Me
Seems like in all of this that Jack is Theodore’s mate. Besides guardian, of Danny, what is his relationship with Theodore? The wicked witch is dead. Will there be anyone to mentor Danny with his powers? Will he become a Werewolf with the mating? only a few chapters left to answer all of this.- 18 comments
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Wow, Wojciech had no idea the being questioned on matters that the aggregate could answer would be so devastating. Now trapped in a very dangerous timestream to them they will have to find a way out. Dottie was not honest at all about what would happen, the relinquishing of their watches. See ie she is ever trusted again by this pair.
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Alan asking about the after party, seems like he may be interested in some extra time, where Cal only seems interested in something with Brady. The talk Brady had in the dressing area was reassuring, especially since they haven’t discussed the relationship with Alan yet. Interestingly group of guys in this section of the pool area. The tips seem good so far.
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"The Cookout" (Part 1)"
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Cookout" (Part 1)"
Daisy finally put all the pieces together, and clearly told Blake what he needed to do to keep Jackson in his life. She loves her son too much to let him be a secret. -
Sounds like this was where you needed to be at that time in your life. Love the whole role playing thing. I never got into that myself, but is sounds fascinating. The language thing I get my second long term relationship was with a polyglot. English and Greek by birth, and then majored in Spanish and took up Japanese, and a smattering of others just enough to get by.
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Fun pride parade.
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Nice intro to film school…
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Areal conversation between Blake and Pitt, still not willing to act on anything. The letters amusing as always.
