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It’s interesting the Heralds attention to Fenn. So we find out that Ain is an author of “romance” novels, and Petre is his translator.
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William Harker’s Journal: Entry 48
VBlew commented on MrM's story chapter in William Harker’s Journal: Entry 48
This is the life of a vampire he was warned about. I’m trying to remember in this world if there are humans that are willing blood donors, so the vampires don’t actually have to kill to feed? -
Jesse is a raw nerve, seems like Hank, steady hand and grounding is helping him.
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Will has all of his family’s support for the debate. Alex was awesome, defending his father. The Jet needs to be an upgrade!
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The visit by the moon goddess was inspired. Jack was horny when he woke up.
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Chapter 5: Stormy Weather (Jeff)
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 5: Stormy Weather (Jeff)
What a way to deal with a snowstorm that shuts down the slopes. -
Great chapter. Pete did an excellent job in the debate, unflappable. Got the truth out about Andrew. Very nice.
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Fantastic party for Brian. Cliff’s surprise gift will help them get their own place. The ending was a little dark, but that’s always been there with Shaun…
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Sean figured out that Gabriel’s cover name was fake. And that he has a tell when he’s lying. It’s getting interesting.
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They have learned to make other things with their combined powers. Armor and weapons are a good start. Now to find this mysterious lab that is experimenting on people giving them powers.
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At first I thought the intimidating was from Dean, but now I’m not sure. And it seems like Mateo was killed…. That is not good.
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Beautiful setup to a great friendship. Matt is loud and friendly, Kitt is quiet, but loving the attention. The both need a good friend.
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Interesting beginning. Both men hiding something, one seeming on the run away from someone the other living a solitary life on purpose.
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Chapter 4: Hidden Desires (Jonas)
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 4: Hidden Desires (Jonas)
Jonas took a leap and was rewarded. And that just the beginning. -
I knew they could use their powers together, was surprised when the light and shadow combined into matter. Loved this book. Can’t wait for the next one.
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This looks to be an intriguing book. Looking forward to the mystery.
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Welcome back. I love this story, it just keeps getting better. The intrigue, the belief in control, that really isn’t there any longer. The American Clan is strong, and with Tala in control things are changing rapidly.
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Chapter 3: Rising Curiosity (Jeff)
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 3: Rising Curiosity (Jeff)
A little more revealing today, this is a slow burn. Just feeling out each other in terms of what they like. -
Yano could track where the order came from. Miller is going to be in deep stuff…Will is such a natural leader, one on one Trump is toast.
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Great battle, it seems like Fenn needs to learn some more control, like moving two or more objects simultaneously. Killing one person at a time is slow going. Effective but slow. The lessons of helping, and seeming fine motor control moving things by their shadows, like chopping wood could be used on people, tearing them apart. He did use that control to save Ain.
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"Will It Always Be Like This?"
VBlew commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Will It Always Be Like This?"
What a beautiful ending, two things especially stood out, Luca’s letter. Liam had done amazing work to make it safe for child actors to be protected. And Hudson buying the place they first met, and taking Liam there for the memories of their first meeting.- 26 comments
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Beautiful ending. Great short story.
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Yes, finally. Leo had to take the lead.
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Chapter 17: Summer of Jaedan
VBlew commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 17: Summer of Jaedan
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Chapter 4 - Finding Home
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Finding Home
They built a great friendship. They love each other, but decided to be best friends rather than be romantic partners. Now on to their next chapter. Beyond university.
