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I do not hate either of them. I consider Travis weaker and by his horrible family life and more susceptible to manipulation. His career choice put in a place were drug use was common. He is more open to manipulation There will be a blow up. What happens afterwards to them is the real matter as I see it.
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I was a member of BSA Troo p 82 and loved camping. Although I earned my cooking merit badge, I was not a good cook. I later worked on the staff at a scout during high school . I am glad I did not meet a Chuck scoutmaster. I am very sorry I did not meet an Andy. These fantasy scout stories are fun. BTW, I loved canoeing, unlike Andy. Thank you.
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The Truth of the Prophecy
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Truth of the Prophecy
Theo ripped out the heart of the evil alpha and he commanded his pack to rise and they did. The Whiteflame pack has been restored Awesome action and result! -
You clearly reined in the speculation and what was, I think, helpfully considered some realism to solve Miles' situation. AI has enabled us to get information much easier. We can, with your statement, now understand that you are applying your artistic license to make the plot conform to your intent and timing.
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Chapter 26: The Confession
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 26: The Confession
Why do I feel very ominous things are going to happen, and the situation is going to get very unpleasant. -
Chapter 26: The Confession
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 26: The Confession
I appreciate seeing Andrew being formed into a new role that complements and selflessly protects Will to prevent the triumph of evil. He is going to do things in the dark that Will does and cannot know and so Will can move ahead confidently. -
Chapter 26: The Confession
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 26: The Confession
Lots of critical things are happening at specific times. It might get confusing. I can see lots of pressure forming from what is revealed and unexpected surprises disorienting the key people. Plans are going to fail, hopefully. There might be more deaths. We know Alistair survives to create his third son. Marcus is an obvious loose end. What is he going to do with the two boys? He could easily incur the anger of Andrew -
Chapter 26: The Confession
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 26: The Confession
BTW Nomarkmore Take it all Can also be found on YouTube --- -
Lucas smartly scared off the too macho Chuck who tried to bond with his Andy. I do not think Chuck will be back after sensing the intentions of Lucas. Lucas and Andy can have fun in the tent with ropes. Maybe Lucas will practice tying in private Andy up in various BDSM positions Poor Kyle is going to remain frustrated
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Chapter 26: The Confession
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 26: The Confession
Merrick is going to fail spectacularly, and Andrew is going to hurt him badly with Merrick's wife help. Andrew is going to destroy the sad , corrupted material in his safe. Will asserts..."I'm going to find his archive and burn it to the ground, and I will destroy everyone who touched it" Charles Levesque in turn will be furious when Merrick fails with his plot to control the law firm Tanaka has him keep silent about Dylan being controlled by Merrick and his death by crime goons. Merrick and Levesque do not know about the deaths and loss of faked material. Tanaka believed Will could be devastated if he learned he was used and made sick evidence in a cruel scheme. Andrew is going to protect Will. Is Andrew going to return to Will and comfort him as he handles his data loss and they learn Peter and Jason are missing? Andrew has more to do to save others. -
I am expecting Kendo to make his more aggressive sexual moves on Travis in the next chapter when Travis has him staying overnight. The blow jobs just began and excited his appetite for Travis. I bet their sexual tango will not turn out well after Travis recovers. Kendo is going set himself up for retribution and exquisite painful payback from Will
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I think it is normally best in life to be optimistic and not dwell on possible problems until they arise, but Miles could face complications, so he and Mr. Riggs need to be open minded and flexible enough to face any problems that arise head on. Mr. Riggs has contacted a lawyer so he wants professional help. Miles might need an understanding child welfare official and a helpful judge. I expect a legal decision will need to be made on the estate and the status of Miles.
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Well, Lucas is a far away from the Loki of Asgard who fights Thor in the Avenger movies, but Lucas definitely is a trickster with a great self-concept. Lucas did fool Esca so whatever he did actually won Andy to his polycule bed.
