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Loved this chapter, what a delight after all of the drama of the last few. I was laughing out loud at Henry. Timmy took his bravery and got his sweetheart out on the ice. Methinks the plan to smear the reputation of the Harding men is not going to go anywhere… if the townsfolk had no problem with the boys kissing on the ice today.
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Brandon seems to be taking more care of Jody. Even though it was his initial warning not to fall in love, it seems like feelings are growing.
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Great ending. Now they can be together for as long as they want.
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Finally Killian has someone who can possibly help him with his gifts. Both Jacy and Fletcher, even though Jacy is the only one who offered so far.
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So much going on. Jesse is proving he can get things done. Now hat he’s doing it for his family, it’s different than doing it for Monica. Shaun had a bad day. So if it was just a karma thing, that was a fast response by the universe. He still thinks he needs to hide in the closet. The Hispanic crew had his back when they saw what was happening.
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Lovely banter, Jack reads the cards, and gets kissed.
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So sad that Ace doesn’t feel like he deserves to have a relationship with Leo.
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This was a great school project, and they helped Caleb’s dads find a shortage in their production. They keep finding mysteries to solve.
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Great ending to this story.
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Lovely ending. This was my first story of yours about realms. Will need to look for others.
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Chapter 10: Peak Coaching (Jonas)
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 10: Peak Coaching (Jonas)
Great story, loved the growth in both men instruction can be very good. Great place to end it as well. -
Interesting introduction to a new character.
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Now that ending of the chapter was an interesting twist.
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Chapter 7: Afterglow and Aftermath
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 7: Afterglow and Aftermath
Loved the honest conversation. They both like each other a lot. And this doesn’t seem like a rebound. More like a finally being honest with yourself moving to what’s right relationship. -
Ain was very lucky finding Fenn, just a little later or a different direction and he may not have. They need to discuss what happened and devise a plan in case someone tries capturing them in the future. Niven will be interrogated to find out about how he got his powers and the location of the laboratory.
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Very structured time. I really enjoyed the scene, and had to laugh at the rom-com ending with the father coming in, and the children coming back. Right after everything had been put away.
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The Holiday: More snapshots & the return
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The Holiday: More snapshots & the return
Great ending to the holiday trip. -
Wow. Just Wow. Amazing chapter. And a huge cliffhanger.
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Fenn didn’t notice the dart until it was too late. Now a captive, hopefully he figures out a way to become a shadow without getting tortured.
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Wow, Will was in amazing form, and having the last was brilliant. Now on to the election.
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Matt was brave enough to admit what he was feeling and that reopened their relationship. Kitt’s home life seems pretty miserable.
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Was Darryl a target for elimination from his own agency or did the data exchange get compromised?
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Love the mysterious beginning. Seems like they work for clandestine agencies, which could put them both at risk for a personal relationship.
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Little B whipped up a tornado inside the room, after he got Shiloh away. CC was awesome toying with the Keller Brothers. No longer a problem. Noah and Shiloh are back together.
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Frosted Hearts: The Truth Is Right There
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Truth Is Right There
Michael got his comeuppance, Five was not putting up with any more BS from him. Percy got called on his relationship, and then after the crew left, he and Five actually had a good conversation about their feelings and the other involved party. The mystery of who has been spying on them is interesting. Time to change the security codes.
