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Very Poignant---"Life goes on but the ache in your heart never goes away. In some ways, I was lucky. GG would give me glances of these loved ones and I knew they were happy" Very Ominous--"I decided if Colin was taken from me, I would find a way to join him." I hope Armand regains his composure and love of life.
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You left us with a portentous future that seems defining for the "Realm." The four could be key, surprising fighters. We should keep this in mind. I expect the upcoming confrontation will be epic and defining. “My best guess is that it has something to do with what Rosalie said about Kage being Elijah’s Guardian. It seems like he, or rather his energy, has brought the rest of you under his wing. I don’t recall the exact details, but I do know that Guardians exist to protect those who are important to the Realm.” Elijah wasn’t sure what to make of that revelation. He didn’t consider himself anyone special and didn’t see why he, his mate, and his friends would be any different. “This has to be related to Huntington,” Reilly surmised. “Everyone knows a confrontation is inevitable. It’s only a matter of time
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You could end the story here-----The cloud of chaos has left his life. Seth found his father and they talked honestly and so much became clearer and more loving. Seth was accepted and his friend were accepted. His dad is great and very supportive, He has a second family and they like Seth. Seth's mother will no longer rule him absolutely.
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Great mating and running scenes. The four are now connected in special ways. Kage is protecting them and they are now shadow shifters. Sebastian thinks this will be useful when they eventually find and fight Huntington. Elijah wants revenge for Kage's death. So, now a huge confrontation is next. Sebastian and crew will be preparing,
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In the end, Owain and Mhairi inherited a substantial amount from their grandfather and grandmother. Their father kept them in the dark and had delayed with a legal friend the provisions of the will to not be paid at age 21, but till his death, Owain is 38 now. Both siblings were incensed at the action of their dad. Money had been tight and it could have helped out.They may have to wait a year for the legal matters to be settled and any money to be paid. Mhairi and Owain are working things out with each other. The met joe, Mhairi teenage son. He was clued in. Owain met Joe's girlfriend, but was not impressed. Can Owain live well at his old hometown? He has to slow his life down. His health requires it. He needs to fix up his place and it will take time. He wants to find a real boyfriend. These are ambitious goals.
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Bekett found the star, Valrinda and his magic. Now he needs to get away and take the star back. What then? Valrinda explained his power and Beckett thought he understood.“So you’re saying because you believed I’d find the path and the star, I did? And because I believed I could use fire magic hot enough to match the lightning, I just could? No other reason or logic?”
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Thank you, Roland. I will be looking forward to the additions to both stories. There is so much potential.
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drpaladin I guess we will find out when and if magic users can see the true forms of Garnet and Xavier. So far no one has seen Garnet's true form,
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Maybe enough have read it elsewhere to not want to read the same thing again? As for me, the story is compelling, and I like the chance to add comments. I am also hoping the story moves beyond the former text.
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Wonderfully appropriate--Randy turned and the story was published on Halloween. What a memorable, warming and affirming experience well told. Randy has shifted with the support of his pack and lovers, Trevor and Skyler. His alpha's were present. Randy had a great run and his first kill. He is a happy brown wolf. All seems great !
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So.\, Simon might return to the living. A golem was sent to retrieve him from the middle. But, first he will be tested. He is told....“Inside, you will find your greatest adversary and you will have to face it alone.” Let us hope he survives. He might find Yidian.
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I appreciate how carefully the story of those from Seandra is unfolding. They are learning to adapt and have found out how much they stand out and how they must adjust to not attract attention, if they really can. It is not just they are royalty with unheard of powerful weapons and uncommonly skilled fighters, it is that they are children as Lew notes. They are shocking those around them . Garnet successfully changed into his true dragon form so he could best protect Xavier. Lucas helped him. With the help of a magic ring he now maintains the illusion of an Illorc or Orakin as he was termed at the end of the chapter. He will surprise any serious attacker. In his new form, he accepted Aegir to be his student in preparation to be a spirit warrior. The ending scene in Thane's 2 story lodge is stunning. The art and wealth and lifestyle displayed was other worldly. I am looking forward to the questions from Mablin and the answers from Xavier. Mablin does not know what to make of Xavier. I doubt Xavier can truth away from Mablin for much longer.
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On Deities of Escaria, part 1
akascrubber commented on ObicanDecko's story chapter in On Deities of Escaria, part 1
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Let us see how our alchemist finds out about the venomous creatures and shifters. It sounds dangerous and he may leave the library. Will he find a colleague to help?
