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Soren keeps running into unintended consequences. He is so naive and the people around him are not informing him of what may happen with some things, that are really important.
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Will be interesting to see what the scientist discovers about these green parasites…. Are they just controlling the orx brains or are they changing the orx so they are no longer food?
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I knew Chandler would push him…. Still took a lot of pushing himself. Now that we’re through that drama. On with the story…
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Wow, probably now the father of twin girls who were abused and saw their mother kill her boyfriend…. That is going to need therapy for sure. And a loving parent or parents.
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Kai had asked for a quick response and was getting really agitated when it did not come before he was moved. Seems like the package of cigars, photos and updates in the letter satisfied him, making him laugh. He won’t be the one fixing the jetty, but he does appreciate all of the work being done. Especially likes that the bedroom Adam is in, was his room too. Maybe someplace to come home to?
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@Cane23 I think it was back in the first chapter, someone he thought was a friend, tricked him and sold him. This chapter with Andrew’s father helping him through the trauma is fantastic. Matt’s current situation has him as a slave, being well fed and trained to increase his muscles. It’s a sad place, but it could be much worse. Hopefully he will grow and develop a mental toughness to this environment. Then be ready to escape when he can.
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I like the history lesson, and especially this Compact. Humans at the top, of course, but it recognized all human relationships…. Very nice. Even extended to whatever other worlds they encounter. Love the tentativeness of this blossoming relationship.
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A lot happened in this chapter. Julia getting settled in with the boys. Oscar seems standoffish with Julia. Not that I would blame him with she way she left him before. Then the strange video call, and the “accident” with the grands, was it really? Oscar has good friends looking out for him, and dis sign up for using this place as a secure site, maybe he’s just getting overwhelmed.
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From Groupie To Roadie/Lover?
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in From Groupie To Roadie/Lover?
Started out really nice with Eric taking care of Kevin, then the work, and with having to load the truck, Kevin finished late. Seems like with him being new, there was not good communication about where he was staying… what is in the note?? Hopefully something to clear things up?- 29 comments
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Seems this ship has original Earth engines, which are better than the ones built on planet. And they had to adapt sonar tech after not being able to maintain some more advanced tech for searching below the surface. It is interesting that the orx are air breathing beings, and may be more intelligent than initially considered. There was a Star Trek movie with whales communicating with humans showing that they were very intelligent. Even thinking about the current research into marine mammals, they have very complex speech. Love the growing relationship between Nico and Jem they both seem to be attracted to each other. It’s nice they are building a friendship first. Jem’s idea of protecting the deck seems like something good to do, and was acted on right away.
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Geron, looks like another amazing world that you’ve created here. Looking forward to the adventure.
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So glad to see this chapter. These guys obviously care for each other and for Jeha bringing Axel yo meet his mother would be a good thing in many ways. He just needs to reach out and ask.
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Alex forgives Blair and they are back to being friends. And as much as Alex doesn’t want to admit it his brother really cares about him, and does have a clue about what neither of the guys are yet to admit to each other.
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Zain is loved by both Hadrian and Garth. What will Raad decide about his brother? Garth will find the video and show it was self defense. Bullies come from Bullies typically, the parents need to learn a lesson too. Did Raad help Fleur gain some clarity about Elliott who is still in love with her, but inept at expressing himself? great chapter.
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Amazing ending. Thanks for this story of a love that lasted a lifetime. And continues in the next generation.
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So this reinsertion of Julia into Oscar’s life will be interesting, especially since she had appeared to have jus abandoned him earlier. Was she coerced int this other relationship or was there something she just did not want to continue with him? He never got a response after she disappeared. And the fact that she had his children is very troubling. Hopefully this will be cleared up soon. Especially since they will be in protective housing at Oscar’s place.
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Pictures and a dog, all waiting for Kai to come home too. Adam really put in the efforts with the photos. And the letter, so vulnerable. It’s even motivating Kai in his physical therapy.
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Jamie is getting cock blocked by this inspector. Are they part of express or something else. Are the wanting to be in a relationship with Jamie? Strange way to approach it. The multiple Mitch band is interesting. Is this at the same time as Rusty and Matty’s time at Sunny Hill? I thought they graduated and moved away, but could be wrong about the moving….
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Kevin having to give a BJ to get close to the stage the last night before he gets pulled int Roadie duty. The connection with the other band members grows quickly. Then being asked to go back to the hotel with them. Seems his following this dream is turning out ok. Looking forward to where this goes.
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Jacob choosing not to find out who his parents were with his memories removed. Seems like a tragedy for all the efforts they went through to save him. Who opened the portal and pushed him through?
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A better day for Brandon. Beach and naked surfers…
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Kai’s reply letter with a photo, wants t know more about this man who replied to the letter to his father, and is now living in the home he grew up in. Lovely depiction of the house and the rooms, the floor plan helps.
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Great ending to this entertaining story.
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Interesting start to this story. Looking forward to where this goes. It seems they are all looking out for each other.
