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  1. This is a very sweet story. I usually loose interest in romantic stories but this one kept me cruios and guessing until the end.
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    The Lady in the Flames It was December and very cold by Los Angeles standards but that did not dampen the spirits at Transcendent Touch Inc. The company had started with only one product, a basic photo retouching software for casual photographers. As it gained popularity the company branched out to video and sound editing eventually creating a suite of programs that could do some remarkable editing and special effects without much of a learning curve. The software had become so popular th
  3. Nothing good comes from taking a sick day one week into a new job. Add a car accident and a case of mistaken identity and you have an adventure...what could be more romantic.
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    Thanks! Don't worry about being late. I read most of the stories after Christmas too.
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    Thanks!
  6. I hope you feel better soon.
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    A very pleasant description of an unconventional relationship…Normally I stay away from the more erotic stories but this one kept my interest until the end.
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    I love the ending! I was sure the story would be mostly about the students until the last few lines.
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    Beautifully written! I could clearly imagine the scene at the Yule celebration.
  10. Happy New Year!!!
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    Great story! I was surprised when Morgan showed up at Wil's place. I thought Will would have to wait until New Years.
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    A very sweet story! It was a real pleasure to read.
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    I love this story! The subject was certainly sad but there was so much hope too. I was pleasantly surprised by the happy ending after both the human characters had died.
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    Very sweet! This was a great Christmas present.
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    Some how I did not expect science fiction elements in a Christmas story. It does feel like it should have a sequel or maybe a prequel that goes into more detail.
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    I loved this story. The dialogue was great! I hope you write something for Valentine's Day.
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    Great story! I thought they would never get together until L got to the end.
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    What an ending! I can't help wondering if Santa actually died. In all the years I'm sure he has had his share of bad landings, roof collapses, not to mention narrow chimneys. What are the odds that a bullet would stop him?
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    Beautiful story. I love your characters, especially the grandfather.
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    I never heard of this tradition before. It sound like fun…even the goat kissing part.
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    This story kept me on edge. I kept wondering if he would wind up in jail at the end. There were some great lighter moments though like the part about sand getting everywhere.
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    Thank you. Christmas usually does not live up to my expectations but its too much fun imagining what it could be to give up on the holiday.
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    A agree. If I would get everything I asked for I would have some serious problems. (I'm sure it would not be easy to find a new home for a fire breathing dragon. Luckily Santa did not have one in stock that year.)
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    Thanks!
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    Thanks! Sometimes what we tell our family members takes a while to sink in. When they finally get it you almost if they are alright. I've been on both ends of that situation many times.
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