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Being very focused, the boys and girl with parents visited a new museum and viewed another disk that helped them decide where to see the solstice in a few days. I am impressed with their investigative and team work abilities. The historical background and substantial tour guide information is very helpful. The youths are set up to find out more critical data about the disks and the past. It could be path breaking and might even impress the sponsors who arrive shortly.
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Good for Toby. He found a gay friend with common interest in plants and ecology. They got to see older males act sexually in their workplace and accepted it a normal and still exciting. Who knows how they will act over time. Will they explore their common sexual interests? We will find out, I bet.
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Things are looking up. Seth has his first boyfriend. Randy came out as bi to his parents and they were very fine with it.
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What a touching story. Owain developed a few good friends who helped him when he needed it after his fundamentalist father threw him out for being gay. He went to college, worked hard, too hard and became ill. He has to slow done to live. He returned home to work for a part of his firm and has reconnected with his sister. She has divorced her pedophile husband and learned to become more independent thinking. Both siblings have to visit the lawyer tomorrow to hear the will read. Owain expects nothing and his sister very littles, The church should get most. But, a surprise might be in store. Something was mentioned about what was left by their grandfather who their father said died broke. Did he? Did their grandfather's estate own land which is now used by the new businesses and therefore is very valuable. Will the siblings' life turn around? I guess we will find out soon.
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This chapter has answered many of my questions an left a few open. The Danvers family is one not to cross. Some minor worried/issues--Greg has a man madly in love with him and he is ignorant of him. Will this hurt his effectiveness by letting emotion get in the way? What will his dad advise when he learns of Greg's new role. His dad can help him center Brady. Greg understands he has no choice and he is willing to take on an enormous life changing task for some years. In the end his family will be better off even if he has a strong possibility of dying in a terrible way far away from London. "In exchange for the things I’ll do for my country, my family will have a good life. And that is all I ask in the wake of my impending death. I took the contract and signed it." Greg will start living a complex and deadly fantasy soon. I am very much looking forward to reading the next installment when you are ready. Thank you for what you have written so far.
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So mystical and disorienting. Why is this process so familiar? Is this a good or bad thing? So, is he now living in the past after the plunge ? Or is he living through a past experience in order to become what he will transition into afterwards? Will Teo survive as a separate being and true fraternity brother to Novotny? I hope the next chapter brings clarity.
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On the chart for New Year’s Day, 1972, Stevens debuted with “Morning Has Broken,” an attractive version of the Christian hymn published in 1931, with lyrics by English writer Eleanor Farjeon to the Scottish Gaelic tune “Bunessan.” The new rendition featured the elegant piano playing of Yes keyboard wizard Rick Wakeman, and after opening at No.36, took just three weeks to give Cat his first UK Top 10 single since that “Matthew and Son” success of fully five years earlier. Morning Has Broken Song by Cat Stevens Morning has broken like the first morning Blackbird has spoken like the first bird Praise for the singing, praise for the morning Praise for them springing fresh from the world Sweet the rains new fall, sunlit from Heaven Like the first dewfall on the first grass Praise for the sweetness of the wet garden Sprung in completeness where His feet pass Mine is the sunlight, mine is the morning Born of the one light, Eden saw play Praise with elation, praise every morning God's recreation of the new day Morning has broken like the first morning Blackbird has spoken like the first bird Praise for the singing, praise for the morning Praise for them springing fresh from the world
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Nice place-Prince Harry lives nearby California has many high-class homes, I bet
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The March of the Wretched, Part 3
akascrubber commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The March of the Wretched, Part 3
Ed is deep in the thick of the war. Even as he faces danger he thinks still of Fran and turns down a man bought to aid his night. Edith is merciless and has a code that leaves the c common folk safe while she takes revenge on nobles. Fran is faced with a choice. Send the troops he commands to aid the Duke and received the title and land he prizes or send his men to aid Edith and face supreme danger, What risk will he take? I do not think it is an easy choice. Will he decide to join Ed and Edith or the Duke? His choice is momentous. He is writing ,,,,a" single written missive that would forever alter the course of Morish History." We do not know his decision. Next chapter will take us of the cliff. I hope he joins Ed, -
https://www.allrecipes.com/recipe/244929/lemon-meringue-cheesecake/ Lemon meringue cheesecake
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Cheesecake lust Subliminal expression and power--mm For some reason, I feel a need to visit the Cheesecake Factory for a piece of lemon cheesecake
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