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Chapter Chapter Twenty-Three
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Chapter Twenty-Three
Great chapter, Rory is accepted by the Euphon, has a vision and is told it will take them all working together. Ash is going to wear down Desmond, they will be a great couple. Love the joint kings idea… the homophobia has to go… on to dinner, crowning ceremonies in both kingdoms… -
Blake seems like he may be a predator, and definitely doesn’t want anyone playing with a new toy before he has his chance. The boss employee relationship is headed right for a sexual harassment case…
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Love that Tony is thinking of Adam and their business and for sure moving back to Thompsonville. Not sure about Randy Thompson for the pen name, could be a bit close to home for the Thompson family the town is named after… Adam was very helpful, and once he recognized Tony was overjoyed. He may need an invite to the party??
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Loving the ticklish superheroes.
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Chapter 2 - New Friends
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 2 - New Friends
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Act II - The Bitch Is Back
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - The Bitch Is Back
That was a big cliffhanger. What is Mother, if she was not a wolf from the inter species breeding options? Ray now know that his presence can lead others who touch him to possibly start to shift. That means he could be used as a weapon… So much more to learn. -
Loving the relationship development, and they happen to be living in a gay friendly area, so hopefully that will help too.
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There Is No Other Place I Wanna Be
VBlew commented on Bry Bryant's story chapter in There Is No Other Place I Wanna Be
Damn, after waiting so long to talk with Greg, Bry finds he may just be too late. -
Beautiful chapter blending all of the religions in the household. What is Tankiso’s religion? Buddhist?
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This inner dialogue of doubt is hard. He at least needs to talk with Jon about what he’s feeling, if he won’t be honest with his son…
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Well handled, Aiden arrived in time and was able to get Will professional help right away. There is true caring there.
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Love the ending. Wonderful how all of their lives intersected.
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Lovely chapter. I was thinking Matt could be the minder, but maybe Vince is a better option, lawyer and all helping negotiate things. The piano is a huge success. This cult is something that definitely needs to be looked into.
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Interesting chapter, wonder what’s happening with his father?
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Is Klaus a white wolf? And a psychic? He is a sword fighter instructor, I gather. Very interesting chapter, with the three musketeers together.
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The setup for taking Jamie to see Luca’s film project was perfect. The reaction to seeing himself as the subject of the film, then the emotional unfolding afterwards, brilliantly done. So much in this chapter. Jamie is seen and loved.
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Terrific chapter, will finally comes out and it’s not pretty. At least he already he’d move out of his parents house, or would likely have been kicked out, or worse kidnapped to a “counseling” camp… Joey really was not a friend, seems like he liked the attention, but when it came to his “best” friend he turns into even more of a homophobic asshole. Fortunately he has Aiden and Laura as friends. This is all leading up to murder…
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Interesting ending to this part of the story.
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Part One: I Have A Bigger Secret
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: I Have A Bigger Secret
So Matt has more “queer” friends, even a best friend since high school, who looks very familiar to Brandon. Why was Matt so insistent that Jesse know Tyler was Brandon’s boyfriend? I sense a red herring here with an implication that Jesse is Tyler’s “Old Man” Brandon gets a job with Matt. The whole scene with Ashley was hilarious. Brandon is taking his relationship status seriously, refusing to do anything with Ryan, even to the point of getting hurt. -
Walter looks like he is going to make it. Will this life changing event have him come out? Who else did Mr. Sampson want dead? 4 people? This Wolf is going to get caught. Micah’s time as boy ended. He was a hero.
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Ray gets trotted all around by a very proud Gabriel. The change back to human form now accomplished their Mate desire for each other is full on. Seems like some pleasure is coming up.
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Scarlet deserves the evil one in her. Now with a nights rest, the Queen is back, Lachlan’s death didn’t kill her too, was it because their bon was so weak and he had married Scarlet? On with the Fae elders to the lake to crown Rory.
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Luca is helping Jamie let his light shine in the world, getting him out into an artistic community where he can see more potential in himself. Love the development of their relationship. They both like watching the other sleeping. Jamie just captured his impression on paper.
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Chapter 7: Gael and Ian are in a game of chess. Who will win?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Gael and Ian are in a game of chess. Who will win?
So this is a huge redemption from the last chapter…. Who is Gael’s secret partner? Alex? He just destroyed two families with one move. -
Will finally admitted out loud that he’s figuring out his attraction. Nikki sees talent in his work and shows him what good framing can do, and he’s surprised. Seem like living away from his parents is a good thing. Aiden is very good for him as well.
