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The necklace was the key, why was Tom so compliant in this, was it guilt or just a game? Did Brandon have that much control? Ledger freed himself, to join Marcus. Very dark… Is Brandon just pretending with the girlfriend? Very sick puppy. It just brings up, what happened to send him to this kind of darkness?
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Wow, did not see that coming. The 4 guys seemed to be getting along really well. If the Escalade belonged to Tom, nobody so far has seen the face inside. The fact that it seems to be stalking both Marcus and Nicholas is very suspicious. This is a crazy twist.
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So much love and tenderness. Then some fun wake up tickles. And a surprise is revealed.
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So much ticklish fun in this chapter. And an awesome surprise for the guys. Hope the cottage is exactly what they want to move closer to family.
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Fun playtime, then a coincidence of meeting at the same place to pick up pies… that near miss on the highway was a wake up call to stay alert.
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These guys are so in love. The presents are amazing, a teddy bear necklace, and a unicorn. Each crafted just for the receiver. Looking forward to more with these guys.
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This ties the two stories together, but the time jump is huge. Glad to know Thomas and Brandon are still together and doing good work in the community. And Roger was not killed by the mob. Family is really the one we make.
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Amazing writing. We get a glimpse into his relationship with his father, and his growth into possible understanding of his father’s tortured life.
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From this inner dialogue of Carlos, he wasn’t the killer, but may have supplied the drugs that killed him?
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Have Fun, Jacques… But Use Protection
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Have Fun, Jacques… But Use Protection
The mystery continues, at least Solomon put the friends off thinking anything more than this was just something Jacques had arranged. -
Fun short story, perfect for this holiday.
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Chapter 18 - Wedding Vows and Speeches
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Wedding Vows and Speeches
The vows, and then the toasts are simply amazing, the reflection of the lives well lived. Beautiful. -
Sometimes the flashback help get people to just hang on to the hope for a better future. Great chapter.
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Friends rally around for support, Mickey’s mother is awesome, At least Drew has his sister on his side, and the reply about the financial manipulation was dead on. They can make their own way in the world as needed. Hopefully the paparazzi will back off soon. It was like someone “Dave” tipped them off about Mickey.
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Interesting chapter. I especially liked the trip to the beach with Cior. Hard to imagine how tall the waves must be to make that much noise, and the perspective that they are somehow held back by the moon. Also that the moon has so much pull that it open the seabed for 10 days. That is a huge low tide… Cior was very interested in the relationship between Callum and Rym. Maybe he would like a mate relationship like that for himself? The journey begins.
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The sparrow conversation, put some fear in Emmet, hopefully he will be able to explain why he ran later on… they guys did seem to be having a good day even it a little stilted in the conversation. You can see how much Finley is trying.
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Finally the truth is out. Dave is a jerk for putting that confidential material out in public, but maybe it will be a help in the end. Will be interesting to see what the family’s response will be. Fortunately Drew is an adult and can’t be forced to conversion therapy program. With Mickey beside him, they will get through this.
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Looking forward to the story within this world you are building.
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Good background on the territory and terrain, and a little history of the political landscape.
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Good for Pawn. Now maybe he’ll get some respect.
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Mickey could only put up with so much belligerent behavior from Dave, then when he was attacked fought back and knocked Dave out, which he deserved. Then that soul opening talk with Drew on the bench, wow. Letting out all of the trauma he faced and how he got the scars. The request of Drew to not drink, was special, then the reaction seen by the neighbor emptying out his liquor supply, and crying. Drew was really touched. Seems like Drew has fallen in love, and is slowly coming to terms with that.
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Interesting story of how Reginald came to have this divine gift. Does he still have the amulet? Or did it just unlock this ability? He is loved by Alexander and Omar.
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Loved the visit by Gordy. Had to verbalize the words to get it understood. Interesting way to write the Scottish accent.
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Sure, Lucas you’re in control. With Ethan having the key to your manhood. I think you have that backwards… very interesting story.
