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Wow, They were all so devastated by the loss of Zac, even Soullen’s power was not enough, it took Jacob asking Q to bring him back. Then Q did something amazing. Will he be the same when he recovers? What did he have to give up for this miracle? Will it change something in the fundamental reality of the Skai/Nave relationship? Even if Zac is now Nave? So many questions.
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So much emotion in this chapter, Charlie and Adams friendship, living together, learning all Charlie was involved in, then his death. And a new life for Adam to start living fully.
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Chapter 14 – The Final Chapter
VBlew commented on Inkognito's story chapter in Chapter 14 – The Final Chapter
Wow, heartfelt chapter. Vampires don’t typically die, unless killed, so this world is a little different. The loss of their friend and mentor was conveyed very well. -
S2 E6: "You’re Not Going Anywhere"
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E6: "You’re Not Going Anywhere"
This chapter really has me thinking that Dylan wants a relationship with Troy. He was upset seeing Troy with someone else. He certainly surprised Troy by showing up in Paris unannounced. But he needs to make his intentions very clear, not just in bed. -
This is a wonderful end to his time in NC and time ti go back to NY to be with his family.
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Very interesting. So Zeke, is the king reborn, but how did he get to earth?
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What's going on with Dillian?
VBlew commented on garfwiz's story chapter in What's going on with Dillian?
It’s all coming to a head. Great chapter. Tala’s power is much greater that his grandfather had any clue about. -
So Justin takes a chance and meets “Alex”/Wolf… is he ashamed of his relationship with Alarik now? Staying out of view for Wolf to se him on their dinner night? Very interesting turn.
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Nick is a true friend. Jack has some anger management issues, but thankfully seems ok now. The cuddles are probably more support than he’s had in years. Hope this group can include him more.
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Beautiful chapter, Kurt’s heartfelt speech, The Mayor doing a great job of keeping it short, and welcoming new citizens. Tony was a bit surprised by the whole thing.
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Uncle Charlie is a saint…. Adam now has good friends, and is moving on with his life. Eve is an evil bitch.
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Chapter 1: An Unscheduled Arrival
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 1: An Unscheduled Arrival
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Beautiful short story.
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So the coach is interested, and after they’re no longer students, tha woul relieve him of an authority position…. Open for some fun… but he is married, right?
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There Is Always an Easy Way Out
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in There Is Always an Easy Way Out
Great chapter, but I do have to wonder what this missing brother is going to be like. Seems like Bella didn’t want him there as much as she didn’t like Lyn, maybe vying for Brad’s attention? -
We learned from Seth’s POV that the thumb drive was his.. will he tell Adam about that later on after they reconnect? Adam had a miserable life, but had two great sons from this failed marriage.
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Interesting chapter, Zeke waking up in strange surroundings. Magical storytelling pictographs?? Looking forward to the history lesson.
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Venetia returns & Gray talks
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Venetia returns & Gray talks
The reading/show went well. Loved the after party. Graham and Matt finally get naked in a bed… wonderful chapter, even with the witch making an appearance. -
Seems like Josh may be tied to Cerberus somehow… very interesting chapter, he is also recovering at greater than human speed…was he a special project?
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The Things We Can Never Take Back
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Things We Can Never Take Back
Hearst needs to work quickly. He won’t be bunny boy for much longer. Maybe showing his face and a sincere apology would do them both good. -
Epilogue - Dorjin's Spell
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Epilogue - Dorjin's Spell
The brutal ending of the invaders who killed so many good Earthians. What happens on NextWorld? They will have the knowledge of the humans and possibly still have magic? This was an amazing adventurous story. -
Yes… Kieran finally put the clues together and found the traitor. The trials are complete and Rory has strength again, their daughter is protected. Now on to the right for their kingdoms. Was sad to hear that the prior king, Garran’s love was tortured and killed.
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I thought I was in a completely different story, until it started to come together. The biometric key was something Josh was trying to save when he crawled out of the car. So many questions.
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No longer a virgin. They still are just beginning their sexual exploration. Hot scene.
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So in this new time, he’s captured with a very interesting kink suit, led to the chief, and a very interesting interrogation 😉 Was this marking from his boss on earth? That is connecting him to this god.
