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Well done, A complex, fascinating tale with interesting characters and a robust plot with amazing action with twists and turns and much violence and bold magic and confirming deep love. Thank you. These characters hopefully will live on in some form.
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Assume the Evensong meeting is trap and Travis's guards know Will is going to be present to take Travis away. They read and control his emails and text messages. Maybe they might set up a plan to shoot and kill Travis and Will and place the gun in Will's hands so he seen as the killer. They might assume Will is going to be alone and not able to protect himself. With the filed lawsuit Travis is no longer needed and could rat out his lawyer for acting without his permission Stef and Will are going to need security and armed men to handle the kidnappers. They could ask Jake or Lord Granger for a way to hire some ex-SAS guys to help them save Travis. They should be ready for a firefight and have an escape plan to flee London. They should update him on what has happened and find out if he authorized the lawsuit . I bet he did not . Travis still needs a safe haven until his birthday. Someone with a great amount of money is behind this plot. I doubt Fellowes is that wealthy to bid on Buck Industries. He must be really working for this person, not Travis. Fellowes might show up to bid on the company so the real source of the money is hidden. But, I bet man with the money will be in the room when the bids are made and Brad can figure out who is the backer by his looks and moves when Brad wins the bid.
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Wow--What a mess, but Will and his family are going to help Travis. Someone, possibly his lawyer, is trying to hold him hostage and maybe take over Buck Industries. They want Travis to be a pawn who loses. Brad is going to lead the bid for the company for Travis and smokeout who is the person behind the plot to against Travis Travis asked Will for help and gave him a location. They are developing a plan to save Travis and get him away from being arrested. I hope Will and Stef save Travis and his father buys Buck Industries, It will not be easy.The bad guys will not give up without a fight. Stef and Will should get serious protection.
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Interesting tale about Goober, drpaladin Andy Griffin played a good old boy in several roles. In fact, later in life he said he hated them and was politically left of center and looked down on country guys.
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Justin4Fun said 'Before this book ends, someone will die. Let the bookies begin...." Maybe, that is why this is called Re-birth And someone returns from the dead
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Things are not looking good at least in the short term I hope Rusty's mom wakes up. Rusty might get to see his dad as they discuss his mom's health. Is she due for nursing home care? Rusty is in no position to think about Matty or now telling him why he brought August, instead of him. He has to be thinking about his mom and his guilt. Matty is jealous and does not know why August was with Rusty. I hope he lets Rusty unwind and return to a better place in his mind before he gets too emotional and expresses his worry about August. They could exchange heated words and say things they will regret later. Maybe Jonathan and Maddox can play the conciliating role and try to calm things down when both guys have time to decompress. I hope so.
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I bet the three will be totally embarrassed when Scott opens the door to find them naked with Greg and Brian hugging. How do they explain that? Will Scott accept that they were innocently exploring? Will Scott get naked and join in and spend the night?
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Part Two. Chapter Four.
akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Four.
BTW--Kyan's blow job experience is even more extreme than the joke I was told by a straight guy. Why is the bride at the wedding smiling as she walks down the aisle ? Answer: She knows she has given her last blow job.- 98 comments
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Part Two. Chapter Four.
akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Four.
What a surprise ! The parents are paying for Kyan and the kids, not Perry. And they want to do it. Kyan and his in-laws had a serious, open conversation. He accepted their help and valued it without regret. Now, Kyan is able and willing to get very close to Perry and spend the nigt with him. He dream since he was 15 was fulfilled : his first blow job. His wife apparently did not give him one before or during their marriage. Perry gave him what turned out to be an amazing, soul touching, mind expanding blowjob. Kyan wants more from Perry. They are on track for the next step: saying they love each other.- 98 comments
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Wait till Jackie sees the choker. He will want Otis even more and lay a trap for him.
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Are we on a waystation on the road for more chaos or ????? Short term the situation is mostly uncertain. Blake looks like his home life will be calm. He is going to move in with Aunt Marie and Uncle Steve. Craig is being taken by an adult to meet his parents at his home. Seth may later go to his home tonight or in the next morning. We do not know how the parents will react. We know Stacy wants to kill Seth. Her overaction may cause her to lose the support of their mother Both boys are scared after being outed and want to run away. If they are rejected when they return home, I bet they will runaway.
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All's well that ends well. They are together at last. Henry finds Tomas and takes a great risk and asked that they bond. The ceremony was glorious and the follow on was astounding. Twn is protecting the plainsrunners and well loved by Henry Thank you for an interesting story which is follows a new path.
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Otis and Hudson are perfect for each other. Otis trusts Hudson and opens up to his desires and wears a choker. He seems so vulnerable and yearning. He strips and becomes naked as Hudson requests. Hudon takes pics of Otis that reveal his beauty and all of his body. Unlike the pics Hudson took earlier, this session was voluntary and encouraging. No one was hurt. Hudson tells Otis he is very handsome and appealing. The story ends with both kissing. I wonder what else they are going to do ? The photo session between Otis and Hudson was very descriptive and hot. I could feel myself being there. Heck, I want copies of the pics.