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The dad acted totally responsible and wanted nothing hidden. Morgan is now Miles from now on. The sheriff, a friend, would check on the Ohio situation. Miles would move into the house since he was 16 and Troy wanted him to share his bedroom. Miles would still work for the ranch. As it turns out, things Miles was not in trouble. His uncle's death was ruled an accident. There are legal matters to work through--settling his uncle's estate, reconnecting with Mile's inheritance and deciding the status of Miles as a 16 year old . He needs a guardian or foster parent. Mr Riggs is going back to Ohio with Miles. He is open to be his guardian and has contacted an Ohio lawyer. Things are up in the air. Hopefully, things go right for Miles and Troy and Mr Riggs
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Teenagers--got to love them! They both worked out their misunderstanding and realized they loved each other and were welcomed as a couple by their friends. Kisses sealed the deal. This was a delightful come to realize story with a wonderful, happy ending. Thank you
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So foolish--so effective--Lucas really is Loki--Esca was delightfully confused and saw what he wanted to see to conform to his twisted reality Now Lucas gets to have sex with Andy and things get more confusing--The werewolves will be so impressed with Lucas
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Chapter 25: The Scourging
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 25: The Scourging
The insults and hits and injuries do not stop. Right now we have learned of the destructive actions of two evil men. Both were not expected to be hurting people in Will's home . Will and Andrew are facing new, tough problems. The potential for shocking malevolent outcomes should scare us. Andrew is not flustered, He is going to be relentless and should get what he wants from Dylan. Will is going to face the loss of his HR merger file and the disappearance of Peter and Jason. Both challenges will severely test him. We is going to see how strong and effective Will can act under pressure. He is not going to panic, I bet. -
Chapter 25: The Scourging
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 25: The Scourging
What an intense situation and the disasters are not fully comprehended by Andrew or Will. Andrew only learned of one huge problem. Dylan had emptied files from Will's computer and then poured coffee on it to disguise what he had done. But someone saw him and told Andrew. Andrew assessed the terrible situation and is leaving to find Dylan to know why he did what he did, Dylan is in danger or experiencing Andrew's wraith. He wants Will to keep sleeping because when he finds out, he will be very worried. Andrew is going to interrogate Dylan to give Will a full report. I assume the vid Dylan did not send was a copy of a recording of Will and he having sex. Since he looks like Jason , it was meant for more evidence for Merrick. Neither will or Andrew knows Marcus is out on bail and that he has injured and kidnapped Peter and Jason. They should be in fear of their lives.No one knows yet they are missing. -
Parents Weekend, Book Three of Five
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book Three of Five
Matt is amazing. He finds a hot compatible guy and they both find ways to sexually satisfy each other. Matt blowing a hot, well built father at the crowded steakhouse was priceless. They were very pleased and may have got away without anyone noticing. However, Hayden night be suspicious. -
Part 8: Echoes and Excuses
akascrubber commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 8: Echoes and Excuses
The aftermath of their sexual play showed they both could not admit they really liked each other. Mattteo kept his distance which confused Adrian who began to feel Matteo thought he made a mistake. Adrian was still sexually attracted to Matteo. Matteo after trying to deny it realized he was also attracted to Adian. Neither one had a candid conversation. They misread each other and both felt uneasy It is going to come to a head soon. Jessica demanded he invite Adrian to her birthday party. She thinks Adrian was a sham BF intended to make her jealous. "....Invite everyone, including your boyfriend. Let's see how real you two are in front of an audience." What is going to happen? -
The band director is far away welcoming his new baby girl. He is so happy. Meanwhile Jake and Danny have released all their anger on each other. Danny will get a new roommate. Will their anger be contained or will they openly attack each other and hurt the band's training?
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Bravo--You cited the 12 points of the scout law which every good boy scout had to memorize in order to advance,
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Mark, you are directing me to read about the side effects of new drugs. I take several for my chronic conditions and can handle how they help me. My docs oversee me and guide my usage. This new drug Travis is taking without true medical advice scares me His new drug can induce --- drowsiness, dizziness, tiredness, and poor coordination or balance--plus trouble with memory, confusion, concentration difficulties, or depression. These last effects can place Travis in Kendo's hands.
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Travis crossed a line with Kendo by exchanging blow jobs with him in his bed. Ramon and Maria know Kendo is staying over so their closeness is not secret. Travis will not fuck with Kendo. He said it was a line he could not cross and he had promised Marie. He told Will was a good friend who had other male interests I do not think Kendo will give up on fucking. He is supplying drugs to Travis. He can manipulate him and Travis is weakening his sexual barriers. Travis had troubles with his drug mix and Kendo gave him a new pill that helped. He has yet to find out about later side effects. Will can tell Travis is lying when they talk on the phone. He realizes Kendo is around Travis more. I think Will needs to visit Travis. He might get very worried about the drugs Travis is taking. Travis is getting no negative feedback from his director who must be overlooking his drug use. Is this a Hollywood effect to accept the use if it helps the film production?
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The trip has so far has been one of great lows and highs, First Azula faced a series of black clothed assassins who were eventually killed. More were promised. Raith was surprised and impressed by Azula's ruthlessness. "His partner wasn't a fragile prize to be sheltered; he had turned into a hardened, brilliant blade. Second, Raith unexpectedly saw his two sisters embrace and really like Azula." Seeing his chosen lifelong partner, his consort-to-be, so effortlessly folded into the heart of his family filled a hollow space he hadn't realized still existed in his chest, and it warmed his heart as nothing ever could." The Basileus knows about Azula. He wants him protected from assassins and wants to meet the man who has won over the formidable Raith.