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Beckett lost in the city is found by the wisps. They think they have founded the star which is protected by magic. Beckett feels he needs Valrinda to fight magic. Is Becket being deceived by the wisps? Can he find his dragon? Is he really safe in the meantime?
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The trip was a success. People were reunited. Plans were laid. Arnaud found more love and Saint Michael. He died satisfied and at peace. Armand and Colin reached Arnaud in time to talk to him and comfort him. His son, Christian, was very pleased to see them. Armand and Colin took Christian's son with them to America. He is going to see Armand paint another angel and certainly be treated as a close family member. I think he will be thrilled. And the Italian children arrive soon so the lives here will be very busy and happy.
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It IS your story and plot Since I am following it, I should get a notice when you post
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I guess we will find out what the real secret in 3 weeks. Maybe they are vampire hunters or thralls or ?
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Several problems seem to melt away. They can be a couple. Jake and Greg are really getting along. They want to know each other better. Greg's wrestling friends like Scott and accepted them as a couple. They will support them socially and at school. Greg was surprised to find he had gay friends. Greg's dad met Scott and liked him and silently indicated he would love Greg no matter what. Greg felt supported and loved. One big issued remained. Scott's parents said they have a big secret and Greg needs to know. Scott begged off telling for three weeks so they can strengthen their relationship. Greg is willing to wait. These two are solid and loving. I bet Greg will stay with Scott when he told the secret. Since Scott is a vampire Greg will be shocked and need to know the ramifications and dispel and misconceptions
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This is better reading the second time around. Thanks BTW, Cub Scouts salute and promise with two fingers. Boy Scouts use three fingers--Eagle scout here. This story was published in 2018.Portland was famous as a laid back , progressive town with good coffee, craft beer and artisan food and restaurants. Portlandia on TV captured its vibe However,at this time downtown Portland has lots of homeless people , street crime and drug users who consume openly since drugs were legalized. Some businesses are closing and finding it hard to recruit in the downtown. The Oregon suburbs and nearby Vancouver WA--where I grew up-are growing
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Part Two. Chapter Three.
akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Three.
Mrsgnomie added 'Ok agree with you though, if he’s financially reliant on Perry, then how is this any different than Dayna? " I expect Perry will not keep Kyan isolated like Dayna and will help him develop friendships with others. Kyan will have a healthier outlook by not being isolated. Plus, they probably will have lots more great sex and eventually get closer emotionally and other ways. -
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akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Three.
I like the Jed option Mrsgnomie I think it might help Kyan gain self respect by helping to support himself in a way he can. Maybe Kyan and Perry can problem solve options and helping Jed remotely might come up. I hope Kyan can keep an open mind and accept more help. He is in a new world financially and romantically.- 118 comments
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Part Two. Chapter Three.
akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Three.
Thinking about Kyan making money and helping Perry--I wonder---is there some way Kyan with training can work from home helping out Perry--like making appointments, scheduling work, ordering supplies--all the backoffice services that support a business serving customers. Technology --cell phones, answering machines, computers, special software, Zoom calls, etc--can help Kyan and he might be able to schedule his day and allow for interruptions . The kids might try to help dad stay on task and be supportive. Many people work from home now.- 118 comments
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Part Two. Chapter Three.
akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Three.
Ok--Perry wanted to talk with Kyan and move beyond friends with benefits Finally ,Kyan looked at him around the pool and wanted to talk. His question was not about love or romance, but money. Perry has just speat a great deal buying shirts for the family. It must have started Kyan wondering how bad his financial situation was. Perry was supporting him and taking care of the money Kyan had from the insurance proceeds. Kyan suspects it has run out. It has. He is very broke. Perry is the one who keeps them going financially. What will Kyan say next? Will he close done or seek options? Perry should tell him he does not need to change anything and he will continue to help him. He cares deeply for him and the kids. Will Kyan start to think up a plan to get a make money from home ? Will he listen to Perry's suggestions and accept his continued support? Will he be open to moving in with Perry and be open to a more committed relationship ? This would be a very dramatic shift and might scare Kyan. Will Kyan freak out and get upset or be drawn closer to Perry who wants to be his rock?- 118 comments
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Part Two. Chapter Three.
akascrubber commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Three.
OK--the defining statement of this story.... Perry's mom said “Life is full of those kinds of dichotomies. Dayna’s happiness with Kyan meant you suffered a broken heart. You finally being with Kyan means Dayna is dead. Either way, being happy for one kid means being distraught for the other.”- 118 comments
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Wolner undoubtedly caused the riot and destruction of the parley. He wanted the citizens to fail in their reform plans. He will put a negative spin on the events and who was behind the disturbance. He wants to be the protector of the king and have the king value him. After the fighting and killing, the king will be very upset and likely mad. He will not look to those who sought him out for advice in the future and their demands for reform will be ignored. Reform will be stalled. It is not certain how long changes can be suppressed. The hopes of the people will be crushed Wolner will go after those who are connected to Stillingford. He will be brutal. Edward better be careful. He may have to flee this area with others
